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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Drishuluv

just read it & trust me mycondition is no differ thn arnav. anji luv kushal?? its obvious tht arnav wasbaffledeven i am confusewhats going on?? basically how many kushal r in this story?? becoz anj cant luv arnav's kushal i.e. khushi & arnav was felling strange this time with his driver "kushal" is tht mean tht this kushal & tht kushal is different??? oh god i'm going to crazy so u better update fast i cant hndl this suspence so plz update sooon waiting yarr(waise i luv precap & i'm sure this time it must b khushi😉)



yaar I am done with the update will post it tonight... Read the following updates carefully yaar... U'd defo c the difference... I'm gonna do more of flashbacks now on...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys pls comment and like it….. I really wanna know to continue or not….. I'm planning to end this ff in another 5 to 6 updates being a SS.

CHAPTER 4:

Ahhh…. Mourned Arnav when he woke up. His eyes adjusted to the dim light, when he found himself in another place. Oh I remember… in the hospital. I have to get out of this place now…. Thinking he stepped out of his bed. There he saw Nk sleeping on the attendee's bed. He saw N.K's phone and car keys on the side table. Arnav took both and moved out. As it was 3 in the morning the corridor was practically empty. He reached the parking lot and took the car for a long drive. He thought he'd call home by 7 till then he had time to think abt Anji, Kushal and his new feelings for Kushi.

He stopped the car and found himself in the out skirts of Delhi. He saw a Dhaba which was luckily opened. He parked his car behind a black BMW (guessing). He looked amused to see such a car there. He slowly moved inside the place. The place didn't have lot of people. He found a Singh family, with two kids and a very talkative wife, their next seat was occupied by another couple. He found the man a bit uncomfortable but the girl was quiet at ease. This was the first time Arnav has ever entered a Dhaba leave alone order anything. He saw what everyone ate. The girl next to the fashionable gentleman had ordered enough for 4 people. This reminded him of Kushal. That was the day when he had told him he was diabetic and Kushal had practically cried stating the misery of not able to taste sweets. He smiled at the memory. He was busy smiling when he heard the guy in black calling out to me asking if my phone had a signal or not. I took my phone and I nodded and gave him my phone. He took it and called someone. I could hear the girl who accompanied him laughing at something. On seeing more I noticed that all the four tiers of his car was gone. I smiled too but suddenly realized that my car was behind his. I rushed to c mine and found the tiers missing in it too. At that time I realized that I dint have money too. Thank you for the phone. He gave me my phone and took some money and placed it in my hand for the cal. I looked at him confused; he said it is for the call. Before I could say anything the girl in white took the money from my hand and pushed it into that mans hand. She smiled and thanked me while holding my hand. I could see the guys face burn in jealousy. I laughed out loud. Oh God dude. It is ok maam.. I told the lady can I get a ride with you??? You c my car is in the same state as yours.

Your boss is gonna be very angry with you. Men bhi… yese jagah jaha sirf lorry rukhti ha vahan aap dono itni badi gadi park karoge tho yehi hoga… saying she started to laugh… strangely the man in black and I dint find it funny. He turned towards me with a serious look and asked me where do you wanna go….

I don't know I said dejectedly…

Hmmm come with us… he offered

Sure… I just accepted and left with them..

Their drive came and I left with them…

My name is Geet….. aapka naam kya hai… aap na bhilkul chupchap types ke ho kya

Geet unhe bolne do thab he bolenge na

Han han janti hu…. Aap tho bath nahi karte or jo karte hai unse be apko problem hoti hai she said pouting..

Ek min…. mera nam Arnav hai… our aap I extended my hand towards the man in black. He took it and said Maan… I am Maan Singh Kurrana….

Kurrana construction wale???? Right??

Han.. aap jante hai ??

Actually your company constructed the new AR building 1 year back so I know…..

Oh… you must be Arnav Singh Raizada then… wow… never thought of meeting you like this…

Yes life is strange and mine is getting stranger….

Aap ko pyar hogaya hai kya geet asked suddenly…

I looked at her stunned… muje nahi pata…. I'm lost…

Dude it has happened with me also… when I was not ready to accept I loved Geet… but I know one thing is that no one can help you in this… you ought to get that yourself…

Yes I figured out that one… the car stopped and I got down and thanked the couple and moved towards the hospital. I saw the park and sat on the chair. My thoughts moved to the time when I was in a similar place few months ago…

Flashback:

Kushal take Lavanya to her house now… come and pick me up later when I call

Yes sir… la maam can we leave?

Hmm she grunted. Kushal opened the door for her and she slipped in. she looked really cross. Chalen maam.

Sniff.. sure… sniff….

Tere her dukh ko apna banal u..

Tere har ghum ko dil se laga lu..

Mujhe karni aati nahi chori warna

Mai tere ankho se har aansu chura lu…

Sniff… that was sweet.. she said smiling a bit… aha the lady has a beautiful smile.

Are you trying to flirt with me…?

Hamari itni himmath … kabhi nahi.. but I'd love to see a smile on your face… so why are you crying????

Silence….

Sorry for asking….

No…. no… actually its ok… I need to talk is it ok if… you know if..

Ya sure I'll stop the car here… nice place . Kushal got down and opened the door for La

Hmmm wow.. I like the breeze here. Lets sit there.

You go and sit.. I'll get some tea for both of us…

Sure Kushal… will be waiting.. she smiled and sat down on the chair in the park

After few mins…. They both were relaxing each with a glass of tea in their hand…

You know I always wanted to become a kinder garden teacher….

Wow.. so are you pursuing it or not??

No... Mom feels it is really LS job for me…. But I really feel alive with small kids you know…

Kushal was surprised… he never thought this skimpily dressed girl who acts all bitchy has a softer side. Hmmm so what, you wanna be a teacher not you mom right… so wat is stopping you? Kushal asked casually

I cannot disobey my mom… she loves me you know

That is even better.. if she loves you she will understand. One more thing.. How is being with Arnav Sir gonna bring you closer to your ambition

No Arnav has no link to my interest. My mom wants me to be his wife.

Do you love him la maam?

I don't know.. she hesitated… I have never felt a bond with him though… actually thinking abt it I don't know how I feel towards him at all

Then why do you accompany him everywhere??

Cos I'm his girlfriend silly… she giggled

Kushal raised his eyebrow at her and asked so what?? If you don't feel a bond, just break up with him… I don't think Arnav Sir is into relationship maam.

It La, Kushal and I cant break up with him… wat will mom say…

Hmmm…. Think abt this maam…

Silence

I think we should leave…. Saying he took the empty glass from her hand and placed it with the tea vendor and drove La to her house. While coming out he heard the phone ring. It was Arnav sir…

Hello???? Sir??

Kushal come to Gracie's house immediately?

But sir I thought you are going to mukthi's house sir?

Is she the chick with great boobs??? Then tats the place.. Come and pick me up immediately.. Saying he slammed the phone

DM when is this man ever gonna change.. at least I'm near to the place… saying he drove to said place.

Ting tong…….. The door was opened by a girl…. Yes what do you want???

Errr maam is Arnav sir here?? Asked Kushal

Arnav?No he left…. Saying she slammed the door on his face

Left! But sir called me saying he is here. DM help me… Murmured Kushal

Sh…Sh…. look here Kushal…..

Huh….. DM are you calling me saying he looked up….. but why do you sound like a guy

That is because it I am a guy you idiot

WHAT! I have seen your photo and statues in the temple. You are a women… don't tell me that it is false

STUPID Kushal look behind you yelled an annoyed Arnav. Kushal turned around and was shocked

Ahem Ahem…… he heard Arnav clear his voice… give me you shirt Kushal…

Why sir…no way…

Shut up and give it to me… cant you see I'm not wearing anything… saying so he stepped out of the tree where he was hiding to save his modesty. Seeing him like this, Kushal blushed furiously and ran towards the car. Unbelievable growled an irritated Arnav

Kushal came back with a bag… he placed it near the tree and ran from there. Arnav looked into it and found his clothes inside it. He wore it and sat inside the car. The car started and stopped near a park. What the…. Why did we stop here…

Sir I'll get you something to eat sir… pls sit here I'll be back… saying Kushal left behind a silent Arnav…

Apart from Nani and amma no one has bothered abt my food…. Strange man… thinking Arnav smiled even though he was annoyed of being left high and dry for just getting a name wrong… can you believe that.. what happened the the term wats in a name anymore…he thought grrrmmm.. he heard a noise from his stomach… as an answer Kushal came there with 4 packets of food.

Sir food sir… but nothing fancy sir.. Saying he placed 2 packets in front of Arnav and moved to another chair and sat with the other packets for himself.

Hmmm…. Ahhhaaa.. wah kya khana bana hai… Kushal said relishing the food in front of him. Arnav looked at Kushal in awe….

Do you mind with the sound system… Arnav said.. he was feeling weird with the sound. He felt some twitching below his belt. Its nothing Arnav just sexual frustration of not finishing the act tonight… yap that's it… dude just chill… he took a deep breath and fed his hungry stomach….

Sir take this also…. Kushal placed a packet which contained jelabies… I cant have it… take them..

They are good sir… try them….. Kushal said hopefully..

I cant…I'm diabetic…

What… how.. when… I'm so sorry… this is miserable. DM how could you.. he said pouting… it was a weird scene to see a man pouting, and Arnav wad amused seeing this.

So I gather you love sweets??

Yes sir.. cant live without it… have to have them once a day at least… he said grinning… then his facial expressions changed and he said we have to go home quickly sir you need to take you medicines with in half hour after food…. Saying he ran towards the car…. Shaking his head Arnav murmured unbelievable and slipped into his seat and headed home.

End of flashback

He felt his stomach grumbling. He had not eaten in the Dhaba too, suddenly a plate of sandwich appeared with a glass of juice in front of him… he accepted it. You are welcome… said a very soft and melodious voice… he looked up and was shocked to see a smiling kushi standing there….

This is a long one… read and comment.. will not give any update next week fully… will be free next year oly… If I don't come… wish you all a very happy new year…. Don't forget to press the like button below…

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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Awesome part. Loved it. Please continue the way you planned it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like it but u can do much better thn this & abt ur decision of raping up this story, i would just say tht u knw bettr wht u want to write & how u want to end it.so if u wish to end it it's ur choice bt i luv to read ur work.will b waitng for ur update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay!! Finished reading the chapters..
After reading the prologue I was like "what the"😲.. Arnav had dreamt on a guy..seriously!!! Don't tell me maa da laadla bigad gaya😛.. But I had a doubt that may be kushal was Khushi and yap all my doubts had been cleared after reading the first chapter..
Owow!! NK introduced Khushi as his fianc and Arnav felt hurt to hear that..
Anjali loves kushal the guy for Arnav is feeling something and after hearing this Arnav got fainted..
What will I write about chapter 4!!! The flashback was so hilarious.. Arnav was kicked out from a house and that too without any clothes because he called his instant girlfriend mukhti, Gracie 🤣... Still laughing... My stomach is hurting now.. Lavanya's character is so funny😆
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Edited by Humayra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Drishuluv

I like it but u can do much better thn this & abt ur decision of raping up this story, i would just say tht u knw bettr wht u want to write & how u want to end it.so if u wish to end it it's ur choice bt i luv to read ur work.will b waitng for ur update.



you know i feel the same way.. that is why planning to rap it up...i had to give this update as i wont b giving it for the next few days... it may take 10 to 15 days too.. so oly... i feel there is something miss... but cant seem the put my finger on it... anyway .. will try it next time.. thanku for the frank comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its hilarious
why did khushi bcum kushal 4 1 month b4 he vent away??????
khushi n kushal don't knw eachother or vat????
poor arnav he is thiinking himself as gay🤣 truly sad
n interesting concept
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CHAPTER 5:

It's all cos of me that Bhai is in the hospital today cried a broken Anji

Shshhh baby don't do this... it's not u. His sugar levels dipped… don't stress yourself consoled Kushal..

I cannot face him now on Kushal… I love him as much as I love you.. I don't know how I'll face him in the morning..

Baby, just take rest... We'll talk in the morning… I'll handle it ok... I'll talk to your brother saying he lifted Anji and placed her on the bed; he tucked her in, placed a warm kiss on her forehead and whispered good night… and left….

Sleep was the last thing in Anji's mind… she wondered how one month ago Kushal dint exist for her and now she couldn't exist without him. He had defo changed in her eyes... he was no more the docile driver of her brother..

He had changed when he had left her standing on the road when she wanted to drive the car when she was drunk

He had changed when she had tried to insult him and he had just smiled at her immaturity

He had changed when he had slapped her for stripping in the pub drunk

He had changed when he had saved her from Shivam

He had changed that night fully... she remembered that night... the night when she had lost everything and gained one very precious thing… love… Anji's mind was running in all directions… She could not chose between Kushal and Arnav.. It was too late for that... she closed her eyes thinking of wat she shd do now…

The late dinner in the park bench was filling… he was contended... wat hunger does to a man thought Arnav... his thoughts were disturbed by mourning sounds coming from somewhere.. He looked here and there when his eyes stuck to a particular spot… he saw Kushi's eyes closed and her mouth munching something and mourning at the same time... he recognized the thing to be jelabies.. he saw how her mouth moved.. her lips suck the syrup from the jelablies before she took a small bite from it… how her tongue moved licking the syrup from her lips… his eyes followed a drop of syrup which dripped from the jelabi moving down her lips to her chin down her neck and down below..Suddenly Arnav felt very jelous of the jelabi.. How he wished he could be it at that moment... His mind was full of dirty thought when he heard Kushi call him

Kushi sat there enjoying her favorite sweet when she felt a gaze on her… she saw Arnav staring at her… she tried calling him twice… but her voice stopped when she looked at his eyes moving down… he was sweating and his eyes were dazed… she knew what he felt now… to stop her mind from thinking she just yelled his name… she then saw Arnav come out of his daze and look at her confused…

oww he looked so adorable.. Kushi thought… her naughty mind took control and her eyes moved towards his lower part…

Arnav was brought back from his thought by Kushi's voice.. he looked at her embarrassed face.. Before he could say or do anything he saw her smirk and look down below... his eyes followed her sight and then he realized his state.. the bulge in the pants was enough to prove to the world his position… he looked up to see Kushi turn herself around and move towards the main door of the hospital… she stopped and looked back and shook her head asking him to follow her..

What the... he whispered.. Never in his dreams did he imagine Kushi to act this way.. Oh he was in luck… smirking on his luck Arnav followed her hopefully

The date had gone perfectly for Lavanya… she was a happy girl... it had been more than a month and she felt alive... she was living her dream... She had secured a kinder garden job in lucknow and had been very happy.. and to manage her finance she had started her own small business at what she does nicely… dress people up… she had got the this idea from a book which she had read long before… in this business she dressed people for their important dates or days… be it for a wedding, bride seeing day, going on a date or simply dressing up for ones wedding anniversary… she had to select clothes, do make up if required chose accessories and dress her clients up for their special day…though she had trouble at first but later it was flourishing…all thanks to him..She had thanked God for sending an angel into her life to help her… first it was Kushal and now it is him... she remembered with a smile… it had been heartbreaking for her to leave Delhi… that day had been her worst but if not for that day, Lavanya would have not been so happy…

After her first civil meeting with Kushal, La found herself comfortable with him… he had become her shoulder to cry, a silent listener, and great shopper and lots more… her friends Pam and Tam had started to crib that she had no time for them now a days… la had started to feel she was in love with Kushal… he was adorable.. She loved it when he ate his jelabies like a starved kid… and how could she forget the pani puri bets they had... she smiled thinking of those times… she felt silly how she had thought she was in love with that man.. The man who had introduced herself to her... he was the man who had made her stand up to Arnav and her mom… he had given her the guts to break up with Arnav and tell her mom, she had a life... but all things were not as rosy as she had hoped..

She remembered how she had broke up with Arnav telling him she was in love with Kushal.. She saw Arnav freeze as she said that and left him in his cabin.. She had called her mom and told her she had broken up with Arnav… her mother had hauled and berated her… told her wat an idiot she was for throwing such an opportunity…. She had cursed La on her foolishness… and cut the call… all this dint hurt La as she had decided to propose Kushal tat day.. She had dressed up and called up Kushal to meet her at the hotel.. There she had romantically booked the whole hall and decorated it up… she wanted to surprise Kushal but was intern surprised.. Kushal had rejected her outright.. He seemed shocked… he had just said no and said la was not his type and fled from the place… la was broken…. She felt her mom being right.. She was an idiot and fool… she went back to her house and packed her bags.. She wanted to leave this place.. she was done with the packing, when she found a bottle of vodka.. she took it along with her. She climbed into her car with her luggage... she drove almost throughout the night…

She stopped at a place.. She knew she was near a city… it was early morning.. she was a bit sleepy too… without thinking she picked the bottle near her seat and gulped it down quenching her dried throat … she sat down and started driving… her eyes were droopy and then blank.. She remembered nothing… her eyes opened in the hospital room when she heard a voice calling guy. Sorry she had wishpered in a broken voice.. The stress of the previous remembrance had brought out tears in her eyes and she had broken down crying in the arms of a stranger who had now become an angel, her own personal guardian angel….

So how was this one.. sorry for the late update.. I had said I'd update by fri or sat but sorry family time and dint get time for all this… so sorry… pls comment and like it… one more help.. if you guys know anyone who could do a banner for me do tell me I need someone for this..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I told my bestie about your this ss and after hearing it she was so excited.. Everyday she would ask me if you had updated it and my answer would be no.. Finally today I can call her and tell her that you've updated..
Awesome update...
Poor la.. Hope she'll get her Mr. Perfect soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am so sorry for being so late but its all becoz of my loose connection of internet, sometime it behave like me😆 now coming to d story WHATS GOING ON??? seriously lavanya was in love with kushal ?? i know it must b khushi its natural for people to fall in luv with her bt lavanya did fall for her🤣 i wonder wht was bechari khushi bitiya's reaction to it??& wht abt arnav he must b in state of shock after la's confession😆 good to knw tht la find someone else nahito...bt nw d questn is who is th someone?? is he our NK babua??

And wht is this chakkar of "anjali is in luv with kushal" ?? who is this anothr kushal pls do tell it seriously driving me crazy... but all in all nice update & do update soon..(did i said smthng wrong?😉)

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