Hey Mr. Kidnapper...Can you give me a ride home?

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607720

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: kiran_rati
nice update
precap is interesting
geet snore
omg
waiting for next part
cont soon

thnk alot di.. 😆

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607720

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm

thnk uuu

nd welcome 😆

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-gurtimaniac-

@-gurtimaniac-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

coming to this FF:-
I m giving a summarised comment from part 1 upto part 8 : --

Uptill Part 8 i really found this FF one of the hilarious one, MAAN the kidnapper doest not know how the kidnapper behave, n the gun part was even very funny, aaa GEET has also been previously kidnapped by other kidnapper n also know how to tackle them -- tht was gud but y she is ready to be kidnapped by MAAN n y she doesn't defend herself from kidnapping tht wht i m thinking.

then when u hv depict tht they r living in a hotel n sharing a room n a cute little nok-jhok they hv done with regard to sleeping on bed, was very funny...

GEET eating habbit is also very hilarious, she has been kidnapped n she is eating like she has come for a picnic with MAAN

i think now GEET has developed some feeling for MAAN which she herself has not yet realised.

MAAN too hv little bit attraction towards GEET...

now i m on the way to read PART 9 😊

part 9
awesome update 😊

it was totally hilarious
i was thinking who has kidnapped whom
as all the time GEET will be giving idea of wht to do next
i laughed a lot while reading the boat incident

finally MAAN said the truth to GEET tht he had told her lie abt his family

GEET was going to kiss MAAN on the lip 😲 when he was not conscious, but bad luck MAAN came to the conscious at the at the ri8 time n caught GEET n there goes the teasing from MAAN...

well i njoyed a lot while reading the whole update today, n u hv given a long update,
waiting for the next update...

finally i was able to make a comment on ur thread 😊

Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago

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divya22

@divya22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Wooo preety long part... N i loved it...
Wooo kaha se kaha pahuch haye dono...
Oh maan she wss to kiss him n he caught hr...
N finally said dat she like him...
N well evn maan said d truth... N also geey cried...
Overall many things hapened...

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607720

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: divya22
Wooo preety long part... N i loved it...
Wooo kaha se kaha pahuch haye dono...
Oh maan she wss to kiss him n he caught hr...
N finally said dat she like him...
N well evn maan said d truth... N also geey cried...
Overall many things hapened...

thnxxx di.. 😆

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Phew...finally got d link.

And thanx sweety for such an entertainingly long update.Not for a single second i felt bored.Poor Maan cares for Geet but think not that blunt as Geet to admit it.And Geet,falling for her stupid LYING kidnapper,even tried to kiss him but oops tough luck.

Well finally Maan told d truth but it wasnt that big of a shocker for Geet.She quite comfortably digested that.

And den after d waterfall accident,She is still worried abt chocolate bars...!!!!!!

Awesome update.

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

🤣

"Have you got two candy bars in your pocket?"

🤣

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

what a long update

maan finally told the truth to geet

now geet has to decide whether he was right or wrong

but first they have to reach civilization as maan is running fever

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ElienoreMG

@ElienoreMG

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Awesome update...
Omg maan kissed geet's forehead...
Gosh! Geet ate her lips out of hunger..
Awww geet cried infront of maan..
Loved maan's consolation...
Maan caught geet kissing him.. Lol..
Maan asked her to kiss him..
I was desperately waiting for a kiss..😔
Finally maan told his real reason for kidnapping...
Geet has accepted that she likes maan... Yeippie!
Maan and his teasing session!!
Poor maan, wo 2 candy bar v gayi...
Precap is interesting...
Waiting...