MN FF*Kuch to hain Tujhse Raabta*#2 Epilgou P-125 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.



yes i know i m d best i m d best i m d best
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btw maine kuch nehi kya😃

u deserve so much love yaar

u wrote so well that deserve our love and respect

we love u and appreciate ur work

keep it up- i m alwz with u

May ALLAH bless u

Just remember one thing u've to go a looong way... so dont stop writing.

keep writing more and more story







Thanks sweety...
be always with be...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

btw kya saach much aj update nehi milegi
i m desperately waiting for next part
u ended previous update at crucial moment



well dekhti hoon...


if possible kar dungi aaj
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww.. Di that was so sweet of you..
You are not a small writer but an amazing writer..
Your writing attracts us very much and that's why you've so many admirerears...
Love you sooo much di*hugs* muuuah!!!

P.s- specially loved the Teddies.. Thank you..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 20 Page 30



Kuch To Hain Tujse Raabta


Part 21


Mayank was shocked from her sudden behaviour; she was running aways from him, what's wrong with her'what had happened to her suddenly. He ran behind her and soon caught her arm, she was struggling from his grip, she do not want to talk to him, Mayank couldn't able to hold his temper anymore and angriliy asked her,"What's wrong with you Nupur, ho kya Gaya hain tumhe'why are running from me, why the hell you are behaving like this, have you gone mad"

Nupur (jerking her hands, and replying him in equal rage tone):"What happened to me'. What happened to me Mayank'first ask yourself Mayank ask yourself what you had done, ask yourself first what are doing, you know I am just so stupid, so stupid 'I am such a big Idiot *In a High Rage tone she said* Mr.Mayank Sharma listen me very carefully, I don't want to talk to you, mujhse kabhi tum baat mat karna and better not to try to talk to me..I'Just'I' I hate you Mayank'I hate you'I don't wanna see your face, just go'."

Mayank was in a complete shock his best friend; his only friend was saying never talk to him, never to see his face in future but why? What's happening to her, why she is overreacting, what's hurting her, why'? Does she don't want this friendship, but why'.?He was clueless what had happened few moments ago.He didn't even try to stop her,let her go,didn't even ask her what is actually paining her,why she is so angry from him and before he could ask she was far away from him,very far'.

Letting a sigh he went back towards home,he was feeling so low,he was hurt,her tears had hurt him more than her words because he knew somewhere he is responsible for her tears ,he wanted to apolozise her,but firstly he wanted to know his mistake,he couldn't able to figure it out.He was scolding himself for letting the tears come from her beautifull eyes.

Today he was deeply feeling guilty 'he picked up his guitar and randomly played a tune,unknown to him soon words too come from his mouth which took a shape of song'

If i ever run away
You can't find me any where
Would you stop searching for me?
If i ever run away
You can't find me any where
Would you stop searching for me?
Tou yeh faslay '.
lamha lamha bhadnay lagay
Be-khudi kay rastay
aur bhi bhadnay lagay Hain kyun..
Teri yadoun Mei, mein kho Gaya Hun kyun
. Teray khowaboun mein gum
Gaya Hun kyun''.

He rememered their first meet'.It was best evening of his life.

Dil yeh sambhalta nahi janay kyun

Ansu yeh ruktay nahi janay kyun

Tears drops from his eyes'..

Nadan yeh samajta nahi janay kyun
Bheer mein tou kho kyun Gaya janay kyun'.
Tou kyun' Hain kyun '.Yeh rastay tujhsay juda'.
Hain kyun'.Tou kyun' Yeh zindage mujhsay khafa'..

Thinking about her,he placed his guitar next to his bed and laid down he himself don't know when he dozed in sleep,may be the office tiredness and this huge emotional turmoil had made him tired physically and mentally so he slept,thinking about the events,happened this evening today which has shaken his world.

On the other hand Nupur was completely devastated, she never had happened things to be changed to this much extent'.

Rabba hai rabbaRabba hai rabba
Kisi da tu kya laageLo tute kache dhaage
Phire dil mara mara
Yaar da tuta Sahara
Kyun hai bhala ye dooriyan
Kyun hai Khala ab
Darmiyan Rabba tu itna bata de
Haan bata de baata de raaba
Ki Kara main hoon ki Kara ve
Haan bata de baata de rabba
Bhaga bhaaga phirta hai yeh dil
Hai jaane aisi kya hain mushkil
Tere bina jeena nahi hai
Tu to meri saason mein shaamil
Ho Teri duhaiya tere sadke soniya
De de rehaiya mainu dil se soniya
Dil ka kahi hai kya Sahara
Kyu hai bhala ye dooriyaan
Rabba tu itna bata de
Haan bata de baata de raaba
Ki Kara main hoon ki
Kara ve
Bata de baata de rabba

She was completely shattered,tears were not stopping from her eyes,she told her mother that she is not feeling well so that she couldn't able to get her situation.She remembered the time when she met him on that rainy day, that day something had actually been change between them.

Tere bina jiya Na mora laga tere bina
Tere bina jiya Na mora lage tere bina
Jiya Na laage Rootha rootha rehta hain yeh maan
Hai jaane aisi kya hain uljhan
Tere bin hasta nahi haiJaane mere kyun hai dushman
Ho meri tanhaiyan dase mujhko soniya
Hogi ruswaiya tere dil ki soniya
Mere nahi hai ab gujara
Kyun hai bhala yeh dooriyan

Nupur was crying silently she was cursing herself that how stupid she is, she decided never talk to Mayank, it's better if she won't talk to him, he has hurted her and she won't allow him to hurt her again, she has always taken herself as his friend but now she don't even want to have this friendship anymore and just want to break it.

Rabba tu itna bata deHaan bata de baata de raaba
Ki Kara main hoon ki Kara ve
Bata de baata de rabba

She knows it won't be easy for her but she won't allow him to enter her life again, she has expected so, much from him, when dreams shattered such badly it pained your heart very much and that what's happening with Nupur,her heart has been broken into pieces,she slept crying all the night.

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The morning was certainly not refreshing for both Mayank and Nupur.Mayank as usual engrossed himself in work he do not want to think about it atleast for some time, till he able to recognize his mistake.Though he misses her morning message their morning talk her meladious voice which used to make his day,everything about her he was missing,he wish he could able to get her back her again.Where as Nupur's morning was also not good,she was also missing his morning message,his talks,they used to make her day,but now she has to set her life back to the track,no more Mayank,no more his talks,she has to move in her life,sathe has to forget him no matter how but she has to. Nupur's behaviour have been changed after this incident , she tries to remain silent all the time even her silence could be sence by Mayank as she was not answering his calls , messages and also messages in I-f.He tries to call her many times but always she always cut his call.Mayank determined to manafoy Nupur as no matter what he can't afford to lose her. Neither Nupur had attened his calls nor had read any of his meassages, she deleted them without reading, she was so much angry from him that she won't forgive him ever. The situation between Mayank and Nupur were getting worsen day by day as Mayank's number of calls were increasing so as her rejection to his calls.It's been almost two weeks they had talked to each other and even Mayank is not getting any chance to have a visit to her house, no deals have been signed with her mother's company, he tries many times to call her to apologize her, it's been geeting difficult for him to pass each day without her, her voice.He was missing her badly her voice, her laughter, everything related to her.




Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh Shafyy!!🤗Yaar I love your writings...and really I mean it!I wait for your update everyday!😳Do continue it!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy



well dekhti hoon...


if possible kar dungi aaj


kab karegi tu??
i m here 4 20 mins
i've to go at 10.30(BD time)
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG u updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!


thank u sooo much sweety

love u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved this part!👏Oh no nupur is badly hurt...and poor Mayank!😒Hope everything resolve soon!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
sighhh it was very emotional and sad part
i felt bad for both mayank and Npur
yaar that was thw worst thing that could happen..
i can understand their pain.
i can understand no one were in fault
both of them cant stay without each other
i hope mayank will goes to nupur soon and then get to know what is in her mind
i wish jaldi sab kuch sole hojaye
in dono ki dukh bardasht nehi ho rahe
kuch tou kar jani

brilliant part
keep it up

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Posted: 12 years ago
Update!!!!!
Di it was more emotional update than the previous one...
Di please give a happy wala update soon na otherwise I'm gonna create Ganga-Jamuna by crying :P
When this dumbo(still my hero*blush*) mayank gonna realize what is his mistake and why Nupur is angry with him.. When he's gonna realize that the relation between him and Nupur is more than just friendship???
Waiting eagerly for the next part..
Thanks for sending me khas pm... It truly made me feel special..

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