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mayyo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: TheBrat

😆 Yeah I already received compliments saying that suits me😆

Yeah! I read those, DQ! 😆

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Serenity_me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

res😈 dost dost na raha, mujhe tujhse ye umeed nahi thi😕

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pearl_warrior

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Hi...I didn't recognize you at first,,,😊

Awesome concept...👏

A little confusing...but everything will get clearer as the story unfolds...

At first I really thought that Maan's mom was Geet and Rajat Khurana was Maan of a different age...Then I was like "Oh No!! They are already grandparents...Maybe the time machine will take them back in time.."I guess the title time machine induced that way of thinking...Anyways, things got clearer with the 2nd half..

It was a nice update...Mostly sad kind but full of mystery...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Edited by TheBrat - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

hey braty
well i don't know ur intentions but please don't combine DDE with this.

AND I WANT DDE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

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mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Melancholic again, but I think it's probably building a strong base for the story!

'Yet, the solace a mother could provide is unmatchable to all the love that was showered on her.' This one line made me very sad and I would say, it was the most painful among all other pains 'they' are suffering! 😔

I think for most writers, writing is a form of an escapade or a way to vent out what they feel. It is indeed a really good way for those who can't express verbally, for good listeners who readily give a shoulder to their loved ones but are never able to get one for themselves...

Has her wish for a guardian angel been fulfilled and she's suffering because of that? Doesn't seem likely. 😕

A wounded beast, they say, is the most dangerous one. He has all the rage and drive filled up within him to strike back. Will this one do so?

Well, I guess I'll have to wait to read more to be able to leave a comment which makes sense! 😆 And don't worry about PMs. Your ardent readers can follow Web Of Love without them! 😉

Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago

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Asmi13

@Asmi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Me wondering will that wounded beast become her guardian angel...l know l'll have to wait to know😊...loved d imageries depticting Geet's state of mindIt was beautiful

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palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

I' I don't know what to wish for" she said lamely. Truth to be told, she gave up on wishing..

This could be said as "epitome of sadness/melancholy/gloominess/despondency"..As a reader,it pained alot...😭How do you think of such heartbreakingly beautiful lines???

she'd started to vent out her feelings in the form of characters that would represent her..

I also want to write a story where a character would represent me completely...But it never happens..All the characters in my story represents "that" which i badly want to be but I am not.😕.Is there a story which represents you "The brat"???Just a query of my stupid mind after reading this line from the update...😃..

Hope i am not wrong in guessing that wounded beast is "maan"...wait wait wait..Girl who was sitting under the tree was geet no..😆..You did not mention the name once in the first portion...Whats special with the date "29th september"..Is it her birthday or we cans say the day she lost her mother...

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago