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16anyaa.gurti thumbnail
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GN ghar waloo... me ninni ko jaying 🥱
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congratzz for te new thread
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congratz for new thread... continue soon plz :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Moni,
Why do I get the feeling that it was Geet who completed teh formalities of the bride and it was not Sanju but Geet who was dressed and decked up in brides costume. tell me if I am wrong.
Jaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
IS IT LOVE...

so sorry for the late update...
but from now i'll try to be regular...
and updates length may decrease next time due to my end term exams..
🤗
so here is
PART 6
the pheras were done...pandit declared them man and wife...the bride closed her eyes with satisfaction of being always his...just when they were about to bend to take the blessings of elders
"stop it..!!!!"
people's attention went to the side and were shocked to see sanjana standing there...


FLASHBACK
"veerji,what should i do now,today is his marriage..."she asked,though she was terrified as the time was passing but her determinance to atleast fight for her love, her life was holding her...

"geet,there is no way we could meet him, atleast not before this wedding..."
"then what should i do..???"she was getting frustrated at her helplessness...tears started to roll down of her eyes...
"there is nothing we could do baby..."brij himself was helpless at the stage...


geet just sat down on the floor watching her brother's downcasted eyes in front of her...she closed her eyes...and relaxed herself...tears still flowing out...

she was feeling herself in darkness without any ray of hope...nothing was in favour of her...it was as if god is specially planning everything against her...but she wasn't someone to lose as such...for maan she can and will fight against god even...


maine apni saree zindagi is pyaar ki ibaadat ki hai...
apni zindagi se bhi zyada is pyaar ki innayat ki hai...
kaise ho sakta hai mera pyaar mujhe na mile..
jab saaree zindagi maine bas is pyaar ki hi chahat ki hai...
(maine likhi hai😳,pasand nhi aayi to pls ignore)

"veerji,can't we do something that this marriage is cancelled..."
"don't be stupid baby...and how will this happen...here we aren't even able to meet maan...and u are saying as if its very easy..."brij was already frustrated at himself for not being able to help his sis...
"but what should we doo.."her determinance was weakening each moment...

brij's mind was planning something dangerous as he knew halting the marriage was not possible now but he didn't knew weather it will be good for geet...


he explained everything to geet that he will somehow get both of them in sanjana's room alone...they both just have to handle sanjana...he will handle the outside atmosphere for sometime..
meera was terified with their thinking.."brij, how can u even think like that...you are completely ruining her life...if she gets him but will he love her...????"
geet was just analysing his idea..."meera do min please chup..!!!"brij replied
meera was shocked...she wasn't in support with his plan...
"geet, but let it be clear in ur mind that i can get u in that house but the main fight is urs...u have to win maan's trust after this...and from starting...what we are thinking it will destroy ur image, ur innocence in his eyes...u'll have to bear his hatred, his anger for sometime till u are not able to win his trust again...it will be difficult baby...soch lo..."


he left from their giving geet sometime with herself and her thoughts..it wasn't an easy decision for her...bearing the hatred of someone u love the most...and other side forgetting him...spending ur whole life watching him with someone else...she closed her eyes thinking about maan and sanjana...it did hurt her too much..she decided she can't live without him nor see him with someone else...she would take his anger and hatred but she can't be away from him...she can take everything but not distance between them..."and if really my love is true, one day i'll get his love...i'll wait for that day whole my life.."



Here brij was trying to convince meera for his decision...meera didn't supported him."i can't see her suffer so much...just because he doesn't loves her.."
"and what u think if we don't do this she'll be happy,meera...for god sake.!!! she has loved him whole of her life...how can she forget him...she'll never accept any other person in her life..so what u want should she be lonely all her life or ..."
"or let her suffer with that maan.."meera cried...
"nahi meera,i know him, he'll take care of her...as a friend hi sahi.."
"even after all this which u are planning to do...u think so..??"
"yesss"brij shouted"haa meera, i do think so, or what u think i'll give my sister to anybody...without caring will she be safe or not...????"
still she was not convinced, she was waiting for geet's decision..


geet came to brij...she closed her eyes tight and then with great determination in her eyes"veerji, i'm ready ..."
"okkk..."he smiled...
"and how will all this happen.."meera questioned...
"be positive meera..."geet smiled slightly and meera rolled her eyes...😆
"hmm, that's my problem meera...u both just be ready...i'll pick u after an hour..."
"but brij.!!!"
"now what..meera.."
"ur family will also be present in the wedding...uska kya.???"

brij bit his tongue"how could he forget his great daarji..."
geet was a silent spectator watching another problem speciaaly for her
"umm, u don worry, i'll take care of him too"though brij was really confused about how will daarji react to all this but still...
geet smiled"i love u veerji..."
"i know..."he smiled kissing her forhead and left...


he went to fashion designer of khurnas and made a deal of crores...the person was surprised...for her an idiot was providing an amount of 5 crores just to let 2 people inside the khurana mansion with her as her assistants...
"but why.??"she was actually surprised
"that's none of ur buisness...u just have to escort the 2 to brides room without any checking..."
"but theres high risk..."she was not completely ready..
"i'm paying u for the risk..."he was firm and straight..
she agreed as it was quite easy as her boss wasn't there so everything was in her hands...

Brij took a lahenga same as the bride's...
"yeh lo geet..."
"what's this.."she was surprised
"ur wedding lahenga...after all its ur marriage and i don't want u to wear that chudail's lahenga.."😆
meera was going mad with all there nataunki and calmness amidst them planning something so dangerous...
"u both have really gone mad.!!"
"shut up meera.!!!"he laughed...
brij dropped them to the designer's shop explaining how to use chloroform on sanjana...
FLASHBACK ENDED



so now all were staring at the bride to watch her face...brij looking wierdly at his daarji's cuirosity...
maan lifted her veil...geet closed her eyes tight just fearing maan's reaction...not even thinking about the people around...
Maan was shocked to see geet behind the veil with her eyes closed...he couldn't believe it...
daarji was super angry watching his son's daughter...
maan's family who didn't knew who she was were looking at her waiting for her to introduce himself...
sanjana and her mother were standing shocked and heart broken...
brij took a snap of maaneet and forwarded it to all the news channels and then called his people to spread the news as much as possible that "MSK married his childhood friend...and his family supported him forgetting about raj khurana's promise to his friend..."😉
Precap
maan's reaction..
what actually brij is trying to do...😛
plzzz hit like and comment...
criticism and bashing all welcome along with suggestions..😳
Part 5
Part 7
Edited by moni6262 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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okiee the first thing i did after opening this IF editor was to laugh out loud ...n i mean it ...
what perfect icon i had chosen ..🤣

sachi Mosi ji ...poora sar ghuma diya aapne ..😲😲
what an update ...👏👏

my god ..sachi mien i can't believe Brij actually suggested it all to Geet ...
but chalo the fact was well acceptable ...
to bear the hatred than to bear the pain of being apart ...🤢

ehehe ..me loving it now ..😉

just imagine sanju ka chehra kya huga ..geet ko dekh kar ...😆

mindblowing narration ..⭐️⭐️

n meera's role was too well in all this situation ..👏👏

awesom one ...!!
haaayeee ..finally shaddi hugayi ..😳😳

Precap was too damn intriguing ..😃😃
now me only bothered about Maan's behavior ..rest tou go to hell ..😛😛

update soon mosi ji pluueeejjj
waiting waiting ...

Luv Ya
Sobia ..🤗

hey but now i realized ...me first ...
yuppieee ...

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago
16anyaa.gurti thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hush!!!!!! Me secondd

Loved the update, Yarr kya bhai hai brij. koi bhai apni sissys ko aise ideas deta hai kyaa?

Bechari Geet ne itnaa badaa risk toh le liya, but abb kya hoga iss bacchi ka?🤢

Babajiii bacha lena usey.

And wah bhai! kya shaadi thi, Maan apni dulhan ka chehra bhi nee dekha, wo toh iss baar saddi Geet hi thi, agr usje bajaye koi aur aa jata wo chipakkali ko behosh karke toh??????


Heheheh, chalo jo bhi shaadi toh ho gayi dono ki...

Aage jo hoga dekh lenge 😉





Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i knew it

but me d0ubting brij

kuch th0 hain

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