MN FF*Kuch to hain Tujhse Raabta*#2 Epilgou P-125 - Page 54

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

shaffyyy

when u'll update this FF


Most probably..tomorrow..
actually suffering from cold so couldn't get time to do some editing in the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hy guys..

Here is my next part
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edit... Comment on Part 30

Shaffyyy- OMG both mayank and Nupur got selected as best writer and best publisher around the country.

Wow what a great success. Not only personal life ' they r also lucky for each other in professional life also'

And they were so much excited abt it-een I m also very happy for them as they deserve it..

Hey hey the shopping part was damn cute'hehehehehehe saari ki line lag gayi.. ye mayank bhi na- really nupur was very special to him..

Oye how long Mayank will hide his feelings frm Nupur- yaar ab bata dena chaiye na???

Hmm I think this trip will bring our mayor close to each other- yeee

I m ery excited abt this trip

Fabulous update sweet heart..

Very well written

Thanx for ur update inspite of ur poor health.

Take care jani

Love ya

Edited by Faria. - 12 years ago
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Part 29 Page 81

Kuch To Hian Tujhse Raabta

Part 30

Mayank felt very embaressed as every one staring at him in surprise.He starightly moved towards his cabin fall on his chair, today the distance from his house to his office seems to miles away.
Soon he was got busy his office work and payed his full concentration to it.He was working when he received a phone call which just increased the curve of his lips, thanking the caller he immediately called Nupur.

Mayank:"Nupur...'are you free in evening'."

Nupur:"Yes'...!!!What happened...?"

Mayank:"Good..'don't make any plans'I'll come home at evening'there is surprise for you'okay I have a lot of work bye ..."

Nupur:..."But'Mayank'" by the time he had ended the call,Nupur was in state of confuse,what's the matter could be'she decided to wait till evening as she knows Mayank very well he won't tell her..Sighing she resumes to her work wondering what the surprise Mayank is is talking about.

...


As the clock strike 5 the doorbell ringed indicating Mayank is here,running down from stairs she opened the door to see much excited Mayank,before she could question or ask about him he pushed her aside and himself entered the house.

"Aunty Kahan hain Nupur"

"Who'Maa ki important meeting aagyi thi so she will be late in coming'"

"Oh...Okay'"

"Mayank ab to batao tumhara surprise kya hain'"

"Batata hoon'first you sit down'"

He grabbed her from shoulders sending shivers to Nupur body still try to say calm but this time Mayank too felt something like a current ran through his hands.He made her sit down and asked her to close her eyes but Nupur was not listening to him so he himself closed her eyes by putting his palm on his eyes.A new kind of sensation ran through his body,he couldn't able to utter a word whereas Nupur's condition was also as same as Mayank.After a pause gathering some courage allowing the saliva to move down to wet this dried throat he said,"Okay Nupur now open your eyes.."

"Nupur opened it and found Mayank's smiling face,indeed it was very beautifull surprise for her and she is liking this surprise,she came out of trance when Mayank snaps his fingers infront of his eyes and continued,"Okay Nupur..now listen to me very carefully'In afternoon I got a call, we have to go Delhi'for a success party and before you question let me complete your book has be considered among top 10 best books in human nature around the whole country and also my publishing house as one of the most selling copies of the year among the fight of 20 publishing house mine was choosen under top 5'"

Nupur was dumbstruck for a moment she didn't react,Mayank was keenly waiting for her reaction not getting any response he shook her from her shoulder,she came from shock and then slowly her lips curve and smiled whole heartedly'wetting her eyelids,"M'Ma..Mayank...you mean that I... my 'my Book has been one of the best books around the country..."Mayank just simply nodded his head,"OMG..!!! Mayank...I am so happy'"She hugged him as tight as she could and Mayank too reciprocate her feelings, it was one of their best days."I am too happy Nupur finally your dream is achiveing success I am so happy for you'"They broke the hug and Mayank noticed some tears formed in er eyes before they fall he stopped them there by rubbing his thumb over her eyeslids.She shuddered a bit under his soft touch but composed herself soon before this go noticed by Mayank, even Mayank too felt something when he touched her eyes it seems his heart is screaming but it couldn't be able to reach till his ears.

"So start your packing we are leaving tomorrow morning be ready at sharp 8'o clock, I drive you till Delhi..."

Nupur gave a confused look to him,"Mayank why we are going Delhi'"

"Nupur I told you Na there is success party'"

"You know na I don't like parties and won't be comfortable there'"

"I know Nupur but it is for your success, you have to be there I know you are nervous'"

"Mayank I won't be able to talk to anyone properly and would make own joke there, please Mayank try to understand."

Mayank in a stern voice,"Nupur how long you are going to hide from your fear'one or the other day you have to face it and why are you so scared I'll be there with you Nupur'"

This line of his has actually boosted up confidence in her she agreed after a lot of persuading she agreed to him.

"That's like a good girl'okay pack for about two days okay and yes there is dress code for party you have came in black formals'"

Listening to the dress code Nupur exclaimed,"But Mayank I do not have any formals in black colour..."

"Then what are we waiting for let's go for shopping'"

"No'No... I'll take Gunjan with me'"

"Please Nupur ye party jitni ki tumhare liye important hain utini hi mere liye bhi hain Please'allow me to select your party dress Please Nupur..."

Nupur was actually feeling uncomfortable and this was easily reflecting on her face, Mayank understood it and said to her,"Don't worry ,we will buy a decent formal Sari for you whom you could wear in party Okay'"She smiled and nodded her head and both of them headed towards the shopping mall.

As soon as Mayank entered the shop everyone in the staff greeted him warmly and the Manager himself present himself to serve him.Mayank ordered them classy yet decent black colour sari for Nupur, imediately the whole staff rushed to fullfill his order, seeing his impact on them Nupur couldn't able to control herself and giggled,"Mayank, kya tum bhi bechare tumhare chakkar mein baki kisi cusmtomer ko attend nahi kar rahe'"

"Nupur mere liye tum sase zayeda important ho aur in logo k liye mein so...indirectly they have serve which is important to me'ab baaten band karo let's select a sari for you fir tum mere liye bhi ek acha business suit select kar dena'"

Nupur felt nice when he referred her important in his life ,sshe felt so good ,shrugging her thoughts she said."Mayank vo sab to thik hain but mujhe business suits ka koi idea nahi hain'."

"Acha thik vo sab baad mein I am formost excited to select a dress for you'chalo tum betho sofe pe they'll bring some sari'"

Within few minutes a huge lump of sari was infront of Mayank and Nupur, Nupur was hell confused to what to select and what to leave."Mayank mere samjh mein kuch nahi aa raha hain mujhe to sab achi lag rahi hain'"

"To sab ki sab le lete hain...what say'"

Nupur pouted her lips and was looking so cute making difficult for Mayank to hold his hormones,controlling himself he assured her,"Okay let me select one of them you sit here'".

He took the piles of saris which were selected by Nupur and after lot o lot discussion and agruments Mayank finally decided on one Sari."Wow...Mayank its so beautifull'I must say you have a classy taste'but don't you think it's gonna be little bit of expensive'"

"So who says you to pay the bill, assume it it's a gift from my side..."

"But Mayank I could I 'I mean...its so expensive Mayank ...no Lemme buy it..."

"No Nupur I said Na'it's a gift from my side okay and I don't want any of your arguments now let's go to men section"*Facing to the Manager*"Will you please pack this dress with other necessarity things related to it"

Nodding his head Manager moved towards the billing section leaving no choice for Nupur,"Mayank you are so stubborn..."

"Thanks for the compliment'Okay forget about this tell me how about this one..."

"No'I think this will suit you'"It was black Coloured Armaani suit with giving a very classy yet descent taste.It took hardly 30 minutes to Select Mayank's dress.
Paying the bill they headed towards the food section.

Mayank:"God..!!!I am damm hungry'Nupur you girls take how much time to select a dress'."

Nupur:"Oh...Please we take so much time so that you boys couldn't point out us ki ye acha nahi this is not goos,you are not looking beautifull,kuch to ache se pehen leti and blah blah blah.. ..."

Mayank:*Moves his face little bit closer to her*"Oooh'.saaf saaf kyu nahi kehti you all take time to seek our attention"

Nupur eyes flutter in shyness and lowered her head as somewhere Mayank was right and infact she too want to look beautifull infront of him...
Diverting their topic she continues,"Let's order something I am hungry.."She was not looking to him and somewhere her pink blotches cheek was leaving him to stare her shamelessly in front of the whole crowd of mall.
Not getting any response from him Nupur looked upwards only to have a eyelock with him'today his eyes were speaking different language'Soon their eyelock was distracted by the waiter who was standing besides them to take their order.Mayank ordered their food.Rest their food was went in silence only their eyes were speaking with them and their heartbeat was conveying messages, rest they hardly cared about the other world.

Mayank dropped Nupur at her home and remind her of tomorrow's journey,"Be ready I pick you okay..."

"Don't worry... I'll be on time...bye..."

"Bye..."

Entering her house Nupur informed about her Delhi trip to her Mom.Mrs.Bhushan was very happy with her daughter's success and also for Mayank she immediately called him and congratulate him.Nupur too informed about it to Gunjan she was also very much happy and that could be easily sense by Nupur as her voice was coming out of phone.She packed her bags and laid down as she has to wake up early in the morning,as soon as she closed her eyes she saw smiling face of Mayank infront of her eyes.Nupur shockingly opened her eyes

*What is this, this shouldn't be happen'ye kese...Mayank'but how'ye feelings those whom I had buried in my heart year before why are they coming out, kyu aajkal sabkuch badla badla lagta hain, kya Nupur tu bhi Na...it's just because still had those feelings for Mayank just forget about it and closed them.*

As soon as she closed her eyes again Mayank's face flashes infront of her eyes, his eyes were oozing so much passion, and she jerkly opened her eyes.

*ye nahi hona chahiye,ye kyu ho raha,why I am being attracting towards him more and more these days.Uss din bhi jab Mayank ne mujhe uss goon se bachaya tha,I do I felt something infront in that Mayank,jiss tarah vo mujhe party mein stare kar raha than why I felt goosebumps,ye sab to mein bahut pehle apne ander bury kar chuki thi,kyu ye feeling itni strong hoti jaa rahi hain,kyu aisa lagne laga hain ki uski eyes kuch aur kehti hain aur vo kuch aur kyu uss din jab usne mujhe hug kiya tha mujhe console kar raha tha mere darr ko kam raha tha I felt to be in his arms the whole night,why I like his possessive nature towards me,kya mein last time bahut jaldbaazi kar di thi,kya ab actually mein kuch badal raha hain,kya aisa ho sakta hain last year jaisa mein soch rahi thi vo sab ab ho raha hain,agar ho raha hain to iss baar mein nahi Mayank ko initiate karna padega,aur agar nahi but pata nahi kyu mera mann aur mera dil keh raha hain ki ab sach mein kuch badlega kuch acha hone wala bahut acha ,kuch badlega ache k liye why I felt a positive feeling,why I felt ki jo ehsaas mujhe hua hain vohi aajkal Mayank ko hone laga hain aur vese bhi vo mujhe ab apni best friend nahi kehta bas kehta hain you are important to me kyu mujhe ye sun kar acha lagne lagta hain kyu mujhe bahut acha laga jab usne kaha ki mein yaad karu vo haazir why I felt a sense of belonging towrads him,why I felt ki vo sach much mere liye kuch feel karne laga hain,uski aankhen kyu mujhe itna ghoorti hain kyu mere ander jhakne ki koshish karti hain,kya karu..Iss baar sab kuch time aur Mayank per chod doo'karne doon use initiate...kya yahi sahi hain...shayad...shayad mujhe uske dil mein chupe huye darr ka pata bhi chal jaaye'chalo abhi k liye filhaal so jaati hoon'aur ab to vo hi aayega sapno mein chalo sone ki koshish to karti hoon'*

Finally she drifted to sleep unaware of the certitude that she had already taken someone else's sleep.
On the other hand how hard Mayank try he couldn't able to sleep.Nupur's face is again and again flashing infront of his eyes sometimes a smiling face , sometimes she teases him and sometimes a passionate filled gaze which give goosebumps to his each body tissue.The long journey with her to Delhi alone was itself making him restless,what if he couldn't able to control himself,the major issue which has taken his sleep is that if he would be alone with Nupur he feared he might do something which would not in his control.Now 'a-days his feelings are getting out of control.Leaving everything on time and his heart he tried to slept as he has long journey tomorrow.


Hope you like it...



Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy


Most probably..tomorrow..
actually suffering from cold so couldn't get time to do some editing in the next part


OH ho
Get Well soon dear
and take care urself
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.


OH ho
Get Well soon dear
and take care urself



Thanks Dear...

My head is just spinning like anything..
but ow i am quite good...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy



Thanks Dear...

My head is just spinning like anything..
but ow i am quite good...



oye did u take medicine????
plz rest kar.:(

maine comment edit kya- teri update ki upar do check it
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey shaffy nice updated
loved it ohhh mayank "mere liye tumse zyada important koi nahi hai" so cuteee... nupur's book in top 5 wow so happy

very nice cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.


edit... Comment on Part 30

Shaffyyy- OMG both mayank and Nupur got selected as best writer and best publisher around the country.

Wow what a great success. Not only personal life ' they r also lucky for each other in professional life also'

And they were so much excited abt it-een I m also very happy for them as they deserve it..

Hey hey the shopping part was damn cute'hehehehehehe saari ki line lag gayi.. ye mayank bhi na- really nupur was very special to him..

Oye how long Mayank will hide his feelings frm Nupur- yaar ab bata dena chaiye na???

Hmm I think this trip will bring our mayor close to each other- yeee

I m ery excited abt this trip

Fabulous update sweet heart..

Very well written

Thanx for ur update inspite of ur poor health.

Take care jani

Love ya







They are just lucky,...
they just help each other bring their best out in them..that's all...


They always their to support each other regarding in terms of carrer..
okay..
and yes..even I am excited about their trip..
I hadn't elaborated the journey much.but...still
there is something..which is very close to me...

You are right they will come close...soon..
and Mayank would accept that he has fallen in love with Nupur...


Much more is awaiting...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Mayank and Nupur are falling for each other...
lovely mayur scene

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