Arshi ss: Driving me crazy (finished)

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Arthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

NOTE: this is purely fiction and for entertainment oly. I dont intend to hurts any feelings. Pls read it and give me ur suggestion and likes for upcomming parts
If anyone feels bad abt the concept pls. Read the CS and then let me know if I should continue or stop.

now the prologue

a beautiful beach

a white decorative tent

a satin white bed

and arnav lying someone tracing his lips

slowly on the ears kissing and nibbling it

he the gently moves down rubbing his cheek on the othe one's cheek saying

dude u defo need a shave man

what the... startled arnav gets up sweating badly... no no no... not again. suffering from these dreams for nearly a month. damn u kushal. I hate u for this. I just hate u... he picks the phone aman prepare the flight for Tomo mrng I'm coming back to India. send me the car wit raju not kushal to the airport saying so he cut the call,,,took his laptop and started his work as with experience he knew that sleep will evade him tonight also thanks to the dream...ok end of this will give charecter
sketch below

Edited by ar_art - 11 years ago

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rkapoor1382

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow its interestingdo continue n pm me

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Arthi

@ar_art

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Posted: 12 years ago

Now giving the character sketch:

Arnav Singh Raizada: known as ASR, is a 28 yr old business tycoon. He is similar to the show. He is obnoxious, rude and angry young man types with a Casanova image.

Lavanya Kashyap: also known as La. She is 23 yr old, arnav girl friend. She has friends selected by her mom, she is known as la cos her mom considers it 'in', she loves pink colour cos her mom thinks it is feminine, she loves arnav cos her mom thinks it'll make her popular and also for family prestige, she wear modern clothes cos her mom considers it as a symbol of being rich. In short she is spineless mamma's girl along with being confused.

Nandhkishore: also known as NK. He is a 27 year old undercover cop. He is the elder bro of akash. The family and his outside friends think he is a looser as he owns a small scale theater group. Over all he is cool, confident and sophisticated.

Anjali Raizada: also known as anji is 23 yr old arnav's sister. She is kind and jolly type of person who has her heart and brain in the right place.

Akash and Payal Raizada: 25 and 22 year old bro and SIL of arnav. They are cute and soft couple.

Nani: she is the head of the family. She governs and controls the people by love and blackmail.

Kushal Singh: he is the driver of arnav. He is considered sweet, understanding by la, strong and passionate with good looks by anjali and root cause of all problems by arnav. But overall he is a complete mystery.

Kushi Gupta: 24yr old doctor and daughter of late Sashi Gupta and Kavitha Gupta. She is found missing from the date of her marriage.

Kushal Gupta: 24yr old lawyer and twin brother of kushi and son of late Sashi and Kavita Gupta. He is considered dead along with his parents.

Shashi and Kavitha Gupta: they are parents of kushi and Kushal. They are a loveable couple and owners of hotel groups and sheesh mahal. They were killed in a car accident along with their son.

Shashank Gupta: he is the uncle and younger brother of Shashi. He is money minded along with being heartless.

Shyam jha: he is a well known criminal. He fell for kushi the day he first saw her. He was supposed to marry her before she disappeared.

this is the cs. Hope you like it' pls press the like button and suggestion are always welcome. Pls forgive mistakes cos of being new.

chapter1
chapter 2
chapter3
chapter 4

chapter 5
chapter 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17,18
chapter 19
chapter 20

Edited by ar_art - 11 years ago

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Sasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

OK I UNDERSTOOD NOW THE BASIS OF THE STORY, I MUST SAY REALLY FUNNY PROLOUGE AND INTRESTING START!!!!!!!!!

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Sanaya Flawless Irani

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Posted: 12 years ago

interesting bt i wish that u could make Shyam positive n LA negative

anyway do cont soon

will love to read it

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Arthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 1: REMEMBERENCE

Sheesh mahal was glittering and glowing like a bride unlike the bride who was running away from it. Wearing a pink bridal lehenga along with Nike shoes, carrying a bag pack in one hand and clutching the lehenga in the other, she was running away from the place she called home for the past 23 years. She noticed a black car parked near the temple. With a sign of relief she entered it. The car started moving.

Nice shoes sweet heart. She heard him say with slight humor in his voice.

Says the guy who is wearing a helmet inside a car? She replied smirking.

I defo don't wanna get killed by your wannabe husband's goons deary so I always feel it is better to be safe than sorry. He said keeping a straight face. Anyways Kush we are leaving to Delhi now. She looked at him with a raised brow. Look sweet heart this is needed ok.

But I hate that brother of urs. He is insanely hot!

What the hell are you saying? He yelled.

No no I meant his temper Nk she said with an innocent face.

Ya ya I know what you meant. Girls these days I tell you he muttered stoping the car near a motel. Change here, after dinner we move to my place and tomorrow morning v go to meet my people.

The ringing sound of the phone brought back kushi from her 3 month old flash back.

Hello?

He's coming back tonight

Oh DM what. What do we tell bhai now?

Don't worry Kush I have a plan.

Thanks to ur plan I'm stuck she thought ruefully hello you there? She heard Nk shouting through the phone. Ya ya tell me what's ur plan?

I'm coming to pick you up tomorrow morning. Will explain on the way to shantivan. Just pack your bags and be ready for a long stay there.

No way. I'm not staying there. Do you understand? Hello hello''.he cut the damn call. God DM why do I have to get caught in such things. Why me????? Saying so she threw the phone on the bed and slumped down thinking why the hell did I kiss him that day.

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Arnav Singh Raizada was a confident man the last time he came through this airport, but things change and so it has changed for our Arnav too. Today we see the magnanimous Raizada tensed and thoughtful. Throughout the journey he thought of what happened for the past few months. He was worried actually scared of what he felt for a particular person who had dominated his dreams during night and day. He has imagined that persons face everywhere. This has freaks the living day lights out of him.

Damnit he is messing with my mind. I defo have to find out what is going on. Why oh why the hell did I kiss him that day?

Precap: if what I did is forbidden I'd love to be damned again and again rather than to be blessed not doing it. Thinking so he slammed his lips on his again sucking and nibbling it'..

So'' how was it???? Suggestions are always welcome. Don't forget to like it though. Buddy me for pms. Pls excuse for errors.

chapter 2 down below:

Edited by arthir - 12 years ago

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abika

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Posted: 12 years ago

intresting con soon

thanks for pm

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Priti

@Drishuluv

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Posted: 12 years ago

seems interesting. i woud love to read more😊 when i read prolog i thght kushal singh is indeed kushal gupta bt some wher i thght why arnav is gettng such dreams??🤣 bt after reading ch.1 its got clear in my head tht he is surely our KKG😉