Galiyon ke jugnoo, Qaidi yahan ke

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Galiyon ke jugnoo
Anghan ke taarey

Suraj ki kirnein
Barasti thi hum pe

Na tha koi gham
Na ranjishon ka alam

Wakif na the hum dukh se
Na aankhein thee nam

Woh din bhi aagaya
Baharein chali gayi

Sab kho chuke the hum
Muskurahat bhi kho gayi

Kehte hain ghar kisse
Na tha jaanta koi

Ghar ban gaya makaan
Mera aaghosh tha sunsaan

Aansoo bhi khushk ho gaye
Saansein bhi ruk si gayeen

Yeh qaid hai anghan mera
Qaidi yahan ke jugnoo mere

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Wrote this in the bus and didn't edit so forgiveness
shall be granted for any mistakes😆

If you are confused: this poem is written from a woman's
perspective who is imprisoned after her entire family
has been killed in the war

Don't forget to comment😳

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OnlyHope

@OnlyHope

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Na tha koi gham
Na ranjishon ka alam

Wakif na the hum dukh se
Na aankhein thee nam

BEAUTIFUL!
I mean you know woh hota hai, sad wala beautiful...
And how true yaar..
Oh those days, jab dukh ka matlab tak nahi pata tha </3

Iqra, you've proved yourself once again my dear! 🤗
ILY [:">]

Edited by OnlyHope - 12 years ago

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely!

Beautiful work 😳

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Wicked

@SomeOldUser

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

Zindagi ek narm dhoop ki tarah
Mujhe chhoo kar chali gayi

Jo bahaar kabhi khilti thi dil mein mere
Ab woh bhi mujhe chhod chali gayi

Faasle itne badhe, dooriyaan itni badhi
Main soch na saka kab woh chaahat chali gayi

Ab to bas ek khaab hi hai, ek patthar ka makaan
Jo kabhi khushiyaan theen yahan, na jaan kahan woh chali gayi!