raya(update6-pg13)- ff finished!!! - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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u take ur time and update, but pls send me a PM so that I can get the notification
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sreev12

Good one ...waiting for the next update!

thnk u :) ...just finishing the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jineejiggs

u take ur time and update, but pls send me a PM so that I can get the notification


sure will notify u :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvumjht

thnk u :) ...just finishing the next update


great! can u pls send a PM when u post it?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowoowowowwo kya start hai yaar RaYa together in night but this Aye planning something disaster now just waiting for next to read what happen next... ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: leena04

wowoowowowwo kya start hai yaar RaYa together in night but this Aye planning something disaster now just waiting for next to read what happen next... ...



lol the part is not yet finished !!!!! will finish it in an hour or so
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2

awww Priys's emotions r so real loved the way she questioned Neha that showed whhat Mrs.Priya Ram Kapoor is... grrr this Aye mix up somthing in water batter she don't do something wrong... but seeing first part something else was actually happen... now moving read next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 3

ab yeh naya kabaab me hadddi kuan hai yaar... pissed off with all haddis... but loved how Priya give up Peehu to Ram... n Ram even don't want Priya to move away from him i want to hear this from Ram now... that is really nice loved it... waiting for next do update soon... & plz PM me next time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4
6 months had passed by the fateful night at the farm house. Yes Ram n priya were together forever but things were not the same anymore.

Pihu was sitting on her rocking chair. Moving to n fro she narrated the story of Rapunzel to her beloved person. Every day little pihu put a brave face infront of dis person becoz if she cried this person will be more upset. Pihu was small, but she never forgot what her mumma had told her.. her mumma had taught her to smile even in the worst scenario ...n dat is wat she was doing today.

Today was the fynl judgement in the court, Ayesha was brought by the police van. Whole of sharma n kapoor household was standing there... those eyes were luking at Ayesha with such a hatered ...that even Ayesha cud feel the anger standing 100 m away. She remembered every thing so clearly.

She had left Ram in subconscious state in his farmhouse n rushed to Kapoor mansion. She went directly to Ram's room ...to take out his personal gun. Cuming out of the room lost in her own thoughts she banged into Neha, who had cum to Kapoor mansion to pick up Pihu.
Neha : Strange, tum ram ke room main
Ayesha : Ab apne pati k room main jaane ke liye ...i don't need ur permission.. Neha Shergill.. and with dat Ayesha left the house.
Ayesha was busy thinking ..dat where she cud find Priya ...meanwhile she called up ramu kaka in the farm house to find out if ram was still unconscious or not.
Ayesha on phone
Ayesha : "Ramu kaka... wahan sab theek hai ki nahi"
Ramu kaka all exicited : "betiyaa main to ghar se baahar hun abhi"
Ayesha is complete anger ..."Aapne ram ko akele kaise chod diya"
Ramu kaka : "Arrey nahi ...wo priya betiya hai nah wahan"

before Ramu kaka cud finish the sentence Ayesha disconnected the phone... n rushed towards the farm house... she had to stop priya b4 ram went on her side ... she drove fast n reached the farm house ...she ran towards the bedroom. What she saw in the bedroom ...burnt her in flames ... her rage knew no limits. Ram n Priya together hugging made her lose her calm.
She heard Ram speaking

Ram : "Priya ...i too luv pihu but i luv u too"
She started clapping aloud
Ayesha : "hmm...so ho gaya ram milan!!!"

Both Priya n Ram luked towards her ...Ayesha continued " Kya chal kya raha hai yahann ...haan ... ho kya raha hai " she luked at priya : "tumhari himat kaise hui mere pati se gale lagne ki ... tum to badi adarsh waadi behen ho nah meri ... toh sharam nahi aayi ...aisi giri hui harqat karne se pehle".
Ram : "Enough ... bahut ho gaya ...aaj tak maine tumhe hurt nahi kiya ..but aaj agar tumne apna muh band nahi rakha ...toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga ...koi nahi"
Ayesha who had till now kept the gun in her purse took it out.
Seeing the gun priya screamed. Ayesha pointed the gun in ram's direction.
Ayesha : "enuf!! dis is the last tym ki tum mujhp chilaye ho ..bahut sun li tumhari ...humesha darr laga raha ki ..kal ko tumne chod diya ...pata hai main aayi, yaha tumhari uss priya ko marni thi ...but i guess ab tumhe hi khatam kar dun , na rahenge Mr. Kapoor.. aur nah badal payengi Mrs Kapoor"
Priya : "Ayesha nahi!!"
Ayesha : "oh! shut up"
With that Ayesha shot the gun . She saw a falling body .. blood falling on the floor... Ayesha became numb after seeing all dis ... the gun fell from her hand... she turned arnd to run ... but what she saw next changed her whole lyf... vik n neha were there with the entire police force.

to be cont..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Satyanash, phir se, aise adhe adhure me chhod diya, how can u ppl do this, it was such interesting turn, now update fast fast fast, plz can't stand the suspense, need a long big update from u jaldiii

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