MN FF*Kuch to hain Tujhse Raabta*#2 Epilgou P-125 - Page 37

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

fabulous update Shaffy
awww trio convo was awesome
hehehehehe Nups mom and Maynk made a team - they were teasing nupur like hell...LOL LOL
poor nupur - bechari akeli par gayi.
hehehehe enjoyed their leg pulling part..
Nups mom and Mayank's convo was very emotional and touchy
loved the whole update
beautifully written
keep it up







Yes...Now Nups Mom and Mayank are in one team...

Even i also enjoyed writing their leg pulling when i wrote this...

Yes..the way Mayank was telling about their friendship to her mother was really touchy...

He felt that nothing should be hided from mother and after all she is his best friend's mother how could he hide this friendship from her...
he values the love of mother because he has deprived of it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnim.

wonderful part
loved it



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Posted: 12 years ago
hey wat n update.luved bonding btwn mayu n nupur's mom.n pls yaar do pm me.u always forgot
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Originally posted by: Anjaanifarah

hey wat n update.luved bonding btwn mayu n nupur's mom.n pls yaar do pm me.u always forgot






Okay i'll keep that in mind...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here is my next part
Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Part 24 Page 57

Kuch To Hain Tujhse Raabta

Part 25

Mrs.bhushan,"You have an awesome voice Mayank'."

Mayank: "Thanks Aunty'."

Nupur: "Haaan Mayank indeed you have a very good voice..."

Mayank: "Bas kar ab'..."

Nupur: "Are Mayank ye kya hain..."

Mayank: "Kya..."

Nupur: "Tumare cheeks pe'"

Mayank: "Kya hain..."

Nupur: "Arre ye itne red Jo horahe hain'."

Mayank: "Nupur..."

Nupur: "Mom...dekho to koi sharma raha hain..."

Mrs.bhushan:"Bas kar Nupur ...tu bhi'."

Mayank: "Dekha Aunty aises hi tang karti rehti hain mujhe..."

Mrs.bhushan:"Mayank tu bhi bas kar'tum dono ...chote bacho se kam nahi ho'"

They sat down and chat a little'after sometime Mayank took permission to leave,"Aunty, Nupur, I should take a leave now...bahut raat ho gayi hain...'"

Mrs.bhushan:"Okay beta'aate rehna'."

Mayank: "Sure Aunty'...ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hain..."

And both shared a small hug, while Nupur escort him to the door, till then there eyes were talking,"okay then...bye...'"

Nupur: "Mayank...'"

Mayank: "Hmm..."

Nupur: "Keh bhi do...'varna tumhe raat bhar nind nahi aayegi...'"

Mayank: "Kya Nupur..."

Nupur: "Now don't try to behave to be very innocent'...tell me...what's going on in your heart..."

Mayank: "Nupur, you know today I felt so much peace in my heart 'I just lovee Aunty she is so sweet...'"

Nupur: "So to hain'.and I am glad she liked you too...'"

Mayank: "Well'ab kya kare'no one can resist my charm..."

Nupur gave aplayfull hit on his shoulder,"ouch..!!!Nupur dard hota hain...'."

Nupur: "Mayank, tum aur tumahre pj's'...i am just so fed up with them."

Mayank: "Nupur..."*after a pause...*

Mayank: "Can I hug you, please I want to believe what's happening is real nothing is dream and if it is a dream I don't want to wake up..."

He envelpoes her body into his and sequeesed her in order to belief that what's happening is the reality,Nupur was just moving her hands on his back,calming him,even she too indeed that hug,want to felt the warmth of his body against her's.

After long time they broke their hug and greeted each other goodnyt, Nupur signalled him to call her when he reached him where Mayank assures her through his eyes.

They thought they had started their lost friendship in a new way ,unkown to the fact that they had already left their friendship behind long back,it's something else,something which is much more pleasant than anything thing in this world,which is top of everything even God,will able to understand it,only time could tell.

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Next day Nupur also told about Mayank to her except hiding her those feelings which emerge for sometime before in her heart, Gunjan was indeed very happy as somewhere she believes that Mayank is not just a friend of Nupur now he has become someone more than a friend to her and silently prayed to god that everything happens to be good in her friend's life.Well for now they had left everything on time.

Days are converting into weeks and weeks into month and months have taken the shape of a year, it's been more than year to their friendship and with time their friendship has grew more strong and stronger.

This year apart from their friendship more things happen,Gunjan's engagement got fixed,Nupur's one of the dream come true,she wrote a book which was a big success for Nupur as a writer and for Mayank as publishing house.Even Mayank and Gunjan also became good friend on healthy terms.

It was gunjan's enagagement and Nupur has asked Mayank to picked her, he dressed himself in black armanni suite looking like a greek god whereas Nupur has dressed her self with a combi of silver and pink lehenga looking like an angel, yet it was a plane with little bit of embroidery on it.Mayank was mesmerized seeing angel decending down,he was totally lost in her beauty and was shamelessly staring her,Nupur snap her finger's infront of him to bring him back to the earth as he seems to be lost.

Nupur: "Mayank how am I looking..."

Mayank: "Beautifull...'"

Nupur: "Are you sure..."

Mayank: "You are a mesmerizing beauty Nupur, you are looking awesome today'no need to be nervous I am there with you Na...'"

Nupur: "Mayank yo are honestly na, are you sure ? I mean..."

Mayank: "I am 100% sure'So looking awesome...stop getting conscious now come let's go..."

Nupur: "Thanks come let's go we are already late ... ..."

Mayank: "Sure mam, after you'...my princess'..."

They reached her engagement and congratulate her and her would be.They were roaming seeing the arrangements and having the snacks.

Mayank:"so'Nupur, where are you taking your story now..."

Nupur: "I don't know Mayank."

Mayank: "What do you mean by, you don't know'"

Nupur: "I mean , see now you also know that Rati loves Arjun and somewhere they both have a soft feelings for each other,I want this time Rati to initiatie and should tell her feelings to him,but I don't know how to implement it'I am so confused ,please you give me an idea'...!!!"

Mayank:"Well, if I was on your place then, I would have done something of which Arjun would not neglect her feelings and even would confess to her at that moment only...'"

Nupur: "What please tell me',...???"

Mayank: "Why...'??"

Nupur: "Mayank please...'..."

Mayank: "Well for me, Rati should not convey her feelings to Arjun through words..."

Nupur: "Then how she should'?"

Mayank: *Looking into her eyes...*"She should kiss him right on his lips untill he surrenders himself to her...'"


Hope you like it...


Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update,di...👏
Loved MayUr and Mrs.Bhushan's bonding..
Aww..Mayu is blushing.. I wish I could see him like that
I agree with Mayank that no one can resist his charm😳
Wow!! Nupur wrote a book and Mayank published it..
I liked Mayank's idea.. Why don't Nupur kiss Mayank untill he admits he loves her😉☺️
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..❤️🤗

P.s- I'm first to comment

Edited by Humayra - 12 years ago

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