Web Of Love [Chapter 14- P 111]

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Asmi13

@Asmi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

The name Sarani reminded me of one of my classmates from university😊...so Maan's parents r doctors & his father probably passed away...wondering whose accident case it was

lnteresting beginning...waiting for more

Thanks for d pm

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516645

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Diva7
painful yet subtle start of a story
liked it... plz do continue soon
well ur title reminds me of Kaldor's cobweb model, dat was one hell of a theory 😆

Rofl I googled about it and got to see some words like supply and demand and I got scared and closed it rofl😆

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

part 1
edit
so this is Laasya's POV and story?
Maan is Kriti's 3rd child?
but Laasya is or was married to Rajat Khurana?
what is Maan's surname then? Chatterjee or Khurana?
cont soon dear...

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

the names were so different..!!
Loved the way u explained all their past memories..!!

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516645

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: spvd
part 1
edit
so this is Laasya's POV and story?
Maan is Kriti's 3rd child?
but Laasya is or was married to Rajat Khurana?
what is Maan's surname then? Chatterjee or Khurana?
cont soon dear...

First para was Geet's POV. It was mentioned there. Geet was sitting in her college canteen and now went in search of solace. Laasya has three children. Tanvi, Vivan and Maan. So it is Maan Khurana.

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alfik

@alfik

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

thank you for the pm...awesome start...

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yash

@-Trinity-

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Wow !! one of my most loved writer is back 🤗.. Shika send me a PM when you start a new story please..😳

Painful, subtle and an emotional update. Mood of melancholy in the air. Laasya is indeed a unique name. Never heard of it.

You write emotions beautifully. I can live through the characters.

Waiting for the next part.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Hi congrats on the new FF! Y no pm? 😭 Awesum prologue! Part 1 was intense n sad! Well writen! update soon n do pm

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

CONGRATS FOR A NEW STORY

SOUNDS FULL OF PAINFUL MEMORIES

WHY ARE THEY BOTH WALLOWING IN THE PAST

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mayyo

@mayyo

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Thrice. Thrice I logged in to comment but couldn't find the right words! So I've just decided to drop in a smaller comment than what I would have done otherwise. 😛

There's a melancholic air to this story which I'm hoping will shed off in time, after all, it's just been one update! I wonder what's making Geet so sad.. And what happened 'that fateful day' when Laasya lost three important people of her life?

Will wait to read more. Thanks for the notification. I had already spotted and read this one. 😊