'I see Right Through You'(Thd:4)Pt:33 Pg:45 feb 14 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK

Thank you thank you. . finally right !😆

yes i am much better than i was before ..thx for asking!

OMG i missed your long comments so much!!!eeeks, have such a huge smile on my face right now😳

You are very observant, and always find most if not all of the hints and pieces of the puzzle i have in an update.

It was a bittersweet moment for her when Maan was about to call her that name. It hurt yes, but this is what she wanted right.

The horseback riding scene, does give a hint to a dark past of Geet. Today i just gave a small glimpse, I will emphasis more of this in the later chapters.

The song tore through her. But those tears were somewhat forced. More emphasis on what's really going on inside Geet well be in the next update. . it will put a closure to a little of the mystery surrounding Geet.

No there is nothing to worry about really, The only reason why Maan said that was because Geet said that he was coming after him. Remember when Maan handcuffed her the first time and dragged her mercilessly. . she had threatened that she would finish him ...remember?? THat's why Maan said that. He is really angry and hurt. He really thought he was able to win a little bit of Geet over the night before. It is paining and suffocating him that it was all fake. . all a game.

Your right the tolerance of Maan is nearing it's brink. There is not much more he can take, before he does something he may regret.

This FF is nearing one of it's high points soon. . so definitely something to look forward to, as to where the relationship between Maan and Geet will stand.

Just wanted to ask how is this FF shaping?? Is it meeting up to your expectations?

I will try to update on the weekend 😳but it won't be as long as 4 chapters 😆 I did try to make up for it though ..