raya(update6-pg13)- ff finished!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
Read 2 parts in one go  Very nice please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
really very nice going...but thoda short lage stories...update soon waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Read 2 parts in one go  Very nice please continue soon


thnks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: veenasanugommul

really very nice going...but thoda short lage stories...update soon waiting...


thnk u
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey luvmjht
i tooo had a big fan of dat ...
hey dear readed both d parts in a go... n truly awsm... huhhh.. i want to kill dat ayesha.. stupid gal... waiting for d next update.. plzz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful ... pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 3
Ram : "Haar gaya hun aaj main priya..meri pihu mujhse alag ho gayi.."
ram sat up on the bed. Knowingly unknowingly still holding
priya's hand
Priya : "Aap kabhi nahi haar sakte Mr Kapoor coz i luv u
Ram : "jitna dard tumne aur tumhare pyaar ne mujhe diya hai nah ..utna dard kissi ne nahi diya mujhe priya...tum dubai main bahut taklif main rehti thi nah...but i m sure din bhar ki ye taklif ...tum pihu ki shakal dekhte hi bhul jaati hogi...butspare a thought abt me too.. kya tha mere paas ...tanhaee ...aur zindagi bhar ka dard. ... u noe how it feels jab apka baccha apko pehli baar papa ki jagah uncle bolta hai..
mujhse meri beti alag ki gayi . ..now legally too ...y !! tell me y priya ...nahi hai jawab ...then i will tell u God damit! It was bcoz meri beti ki maa selfish hai ...usse lagta hai sirf wahi pihu ko pyaar kar sakti hai ...uska father nahi... uski ma ka pyaar mamta ...aur father ka pyaar kuch bhi nahi...m i wrong priya ?"

Priya always knew Ram was hurt , but today aftr ram's outburst  she felt very guilty frm inside ... ram had nvr hurt priya .. priya had gone away frm ram for his benefit...but nothing justified her decision to separate pihu n ram. She luved ram n it was tym for her to mend the wounds she gave him.

P: "Apne sahi kaha ram, main jab pihu ko dekhti hun ...to sab bhul jaati hun...pata hai kyun!! kyunki us main apni beti ke saath mujhe aap bhi dikte ho ...har aadat apke hi jaisi hai ...wahi chal dhal ...wahi bolne ka tarika...aur wahi aaloo ka paratha...she is just ur carbon copy... itni choti si hai ..tab bhi meri taakat hai.lekin shayaad ye baat hum sab bhul gaye ki agar pihu se main pyaar karti hun ...toh main apse bhi utna hi pyaar karti hun...main pihu ko kabhi nahi apse alag karna chati thi ...aur aaj bhi nahi chati... Mr Kapor  AAJ SE PIHU SIRF AAPKI...PIHU KO BHI APNE PAPA KI UTNI HI ZAROORAT HAI , JITNI USKE PAPA KO USKI. "

Listening to the fact that Pihu will be with him, ram felt happy
Priya cont : "5saal pehle ...jab maine sabse alag jane ka faisla kiya... mere paas pihu nahi thi, tode i stndby my same decision...main sab ko chod ke fir jaa rahi hun...including pihu "Priya strtd crying miserably "I luv pihu..but i luv u too,Jo galti last tym ki, wo iss baar nahi karungi ... can u give me one last hug.. i luv pihu..but i luv u too"

Listening to the fact that priya will leave agn ram lost his cool
ram : "kya samajhti ho khud ko ...jab mann kiya aayogi ...jab mann kiya chali jayogi...no i will not give u one last hug" with that he pulled priya towrds him and hugged her. "I will hug u many more tyms...but nvr give the last hug "he cupped his hand around her face and kissed her on her forehead."main tumpe gussa karun..chikhun ...tum mere samne rahogi" A faint smile appeared on priya's face along with her teary eyes and she hugged ram. ram hugged her back. It was like they felt lyf aftr 5 years.they hugged each otr crying all the while.
Ram : "Priya ...i too luv pihu but i luv u too"
Suddenly in the background they heard sumone clap.
Person : "hmm...so ho gaya ram milan!!!"
to be cont...
Edited by luvumjht - 11 years ago
sreev12 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
waaw ... ram milan bht achchi hai! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sreev12

waaw ... ram milan bht achchi hai! 👏


thnk u :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shonuz_mom

nice update.continue soon


thnks :)