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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 13 years ago

congo for the new story..
Painful memories..ahaan..
😆
Lovely start..

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

oye whats this new story...something is fishy😆

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 13 years ago

First of all very catchy title..and picture..I fear spiders more than anything and i wish instead of them,i would find such "sparkly hearts" in the webs in the far corners of my house...

First chapter smelled of "melancholy"..I liked it however "loved" few things..

1}It was the commemoration of days gone by,which made her what she is today ,which in turned showed what she was some times ago..At some time in our life,we all might have done such analysis..I usually do it on my birthday..however it always makes me realize that i have not done much progress...😆

2}It means going to a place she had not decided without informing someone..It reminded me of times when i start "writing"without knowing what i am going to write...!!!

waiting for next part...

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 13 years ago

is it story or os?????????????

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 13 years ago

congrats shikha for new story

will enjoy as we enjoyed all works by u

painful start

continue soon .

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Diva7

@Diva7

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Posted: 13 years ago

painful yet subtle start of a story

liked it... plz do continue soon

well ur title reminds me of Kaldor's cobweb model, dat was one hell of a theory 😆

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Chapter Two is clubbed with Chapter One in First page. Please check there. Sorry for the inconvenience

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 13 years ago

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The story is being told with perspective of maan's mother..Really very refreshing and {Brand} New..I bet I have not read something like this before...So many congrats for that...👏👏

Your chapters always give "something"{either words or sentences or situations} that makes me love your writing more..like in today's chapter.. "Unadulterated happiness"..Sometimes life's miseries can adulterate emotions too..A little of this happens as we grow up..We learn to give "fake smiles"..I think No kid in this world can fake a smile...

At last,as kirti said,hope maan would come back too...😆

ps-what does "Laasya" mean????

Edited by palindrome - 13 years ago