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Welcome to thread Three of



When two people both rich and with huge attitudes come face-to-face than was is there to expect? Two people who think there names is enough for people to bow down to them, that keep encountering each other through fate, let alone fighting is nothing else you can expect from them. And their names are " Geet Handa" and " Maan Singh Khurana" although there is more than meets the eye. Geet Handa who may seem as very simple and innocent is not really so or is she? She doesn't believe in love and has a past that has influenced the person she is now. Maan Singh Khurana doesn't believe in love either, but once it happens he can't run away from it and neither can Geet. Join the fun journey of these two similar and yet different people and see what fate has in store?


CHaracter Sketch:

Geet Handa-

VS.

-24 years old

She is a rich and spoiled girl that attends college. She could kill the world with her beauty . She is completely breathtaking. She has a past, which has influenced the girl she is today. Her life consists of only having fun! Be it partying, drinking, or having one-night stands. She doesn't believe in love, but is with a different guy like every week. She has a step-mother who she could care less about, because she believes nobody could take the place of her mother Rani! Ever! She keeps a pretense of being a simple and innocent girl infront of her family wearing salwar kamizes and such, but in other places she is completely westernized. If you mess with her than get ready to handle her attitude. She will not go down without a fight.


Her group of Best friends consist of Meera, Pinky, Adi, Dev Khurana, and Vicky Khurana. They are closer to her than her own family. People she really cares about, but they don't know how her one-night stands. They do know she likes to party, drink, and spend time with guys, but don't know anything more than that.
Maan Singh Khurana:



-26 years old

He is also a rich guy with a big attitude. He has a very high and respectable name in society. which adds to his ego. He never completed finished college and got his MBA degree, only a semester was left. He had to leave his studies for personal reasons. He does not believe in love, which eventually starts to change when he meets Geet. He has never been with a girl before or has ever touched one. Nobody had ever caught his attention for that matter until he meets Geet. Although in the beginning their relationship is rough, nothing but fighting.
He is Dev Khurana and Vicky Khurana's older brother.
His family consists of his Father: Yash Singh Khurana
mother: Naina Singh Khurana
and Grandmother: Daadima


STORY SO FAR:


Geet Handa is very much a spoiled brat who fools people with her innocent look. Nobody ever tries to get in her way or come face to face with her! She knows which strings to pull to make them do whatever she wants. She especially knows what strings to pull from their hearts!

But i guess fate thought it was time she met someone with the same high ego and attitude. Someone who wouldn't back down from a face to face showdown with her! And that's exactly what happens. One morning Geet Handa finally meets Maan SIngh Khurana. It was a clash of titans! Maan singh khurana ruins her dress by accident, but Geet handa instead breaks the headlights of his car with her high heel shoes 🤣!!!

They keep on meeting and as well as having some crazy moments between each other there also was some intimate moments! Maan finally realizes he has fallen in love with his pagli, GEET!

Geet's father tells Geet that she has selected a guy for her to marry! She denies and says she doesn't want to get married!
SOme time later Geet misunderstands Maan! Especially when she finds out that Maan is the man her father wants to marry. She thinks Dev, her best friend as well as Maan's brother set her up to marry Maan.

She had warned Maan not to come close to her or else he would find himself in such a situation that he wouldn't even know where to escape! And that's why she thought it was time to get revenge and show the real GEET HANDA!!

She breaks his heart to pieces that night! Shows what it means to mess with Geet Handa. Maan was really hurt! He was drowning in the pain she gave to him! But he saw through her lies and now he is back to play and finish this game that Geet Handa has started!

He has come back to her life even though Geet thought he wouldn't be seeing the last of him anymore. But guess it looks like she is wrong. Maan is back and will make sure he gets what he has come for!!!







Part: 15

Bachna ai Haseeno

All of a sudden trumpet's start to play. He slowly turns around with a see through black shirt with most of the buttons all open showing his sensuous chest and abs.
The crowd goes wild seeing who was on the stage, and that too practically SHIRTLESS, except for one person .. . Geet Handa of course.
He looks right at Geet and gives her a wink before singing and dancing with rows of women on both sides of his body.



Geet just looked on with fat enlarged eyes out of shocked that he just did that!


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zac1oS0m_So[/YOUTUBE]
CLICK ON THIS SONG. . .

Maan sings:
tujhse log kahenge, na kar pyaar mujhe
people will say you that don't love me
main to lakh bura hu, neend chura lu hosh uda du
i am so bad that i will steal your sleep and will make your senses fly
main to baahon mein le ke, raah bhula du baat bana du
i will take you in arms and make you forget your way and make a thing with you
chahe jahaan dil ko chupaa
wherever you hide your heart
baaton hi baaton main, do mulaqaton mein le loon
in conversations, just in two meetings i will take it
He points his fingers as if shooting at first towards Geet as he sings,


(Imagine Ranbir as Maan )
"bachna ai haseeno lo main aa gaya"
save yourself of beauties, that i have come
But then he quickly moves it towards a Hot Girl on stage saying, " bachna ai haseeno lo main aa gaya".

Then he pulls her close and starts to dance with her singing,

"husn ka aashiq husn ka dushman
the lover of beauty, the enemy of beauty
apni ada hai yaaron se juda, hey, ho
i am different from everyone"
The lights turn off for like 3 seconds and when it comes back on maan is singing "bachna ai haseeno lo main aa gaya" but a different girl is in his arms now.
He dances with her for a little and then twirls her off to the side and then starts to dance with back up dancers behind him singing,
"yeah, baby when u see me comming, yeah
yeah u better run for cover, yeah
cos u know when i find u, yeah
yeah im gonna be your lover"


Vicky looks toward Geet and she was just fuming in anger. He couldn't control his laughter especially after seeing the expression on her face.
Then she looks at Vicky, and he shuts up seeing her give the death look.
Maan grabs a trumpet and starts to play it around a third Girl. Then he throws it too the side and starts to dance with all three girls as he sings,
aankhe churayegi bhi to milaunga
even if you hide your eyes then also i will meet you
ja ja kya bahaane banayegi, dekhunga dil phenkunga
whatever reasons you make, i will see, i will throw my heart
jhute mute vaade sunake fasaaunga
by giving some false promises i will make you fall in love with me
Then he slides against the stage floor right and was now facing Geet singing,

Imagine ranbir as Maan

"husn ka aashiq husn ka dushman
the lover of beauty, the enemy of beauty
apni ada hai yaaron se juda, hey, ho
i am different from everyone
He pulls out a red rose and comes toward Geet, for a second there she was spell bounded and reaches to take the flower, but he quickly moves to the right and hands it over to Naintara, Geet's enemy and rival in college.
Geet just stood their dumfounded, angry, and a little jealous, but she wasn't going to admit that to herself especially when Maan pulls Naintara onto the stage.
Maan makes a gesture toward her if she would like to dance with him. Naintara was on cloud nine and places her hand in his as an acceptance.
They start to dance with her twirling her around and touching places in her body that didn't go unnoticed by Geet. She just looked the other way in disgust, or was it jealousy? He finally dips her down and was a few inches from her lips and in his normal husky voice he says, " I have come to steal your heart. Let's see how you try to escape my charm. Bachna ai haseeno lo main aa gaya" before giving her a peck on her cheek and giving her his signature smirk.
Naintara was literally hyperventilating as she went back to her seat giving a Geet the look as if saying "he chose me! I am the hottest and best not you" look.
The whole audience was dumbstruck. How the heck was that Maan Singh Khurana up there on the stage? The girls were swooning over him, the guys jealous of him, the professors and college administrators shocked out of their minds that that is the same quiet and introvert Maan Singh Khurana they knew a couple years back. Since when did he take such a liking to Girls?
Geet just glared at him with bloodshot angry eyes. What the heck was he trying to do? What was he trying to prove to her?
Maan from the corner of his eyes could see her eyes shooting daggers at him, but he acted indifferent towards her like she didn't even exist.
Everyone clears the stage and places a chair for him. He goes and sits there and faces the crowd.
"kaise laga. . . " he says with a sexy smile knocking the breathe out of all the women present young and old.
The girls cheer for him. He chuckles a little. Geet just rolls her eyes.
Maan: If feels really good to be back in college.
Naam to sunahi hoga. If not let me remind you. Maan singh Khurana! The serious, full of attitude angry young man'haina girls?
The girls didn't say anything as if they were caught red handed. Some even blushed away.
He just smirks and his staff members who were present at the function wanted to faint as a matter of fact now. At first they were in shock, couldn't think or digest that, that was their boss up on stage. Now that they were out of shock, some felt like they would faint in any second.
Geet murmurs to herself: oh please! How about a desperate bas**** whose completely full of himself.
Maan: Anyways I am back here to complete my graduation and get my MBA degree, which I couldn't before due to personal reasons. I was in my final semester but had to leave midway.
You may think it is stupid since I am already successful and the biggest tycoon in India, but you could say that I have come to put a finish to something.
"In a way get was is mine" he says looking toward Geet for two seconds and then quickly moves his gaze away from her.
Maan: Anyways the college administrator's are glad to have me back and has kindly given me permission to set up an office atmosphere so I could get some of my work of Khurana Constructions done as well, if I was willing to allow seniors to experience what it is like to work in a business type atmosphere.
I gladly accepted. I am serious and very professional when it comes to work, so don't get too scared. I am not those boring types. I think I made a good first impression about that a few moments ago. I know some of you have that impression of me.
Again Geet just rolled her eyes.
College hai'banta hai to have fun, sing, dance, and fool around. I just showed u earlier, however don't forget you're here to graduate and get a degree.
Work with me and I will show you the beauty of both. In 1 hour I will be holding interviews for those who will be willing to work with me. And the best will be chosen. You will probably work for two or three hours a day.
Alright I am done talking here. See you all soon.
He get's off the stage and walks over to Naintara.
" I hope you will consider working with me" he says with a smirk.
" Please!Give me a break" Geet mutters.
Maan hears but doesn't even give her a second look and just passes her.
Maan: Dev. Vicky. Come out I need to talk to you.
They both say, " Okay bro" and follow him out.
Pinky and Meera totally mesmerized by him, " Hayyyeee".
Geet: Oh come on. Not you guys too.
Pinky: My heart is going DHAK DHAK. He is so HOT.
Meera: You are crazy Geet for not only rejecting him, but also breaking his heart.
Geet: I am crazy? He is crazy! For coming here! I know the real reason why he is back.
Meera: We can talk about this later, what happened when you talked to the professor?
All of a sudden Geet's heart skipped a beat. She had totally forgotten about what the professor had said. His words rang in her ear, " Once you go you will know what to do. I won't spoil the surprise for you". Ripples of shock ran through her veins.
Meera and Pinky all of a sudden got worried seeing the look she had on her face.
Meera: Are you okay?
Pinky: What happened Geet?
" The professor wants me to work with Maan or else he will fail me", she mutters still in shock.
" Geet" she hears someone call her from behind.
She turns around and sees it was her professor.
Professor: What are you waiting for, there is already a huge line forming outside of Mr. Khurana's office. You don't want to be late do you?
Geet gave a pleading look to him with her eyes as if saying, " Don't do this to me. Please".
Geet: Is this my only option? I can't do anything else? What if I don't get chosen?
Professor: Take it or leave it Miss Geet. I am trying to help you out here my giving you another opportunity. You have no option, but to get in. Do what you can to get in.
Geet controlled the venom in her voice as she says, " Theek hai" before walking away. Here she thought she would never see the last of him, but it looks like he wants to play.
Meera just looks at Pinky and start to laugh.
Pinky: Vicky and Dev weren't kidding.
Meera: Maan won't let you live in peace any more Geet. Looks like there is finally someone who can beat you at your own game.
Pinky and Meera both say at the same time, " Good luck Geet".



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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMGGG!!! WHAT A SHOCKING NEWS!
IM FIRST😲😲🤣
AFTER AGES! ROFL..🤣

chikni chameli for the new thread!
You rock as well as your FF
hope you get 100 more thread like this😆 and i hope i can
keep commenting with my emoticons..lol
coming to the teaser
kya mast teaser hai hayee
i cant wait to readd it ahh
looks awesomee
update soon jaani
i cant wait to see the fire between maan n geet hehe
zee
waiting for your update
muahh
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congrats Zee...wow sweety new thread.

waiting more action...i hope you remember kaisa wala...he he...

Update soon.
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just caught the FF at this point...now let nme go back to the earlier threads😃
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congrats for the new tread

waiting for the update
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Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu

congrats Zee...wow sweety new thread.

waiting more action...i hope you remember kaisa wala...he he...

Update soon.


hi vidu 🤗

hahahah yes i know what type of action u r waiting for 😉😆

but i can't promise any soon 😆


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sweety update de do na plz... meee waiting

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Originally posted by: maansee

sweety update de do na plz... meee waiting


I would give you an update but its half an hour passed midnight here in the U.S. So i am about to go to sleep.

will update soon though.😳
i didn't know u liked my stories this much. I feel flattered. 😳

what is ur name dear?


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congrats for the new thread zee

waise u posted this part again and shreya res my place again 😆

waitng for the update

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