Hey Mr. Kidnapper...Can you give me a ride home?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Guys, here me again with a new SS on a brand new concept... U've all supported me through my first ongoing story , i.e. A damsel in distress, and have encouraged me through it. Keep supporting me the same way and hope you all like and appreciate it too.

I specially want to thank my buddies who have been encouraging me even when I was dipressed with the lack of likes and comments which is the main inspiration for any writer, and have stood with me for the same...

Here now jumping to the prologue... Hope you all like it and pwease do tell howzzz it?


Hey MR. Kidnapper, Can You Give Me A Ride Home?

By Harshita Bedi




Inspired by Wattpad book..


MY other work: A DAMSEL IN DISTRESS








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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratulations for the new story
Loved the title..
Edited by maaneetmaahi - 12 years ago
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PROLOGUE


Okay. You are stuck in a locked car, with a stranger. you have nothing to defend yourself with, while the stranger has a gun. he wants to kidnap you and ransom you back to your parents. how are you meant to feel? scared?... even...terrified?

Not me.

"Can you pass me the toffee popcorns?"

I asked, done with the massive Costo size twenty pack of chocolate bar.

My kidnapper, the guy who was still nameless, glanced at me unbelievingly.

"You finished the chocolate already? that was meant to us for a month or so!"

I wiped some of the melted yummy-ness off my mouth.

"whatever. I get hungry when i am being kidnapped.you know, by a creepy nameless stranger. what's your name by the way?" He glanced at me disapprovingly. Okay i changed my mind. He wasn't creepy - not at all. He was totally sweet-looking with his black eyes and thick black hairs - not the kidnapping kind of guy at all. From his biceps, I would say he was a Jock or something , and was about my age. Lucky me - the last guys who kidnapped me were old, bald, and boring.


"Maan!"

I nodded. A cute, normal name. Why would a guy like him would kidnap someone and threaten them with a gun? Not that i was scared. I've been kidnapped three times before already. It happens when you're family is rich, and your bodyguards suck. Not that I had a bodyguard anyway. I should get one of those.

"Cool." I said, snapping open the pack of toffee popcorn. Okay I swear normally I am not that much of a pig, but its like a natural body reaction; eat while you can. I flicked the radio on, without asking, and tuned on my favorite channel.

"Oh my GOd I love this one!" I yelled through the loud music, humming along to KAty perry's Teenage dream. "isn't she amazing?"

He finally reacted, by flicking off the radio shut again.

"I hate Katy perry," he said, but I couldn't help noticing that the manly smirk that played around his lips.

"fine!" I muttered, getting my ipod out of my jacket, untangled the wires of my headphone. you know the cool DJ ones. In pink. I shoved it into my ears and played some music. "I'll just listen to my good, tasteful Katy Perry in private."

He was smirking for real now. His smile is just awesome. Why would a guy like him would kidnap me?

I'm over-thinking it. i'll just wait until my dad pays the ransom, and then i can go home. But do i even want to go home in the first place? What was the point of going back? Isn't that the way i'd let myself get kidnapped? Maan was clearly a amateur, I knew all the tricks. I could have taken him down whenever i wanted, even with the gun in his hand. I had no idea where we are going, I dont think Maan did either.

Whatever, i thought. Just enjoy life while it lasts.

I closed my eyes, and leant my head against the glass window.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Vegas!" I yelled. i'd woken up, finally, and now i was surrounded by the shiny tacky, glitzy lights of LAS VEGAS. Z"I love Vegas! can we go gambling?"

He raised his brow.

"Rich girls know how to gamble?"

"No... i said hesitantly. "But i have seen movies with gambling in it."

"that's not the same."

"Isn't it?"

"No."

"Oh."

"Anyways we are not here to gamble. Maybe next time. We have to get your ransom money, quick. And i have a friend here who will help me get your money. He's a good negotiator."

I nodded but I had a question.

"Okay, just out of curiosity, why are you doing this? The last guy was to get a new sports car for his girlfriend. the guy before that was a teacher got fired. the one before that needed some money to pay his debt. What do you want?"

"You've been kidnapped before?" he asked sounding shocked.

I shrugged.

"yeah, a couple of times. You're not my first, you know." i turned away blushing suddenly. I just realized how that sounded. "So why are you doing this?"

He ground his teeth.

"that's not important."

"I think i have the right to know. I might be able to help you."





Soo guyss... did u like it??

plz plz plz like and comment...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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💔 😭
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Loved the prologue. Gosh! She have been kidnapped bfore tooo😲
"yeah, a couple of times. You're not my first, you know."
hehehe, that was such a gud one...😆


And hey! Me too love Katy Perry's Teenage dream, lovelyyy sooonnnggg⭐️
And aowww Vegasss, abb to aur majaa ayegaa
Waiting eagerly for this kidnapper to come into action.😉
Continue soonnn


me still gusshaa BTW huh!!!!!!!!😭
Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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wow 1st commnt i got and such a crying face of urs.. thnk u bahut acha gift dia tune mujhe.. 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Harshitabedi



wow 1st commnt i got and such a crying face of urs.. thnk u bahut acha gift dia tune mujhe.. 😡

😭 aur daatooo... sabb daato meko
BTW editted my comment above😡
Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

😭 aur daatooo... sabb daato meko
BTW editted my comment above😡


Dekh lia 🥱

i hate u huh!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome prologue
i just love it
nd specially the title
BTW as all say first impression is last impression
nd by prologue
ur first impression was amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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watng dear😊
update son😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept
all d best for ur new story 😊

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