MN FF*Kuch to hain Tujhse Raabta*#2 Epilgou P-125

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Thank you so much guys for your love and appreciation...
Because of you only...

I could able to open the second thread of my first FF...

OMG..!!!
I am so Happy...

I want to thank each and everyone from the bottom of my heart...


Thank you so much guys...
Thanks a lot...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I want to thank everyone...


Thank you so much Guys...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo 4 open new thread shaffy
but why did u open this thread so soon
i mean at least u should complete 150 pages

any way i read update


shaffyyy jani
wonderful wonderful update

u beautifully arranged the whole thing
loved the way Mayur were so excited to meet with each other
their feelings,preparation, nervousness, everything was damn beautiful..

the song was so suited with d entire scene,, wow mayank booked the whole restaurant and decorated beautifully to make her special.that was awesome
very nice update shafu
u did a great job




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faria.

congo 4 open new thread shaffy
but why did u open this thread so soon
i mean at least u should complete 150 pages

any way i read update


shaffyyy jani
wonderful wonderful update

u beautifully arranged the whole thing
loved the way Mayur were so excited to meet with each other
their feelings,preparation, nervousness, everything was damn beautiful..

the song was so suited with d entire scene,, wow mayank booked the whole restaurant and decorated beautifully to make her special.that was awesome
very nice update shafu
u did a great job





Thanks a lot


Actually the list of replies was very long it occupies my alot space
for that i opened the new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kuch To Hain Tujhse Raabta


Part-15


Mayank again called her with the same tone in his voice,"Nupur, Look at me..."

Nupur looked up towards him, he was most handsome man on the earth she could have ever seen.His eyes were so deep she want to drown in them, his tonned body and most precisely his cute little smile that was making her shy to the root.But still words didn't have courage to comeout from her mouth though her lips have given the indication through her little smile.

Mayank was already lost on her angleic beauty and when adds her smile to it, he was totally mesmerized by it he couldn't stop himself from saying,"Nupur, You are beautifull"

No one has complimented Nupur like this, it was her first compliment and she kinda liked it because it from him to her and that means a lot to her.

Slowly Nupur open her lips that could barely move but still she could able to say them in an audible sound,"You too looking very handsome...Mayank!!!"

Mayank forget about her compliment given to him as soon as he heard his name from her mouth he lost on those lips from where she spoke his name, he want to grab, them, love them...Putting a break in his thought he replied her through his killing smile and gesture her to come towards him by putting forward his hand in front of her.

Nupur move forward taking baby steps,Her view getting more and more as she was approaching towards him,she kept her eyes down as she know she will drown in those see deep eyes.

She stopped a few centimetrs away let's assume to be precise mmm she stopped at a distance of 65 cms from his side.

Silence was speaking volume, their eyes were talkig with each other, and they were even getting hesitate to start their conversation, but at last some one has to break the ice so they both started at the same time,"Hy...!"

Smiling at each other they again spoke together,"I am Mayank-Nupur";

Again gave a cute smile to each other finally Mayank initiated their TALK

Mayank:"So...Nupur...!!! How are you...?"

Nupur was already very shy to say anything and things are getting difficult for her to even reply.Even she can't able to meet his gaze and was fidgting with the corner of her duppatta.

Mayank:"Nupur..."

Nupur:"hmmm"

Mayank:"I want to hear my name Nupur...atleast you can call my name please...

The plead of Mayank was so affecting that instantly she rose her head and look into his eyes,she saw something in his eyes,their was a wait as if a child is waiting for getting it's precious thing.

With atmost soft and slow whisper she called out his name

Nupur,"Mayank..."

A bright smile formed on his lips and seeing him smiling like this she felft so content, so glad from inside, she reciprocate him through her million dollar smile.

The sun was setting down, leaving his darn red colour on two of them standing and rest in black as if reflecting them to the sky which is getting darker time by time.

A small light penetrating from the roof of the restraunt was reflecting on them.The situation was bcoming a little awkward as none of them were speaking or were talking freely as they do while they chat.

Mayank,"It seems we should set on our pc and then talk to each other"

A frown appears on Nupur's forehead and she asked him,"Why so...!!!Then what's the need of meeting then."

Mayank,"Because we are not even talking with each other else if would have been chatting, we chat around 4 to 5 hrs and here hardly word we spoke"

A small smile appeared on her lips.Yes...!!! What he was saying was true

Nupur,"I truly admit with you Mayank..."

Mayank:"Hmm...Vese I am angry with you..."

Nupur:"Mayank...suddenly...why are you so angry from me"

Mayank:"Nupur...You have to figure out yourself but I am angry from you..."

Saying so he turned his face showing his back to her and folded his hand across his chest, showing he is really very angry.

Nupur was stunned with his this sudden reaction, she need not able to understand why he is behaving like this but the one thing was good he was looking so cute when he pouted and made a cute fury face.

Nupur:"Mayank...!"

She says so cutely that it was making difficult for Mayank to pretend to act angry to her,a cute smile appeared on his face but soon he recovered and straighten his face and sternly replied to her,"What...!!!"

Nupur was controlling her laughter as he was making cute sweet boy angry face making him to look more adorable,she came infront of him and holding her ears she cutely says to him,"sorry"

"Mayank...I am sorry...Please forgive me and please tell me my mistake"

And gave him million dollor smile.Mayank was actually pretending to be fury and seeing her cute puppy face he couldn't able to hold longer and gave her his cute sweet smile,"Okay...!!!For now you are now forgiven"

Nupur"But Mayank what is my mistake...!"

Mayank:"Nupur ...you were late here by 34 sec..."

Nupur was totally in shock he was behaving too childish but somewhere she was happy to see him like this.

Mayank:"Nupur..."

Nupur:"Hmmm..."

Mayank:"I am feeling hungry..."

Sayinf this he grins to her, caughting what he said she too giggled with him.Mayank treated her like a princess; He let her settle down on the chair.

He had ordered food and quitely.

Silent was talking between them.And moreover nothing more words are needed that time to describe their feelings,anxiety about each other,the way they were glancing time to time while having their lunch was enough proof of it.

The dim light was creating a very cozy environment between them,they were not feeling uncomfortable in other's presence rather it was providing a relaxing feel to them as if they known to each other from past many days ,it doesn't seems that they had their first meet.Well right now it was the aura of their friendship.

But this silence was taking a lot between the two as Nupur was too shy to say anything and her Mayank wasn't getting appropriate topic to start his conversation.He cleared his throat a bit to gather her attention which he got instantly, well somewhere she was waiting for him to do something so that they could atleast put a stop to this silence.

Mayank:"Nupur...you I was right...!"

She gave a confused look to him and raised her eyebrows as if asking him 'what'

Mayank:"No need to frown too much...I was right as I thought the one who is having such a mesmerizing voice must ver beautifull and I was right as you are very beautifull..."

Nupur was a little bit a taken back as no one in her life has complimented her and that too with so much purity.

He continued furthur,"You are really looking like a princess but there is a problem..."

Again her forhead bows tighted and she asked,"What...""

Mayank"You frown a lot.....".So what should I call you a frowning princess.........No.........it doesn't looking so nice........something else should be there *after taking a brief pause*How about frowning kiddo........better Na........I think this is the best..."

With that he gives his flirtious smile and sood received a napkin thrown by Nupur to him.She in very high in rritation said him to close that topic but he replied,"But I love to tease you,I like a small blush that appears on your face Nupur........"

"Mayank....................."

"Okay.............Okay...I won't do happy..."

Smiling brightly,"Very Much"

"There is a surprise for you Nupur...................."

Very excitedly she asked,"What"

"Well you have to listen okay....so concentrate...."

"Okay....Sir...."

"Okay I'll start...."

"Hmmm"

Clearing his throat he continued

Words escape me

At this moment

That seems like the end

Yet it is only the beginning

When friendships are close

And dreams are far

You were there for me.

Tears fill me

With memories of both good and bad

Some nearly forgetton

Yet all dear to the heart

You were there for me.

In times of trouble

And in times of thanks

You stood by my side

And held me up.

Through your ever-patient ears

To your comforting hugs

You were there for me.

From that first day

When I saw you and knew

That you would love me for who I was

You were there for me.

And until the day

When we are old and gray

I will always know that

You are there for me.

With that Both were in tears where Mayank was having a kind of wait in his moist eyes, Nupur was having feeling of being the most special to some one, she places a special space in some one's life though as a friend but still had and that was enough for her she immediately replied to him,"I will be there for you........till the end of this eternity".

Mayank was waiting this answer and got to know that she'll be always besides him.This is one of the special and best evenings for both of them, today they had actually taken their friendship more deep and reached a new level of understanding.

Today a special type conversation their eyes were doing, these emergence of new feelings were talking toll in their heart but still were unknown to their mind which could give instructions to their entire.

Meherbaani VO jaate jaate kar Gaya...

Kuch to hain tujhse Raabta...



Hope you like it..


Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww that was superb part dear loved Mayur moments
do continue soon
P.S...i agree with Faru--you should've finished the first thread before opening second as its rule to complete 150 pages of thread before opening another:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shafuuu oye fantastinc update yaar
haye the date was so perfect

both were nervous yet very excited to meet each other..
loved the way mayur celebrate their special day..
it was indeed beautiful
both compliment each other..
superb part- they were very comfortable with each to other
mayur frship ek aur step age le gayi- and i m loving it..

excellent yaar
keep it up

Edited by Faria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo for the new thread...
n part was too good...
continue soon...
luv u... :-)

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