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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faria.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here is my update...
Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Part 16 Page 6


Kuch to Hain tujhse Raabta


Part 17

Mayank turned on the radio so to pass their time, but this had only increaded the uncomfortableness in the cozy environment.

As soon as he switch the radio song played

Lagi aaj Saawaan ki phir VO jhadi hain

Lagi aaj Saawaan ki phir VO jhadi hain

Wohi Aag Seene Mein Phir Jal Padhi Hai
Lagi Aaj Sawan Ki Phir Woh Jadhi Hai

Mayank quickly changed the station before getting more embaressed in front of her where she was euqally getting shy and more embaressed.But the song which played next was just the limit to their emabressment.

Tip Tip Barsa Paani...

Paani ne aag lagayi'

Aag lagi dil mein to dil KO Teri yaad aayi
Teri yaad aayi to jal uthaa mera bheega badan
ab tum hi batao sajan main kya karu

This was the limit for both of them, this time Nupur switched of the radio and looked towards him, he too looked her back and both shared a brief eyelock before laughing on the situation.

They eyes were speaking volumes.Their eyelock was soon broken by the horn the cars behind his were giving, Mayank moved forward a little his car as the jam was still there'

Mayank:"Nupur, Can I share something to you'!"

Nupur:"Hmmm"

Mayank:"I am getting bored ", and with that he grins and faced towards her.

Nupur:"You know what Mayank even I am feeling bored too'"

Mayank:"And I am not going to put the radio on'"

Nupur:"well I know that but you can sing Na..."

Mayank:"Then why me'You initiate it..."

Nupur:"Mayank you write such a beautifull poems, you certainly have a good taste of songs, please please sing a song for me'"

Mayank:"Okay'just for the sake of yo,I am going to sing my favorite song and guess what I listen it just few days back and it had became my most favorite song.."

Nupur:"Then I really want to listen it...come on sing'..."

Mayank:"Okay'here we go'!"

Clearing his throat he started his song...


pal pal dil ke paas tum rahati ho - (2)
jivan meethi pyaas yeh kahati ho
pal pal dil ke paas tum rahati ho

He remembered the time when he first time heared her voice on phone.

har shaam aankho par teraa aanchal laharaaye
har raat yaado ki baaraat le aaye
main saans letaa hu
teri khushabu aati hai
ek mahaka mahaka sa paigaam laati hai
mere dil ki dhadakan bhi tere geet gaati hai
pal pal dil ke paas tum rahati ho

Today when he was thinking of her, desperately want to talk to her, she came infront of him as if god has listened his request and fullfilled at that instance of time only, and He looked towards her and sang these lines

Kal tujhako dekha tha Maine apane aangan me
Jaise kah rahi thi tum mujhe baandh lo bandhan me
Yeh kaisa rishta hai, yeh kaise sapane hain
Begaane ho kar bhi, kyun lagate apane hain
main soch main rahataa hu, dar dar ke kahata hu
pal pal dil ke paas tum rahati ho

Nupur was unknown that these lines were actually potraying his heart, his soul, even Mayank also didn't notice this.

Tum sochogi kyun itana main tumse pyaar karu
Tum samajhogi divaana main bhi ikraar karu
Divaano ki yeh baate divaane jaanate hain
Jalane me kyaa maja hai parvaane jaanate hain
Tum yu hi jalaate rahana aa aakar kwaabo me

He gave a cute smile to her and carried on his singing...

Pal dil ke paas tum rahati ho
Jivan meethi pyaas yeh kahati ho
Pal dil ke paas tum rahati ho...

After he finished ,he looked towards her,she was so quite,he raised his brows toask hoe did she liked it,she just gave her most beautifull smile where the corner's of her lips were touching her eyes"Mayank It's really very beautifull, you are an awsome singer..."

Mayank had already got the best compliment already, her smile was everything he wanted and he got it, his heart always desire that the smile on her face never leave her, never ever in her life, he will always be there to protect her from all the sorts of the miseries of the world to keep that smile on her face.

Mayank:"Okay now your turn..."Nupur:"Me...No way...I am a really very very bad singer Mayank, I won't sing"

Mayank:"Oh..!!Come one Nupur,be a sportsman please see I had also sing a song for you,so can't you sing a song for me" and made a cute puppy face,Nupur give him"This...is-not-done"look as she know he is playing her own trick on her.Nupur:"Okay...okay...I'll sing...I just hope you'll be able to bear it..."Mayank:"Don't worry about that...you just start"

Nupur:"Okay..."She joined her hands and prayed to god.

Mayank:"Nupur, you are singing a song, not going for any war for which you have to pray to God first..."

Nupur:"But I need some strength..."

Mayank:"But why...only I am there in this car, no one else it going to hear your song...and why to fear from me, I am your friend Na...now quickly start..."

Nupur:'Okay...okay...I am startimg...."

Clearing her throat she started, but again stopped,"Mayank, which song should I sing..."

Mayank in a pleading song,"Any Song Nupur, but please sing it..."

Nupur"Okay...baba okay...I am singing..."

Giving him a cute smile she started her song.

Tujhse naaraz nahi zindagi
Hairaan hoon main
Ho...Hairaan hoon main

Tere masoom sawalon se
Pareshaan hoon main
Ho...Pareshan hoon main
Tujhse naaraz nahi zindagi
Hairaan hoon main
Ho...Hairaan hoon main

Tere masoom sawalon se
Pareshaan hoon main
Ho...Pareshan hoon main

Jeene ke liye socha hi nahi
Dard sambhalne honge
Jeene ke liye socha hi nahi
Dard sambhalne honge
Muskuraaye to muskuraane ke
Karz utaarne honge
Muskuraun kabhi to lagta hai
Jaise hothon pe karz rakha hai

Ho...Tujhse naaraz nahi zindagi
hairaan hoon main
Ho...Hairaan hoon main

Tere masoom sawalon se
Pareshan hoon main
Ho...Pareshan hoon main

Zindagi tere ghum ne
humein rishte naye samajhaye
Zindagi tere ghum ne
Humein rishte naye samajhaye
Mile Jo humein dhoop mein mile
Chhanv ke thande saaye

Ho...Tujhse naaraz nahi zindagi
hairaan hoon main
Ho...Hairaan hoon main

tere masoom sawalon se
pareshan hoon main
Ho...Pareshan hoon main

Aaj agar bhar aayi hai
Boonde Bara's jaayengi
Aaj agar bhar aayi hai
Boonde Baras jaayengi
Kal kya pata inke liye
Aankhe Taras jaayengi
Ho...Jaane kab ghum hua kahan khoya
Ek aansoo chhupa ke rakha tha


Ho...Tujhse naaraz nahi zindagi
hairaan hoon main
Ho...Hairaan hoon main

tere masoom sawalon se
pareshan hoon main
Ho...Pareshan hoon main
Ho...Pareshan hoon main

Ho...Pareshan hoon main

She looked twards himto find his eyes were brimmed with tears and could come out any moment from his eyes.

Nupur:"Mayank'!!!What happened didn't you like the song'.I am sorry Mayank...Please do't cries..."

But she didn't get any reaction from Mayank side'She hestitaly placed her hand on his shoulder, realizing her hand on his shoulders he looked towards with his teary eyes and swiftly hugged her very tightly, such that it was even difficult for Nupur breathe but still she didn't protest because this time Mayank was letting his heart out infrot of her.

Mayank:"This song, my mother used to sing for me'"Nupur was feeling gulity from inside as she was responsible for bringing his past again'

Mayank,"Thank you Nupur'"Nupur was confused as why he thanking her.

Mayank:"I really miss her Nupur, I always miss her comfort, her love everything, thank you coming in my life, for becoming my friend, for depleting this void a little bit which has been there from past many years, you ill always be my friend Nupur', please don't leave me..."Saying the last sentence he broke down infront of her, still hugging her tight as before.

Slowly realizing their condition he lossened his grip fom her and released her,Nupur cupped his face and removed his tears and promise him,"Mayank,I won't ever leave you,no matter what'I'll be always your side,you need to trust God,believe in pir friendship'I am so sorry for hurting you again.."Cutting her in between,"No Nupur ,it's not your mistake,infact I am feeling really very light after pouring my heat infront of you,thank you for providing your shoulder and sorry for hugging you like that.."

Nupur:"Mayank, you need to feel sorry for that, after all what are friends foe, okay now drive the car, before more horns make your ear deaf"Shifting to their postiond Mayank silently drove his car,though there was silence in the car but still nothing sort of awkwardness was not there,they were glancing with each other tome to tie and there eyes wer talking their own known to them,soon traffic got cleared and they reach Nupur's home.

Nupur:"Thanks for the lift.

Mayank at his usual grin:"Any time'"Seeing off each other Nupur enter her house, smiling all the way, wiping her tears only to face her worried mother.

MrsBhushan:"Nupur, where have you been'it's too late and also raining heavily'"


Nupur:"Mom, It was raining and my scooty also get punctured so due this I got late..."

MrsBhushan:"I am so worried for you dear'atleast you would have gave me a call, I wouldcome to receive you'"

Nupur:"Mom, I t was really very heavy traffic and more over there were no signal so I couldn't able to give call to you"

MrsBhushan:"Okay...go and frenshup else yu will catch cold'"


Nupur:"hmm...mom..."Nupur was moving towards her room when her mother called her back.

MrsBhushan*in a suspicious look*:"Nupur, whose coat yo are wearing, I guess it's a male coat and you do not have such type of coat..."It was like Nupur get caught red handed and moreover she can't hide things to her mother anymore she decided to tell her truth now.

Nupur:"Okay Mom, lemme frenshup I'll tell the whole story'.Iguess I can hide it anymore from you..."

Mrs.Bhushan:"And I guess its high you should tell me, come soon waiting for you in the dining hall".

Nupur:"Don't worry Mom, today I'll reveal everything'"Nooding her head Mrs.Bhushan allowed Nupur to go on as she new her daughter she surely going to something of which she is complete unknown.

Hope you all like it...😊




Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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For loving me all over...
Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
aww that was cute part
loved the way you portrayed their emotions
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
That rainy songs OMG😳
I myself was laughing so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful updt
loved nupur's song & mayur they are cute
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cute update.
Loved mayank and Nupur's songs.
Update soon.
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You know ... i was little upset due to my dear serial issues...
but i fogot it and ejoyed your story a lot ...
i juust loved it ...
shaffy you r such a beautiful writer .yar ...its not for words sack ...
i am feeling light after reading your story ...oh god how exactly you portrayed every emotions ... i just loved it a lot ... and the songs wow...wat a perfect fit to the situation... great work ...
i hope the soon realise their love ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part...luved the songs,poor guys getting more embarresed couz of them...
update soon...luv u... :-)

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