raya(update6-pg13)- ff finished!!! - Page 2

Originally posted by: Rapiya1030

awesum!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 , update sooon!!!!!😳 😳 realllyy waiiiting!!!!! 😛

hope to give u an early update by tommrw :)

Originally posted by: -evan-

Nice take, do continue soon ;-) ;-)
And can you plz change the text color? It's difficult to read ...

hope the font color is f9 wid u now

Read both the parts!! Loved it! The second part was so emotional.. Beautifully written.. Can't wait to read the rest of the story!

that was awesome. continue soon

Originally posted by: _CandyCream_

Read both the parts!! Loved it! The second part was so emotional.. Beautifully written.. Can't wait to read the rest of the story!

thnk u :)

Originally posted by: shonuz_mom

that was awesome. continue soon

thnk u :)

This version of Ayesha seems to be a silent killer- smarter than the original one lol
And yeah no issues with font color now :-)

This sort of things we are going to get to see in coming episodes, its really unbearable for any parent to loose their right on their child, I can imagine Rams expression, good one, plz continue and try to give a ling update if possible

Originally posted by: -evan-

This version of Ayesha seems to be a silent killer- smarter than the original one lol
And yeah no issues with font color now :-)

yup had to make her smart!!! otrwise had to introduce her mamaji ...to gv her sum guru gyan ;) which i wanted to avoid ...coz my focus was on raya not the otr couple (ayesha n mamaji ) 😡

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

This sort of things we are going to get to see in coming episodes, its really unbearable for any parent to loose their right on their child, I can imagine Rams expression, good one, plz continue and try to give a ling update if possible

yes...even i guess we will see these things in near future ...i tried to incorporate watevr i read on different sites abt balh future updates
ok will add links frm the nxt update :) 😊