raya(update6-pg13)- ff finished!!!

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luvumjht

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Wowww superb update yaar .. last hug nahi many more times .. superb line
Cool updatee ...thnk you a

thnk u ...for liking the dialogue ...many more hugs to u too 🤗

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luvumjht

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: ramsakshiroxxx
u shud be the dialogue writer thw way u justfied the characters with out biasing even cv's cudnt do dat
u hav written der pain beautifully well done
finally milan 😃

😳 😳 i am really glad ,,u lyked it 😳😳
yup i guess...s/w developer ki naukri se jyaada entertaining hai ..writr ka job😆

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luvumjht

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: jatre
wow!great!liked their convo😊

thnkk u so much 😊

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luvumjht

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
Thanks for the link, but I was saying for a long update, instead I wrote ling update, anyways, thanks for a good update, so finally baat hug tak pahaunch hi gayi, ab rang me bhang dalne mat dena, continue ASAP

really got tym constrain ... if u all want longer updates ..wont be able to update daily 😭