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Posted: 12 years ago
maan want her to confess that she likes him? really weird kidnapper
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Posted: 12 years ago
Will update today... 😊
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PART 10


{Maan's monologue...}


I watched her eat the candy bar, shoving it down in massive bites. She's eating our last resources. I should be angry right now. But why do I find her so cute?


She glared at me, in between bites. She took another mouthful, and her whole face lit up cutely, kind of like when you plugged in a Christmas tree's fairy lights. Then, once she was done with that bite, her whole face fell, and she glared at me again. Then she took another bite from the bar, and she smiled again, making a noise like a satisfied kitten.


Just staring at her face was entertaining.


"Why are you staring at me?" she hissed, finished with her candy bar.


"You know, now you've finished that candy bar, you have no other food left." My own candy bar was still in my pocket. I will guard it with my life.


"How do I know you're not lying?" she said, glaring at me. "You lied to me about your family, and you didn't tell me you had food. You could be lying. You're a mean guy. You are the meanest guy in the world, and I wish you'd go rot in hell, while '"


"Alright!" I yelled, chucking her my candy bar I was planning to eat myself. "Eat it! And shut up!"


Still glaring at me, she peeled open the wrapper, and bit into the top. She smiled sweetly, chewing. Then, when she finished the mouthful, she glared at me again, and I knew she hadn't forgiven me.

********************

(Geet's monolgue...)


I can't walk anymore.


I collapsed onto the muddy ground, and I felt one of my blisters pop. Maan stopped.


"Are you okay?"


"Of course I'm bloody fine. That's why I'm sitting on the ground. Because it's so comfy."


Maan grabbed my hand, and pulled me up. I snatched my hand away, and fell back down again.


"Don't touch me!"


Maan crouched down next to me, his brown eyes looking very sad, so sad my heart hurt a little. Don't sympathize with him, Geet! He is a bas***d who lied to you, and hid food from you!


"Come on, Geet," he said, smiling bitterly. "I'll give you a piggyback. I'm sorry, okay?"


"No! I don't even know you! You're just a kidnapper!"


"Please, Geet. You said it yourself. We're friends."

"Not anymore,Maan. You lied to me."

"I'm sorry, okay? I didn't mean to lie to you!"

"Well, it's too late. You lied, okay? I can't forgive that."

"I told you I'm sorry."

"It's too late! Next time, don't hide food from me!"


Maan stared at me for second. Then he fell over, laughing so hard tears streamed out of his eyes.


"Why are you laughing? "


"Geet," he said, grabbing my hand, and staring into my eyes. Even though I was meant to be mad at him, my heart felt like it was about to burst. Damn him. "You're not angry about how I lied to you about my past?"


My heart raced, and I opened my mouth stupidly.


"Sure, I was a little angry at first, but you're doing it for your family. I can't hate you for that."


Maan grabbed my chin, and he kissed me.


My heart exploded, as our lips touched...And the next thing I knew, I was leaning into him, pulling him closer. In my mind, I was warring between logic, and the fact that it felt so, so good. He was a lying kidnapper, a part of me said. But he's a lying kidnapper who knew how to kiss, the other part said.


Damn it.


And I kissed him back. But just for a second, before Maan pulled away.


"Now that we've kissed," he whispered, smirking a little at my out-of-breath-ness, "I think you can let me give you a piggyback now, right?"

*******************************

I don't like Maan. Of course I don't like Maan. He's nothing but a lying, kidnapping, idiot.


So how come I like his back so much'? I never knew a guy's back could be so wide and warm. I closed my eyes, so I could feel nothing but the soft cotton of his shirt, and the gently swaying motion as he walked. He must be getting tired, now. I should tell him I'll walk by myself. I don't want him to pull a muscle. I would be upset if he got hurt. I might cry, again. Maan means too much to me, now.


What the hell am I talking about? He stole my first kiss. I should hate that bas***d. I should want to kill him.


But then why do I like his back so much?

**********************

{Maan's monologue...}


She was asleep.


Oh, good for her. I was here, busting my butt, trying to make her forgive me, while she bloody fell asleep.


She snored into my ear. Oh god. And she snores.


Her arms constricted around my neck, and I half-choked. I should really just shake her off. She is so annoying. How dare she make me get her "forgiveness"? I mean, I did nothing wrong! I was just trying to keep my food from her! Now, I was starving, and she was asleep.


"Maan?" she whispered. Oh, she sleep-talked as well. This was going to be a fun trip. "Thank you for taking me away from my home."


Was she being sarcastic?


"My Dad was getting remarried."


I stopped walking.



What?

*************

(Geet's monologue...)


I woke up, and stretched. Wow. That was a good sleep.


"Hey, Maan," I said, smiling. "How did you sleep?"


He glared at me.


"You snore, Geet."


I pouted.


"Do I not sound like a purring kitten?"


"Yeah, sure. A kitten drowning in a river, maybe."


I almost laughed.


"So, big man, what's the plan?"


"Do you realize that rhymed?"


"About a split-second after I said it, yes."


He chuckled.


"Okay, the plan?" he said, putting on his straight face. He was really a good actor. He should be in Hollywood, not here, kidnapping innocent maidens. (Now that made me smile. Even if I was saying it to myself.) "Well, I think we should go to a place with a phone box so we can make that call."


I glanced around us, at the muddy, dirty ground, and the high trees.


"Are we in that place?"


"No, not yet."

I sat down, at pointed at the ground.


"Hey, aren't those deer droppings?"


Maan sat, and we both looked at the ground for quite a long time.


"How the hell am I meant to know?"


"Well, I was just thinking, if it they are deer droppings, we could probably kill one and eat it."


"You'll be an excellent animal rights protestor."

**************************

We walked forwards, towards the speck Maan saw in the distance. I didn't see it (time to go to the eye doctor, maybe?), but apparently it looked like a city. Maan wouldn't piggyback me again ' lazy bas***d ' and so I had to walk, rupturing about a million blisters.


"How many days has it been since I'd kidnapped you?" Maan asked. I looked up. I'd been fiddling with the pendant of my necklace.


"I don't know, a couple'? You were in hospital two nights."

Maan looked away, remaining silent.


"The Mafia only gave me a week to come up with money. Then they'll kill my family."


I didn't reply. I couldn't. What was I meant to say? I was definitely regretting throwing my credit card away. At the time, I thought I'd be able to "save" his soul, or something crappily poetic like that. Yeah, right.

"I'm sorry, Maan."


He tried to smile at me.


"Don't worry about it, Geet. It's not your fault."


We both walked for a couple minutes in silence.


"Maan, I'll give you my Dad's number. You can call him, and get the money."


"Are you sure, Geet?"


"Yep," I said. It was my turn to semi-smile. Great. I'd promised to somehow stop my Dad form pulling off the stunt he always pulls off.


No one who has kidnapped me has ever gone off lightly. The last guy was stuck in hospital for a couple months, after trying to commit suicide. The guy before that couldn't have children. And the one before that is still in a coma.


You can't run from my Dad, not when he has all the money in the world.


Maan interrupted my thoughts, by yelling loudly.


"Do you see it?! DO YOU SEE IT?!"


My head spun around.


He was right. The speck had been something. It'd been a car. A Range Rover, to be exact. Probably some guy out hunting or something. Maybe for deer.


We both looked at each other, and smiled.


About ten minutes later, we were both in the car, driving away from the stupid hellhole.


Did I feel guilty? Only a little.



PRECAP~~ 😉

PART 11

Edited by Harshitabedi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
geet is angry on maan for hiding food
poor guy is starving
nd maaneet first kiss☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update. oh no geet is angry with maan only for food. is geet really going to give her Dad's number to maan. how many times geet got kidnapped.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

awesome update

geet is angry on maan for hiding food
poor guy is starving
nd maaneet first kiss☺️


😳 hehehe
thnxx alot..
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update..wow maaneet kissed...geet is realy one of kind she is angry on maan bcz he has hidden food😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
😆Awesome Part 😆
Kitna khatam hai ye Larki ufff
Mera Maan bhooka hai 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ha ha ha looks like our not so experienced kidnapper taught d damsel in distress to be a chorni.


Loved d update.
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Posted: 12 years ago


MAAN stoles GEET 1st kiss n GEET is responding to her kidnapper (MAAN) kiss ☺️

GEET snores into MAAN ears 🤣

Poor MAAN had not eaten anything n is starving to hv something 😒" border="0"> n top of it he is giving piggyback to GEET 😆

arey yaar thoda khana toh humare kidnapper ko bi do, yaha par toh sab khana GEET hi khaye ja rahi hai 😆

aur GEET ka weight kitna hai jo MAAN usko assani se utha kar chala ja raha hai

if I m not mistaken MAAN was having fever toh uska kya hua 😕

waiting for next update, hope GEET dad dont do anything to MAAN which he had done to any of the previous kidnappers of his daughter


Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago

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