Thoda sa pyar milega-ff 4 Nihal-suhana - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
plz continue (only if u r not planning to separate suhana and nihal) 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
Part-14.....Every1 gets confused.finally nihaal's dad
tells:if they can't liv each
other then whats the use of
living 2gether?its better 2
liv with the person whom u
liv.if nihaal r ok
with it,then why shud we
stand against it? ppl agree
with their divorce. Suhana
becomes sad & thinks about her
mangalsuthra &
sindoor.song:thoda sa...Nihaal
tells suhana:as we scared
even our family members r not
against our decision.so
happy..? S keeps silent.
Shubam cumes with Alpa 2
see suhana Shubam:i no that
its bcoz of u,nihaal bhayya
talked like that 2 us.he even
lied that he does'nt luv
u.that time did u see his
eyes?may not be.otherwise u
wud've cried.that pity
condition...Alpa:i never thot
that u r a hard hearted woman
suhana didi. Suhana lies on
her bed & falls into sleep.she
feels that sumbody is
touching her feet.she opens
her eyes.was surprised 2 see
Nihaal putting mehndi on her
legs.was surpised 2 see the
mehndi designs on her arms.
she began 2 hug him without
thinking that the mehndi will
get pasted into his face
if she does that. but suddenly
N vanishes.S was
shocked 2 see that mehndi was
not there on her body
parts.she cries after
realizing that this was only a
dream. N's family
organizes a charity function. his
mom asks S:suhana,will
u dance? she was
surprised:but
mamma....nihaal:suhana dances well.so u
shud. he remembers seeing her
dance when he was standing
b4 her dance classroom.also
her rain dance cumes into
his mind. S becomes
confident hearing his words.
Alpa :tho every1 else told u
2 dance,u agreed only when
nihaal jeeju told u 2.what does
it signify? suhana
didi...plz see ur luv inside
ur heart 4 nihaal jeeju.
S's eyes get filled up
with tears.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
ur fanfic is really good!continue sn!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
Part-15...Suhana dances 2 the
song mardala....{Devdas]..PPL
GOT INVOLVED in her pretty
performance. the show was a
huge success. S dreams
that at the dance when he
rounds & falls down,nihaal
cumes & carries her in his
arms.but she weeps that its
only a dream. they go 2 sign
the divorce papers. Nihaal
signs it with pain thats
hidden in his mind.S was
shocked that she never
expected him 2 sign so fast. she
was asked 2 sign. she
hesitates. every1's face become
dull. N:plz sign it fast
suhana.all r busy.if u
finish it fast,we can go fast.
she stares at him.
N:plz...S:1st..let
me remove my wedding
ring..N:1st u sign,then u
remove it..plz don't catch
these silly things. S's
eyes got filled up.she
thinks:these r not silly 4 a
married woman..she was
given the pen by nihaal. her
arms shiver.she cries:no i
can't...every1 was
shocked.Shubam:suhana bhabhi,what
happened?u had pain when u
were asked 2 sign the divorce
papers? so just think about
nihaal bhayya? she looks at
N.he was taking effort 2
control his tears.
he:suhana..now u understood
the pain..?i had the same
pain u had now. S cries
& hugs him.they all
smile.N was surprised that
S who hated him
like anything is hugging him
infront of every1. he 4gets
his shyness & hugs her
back,since its her 1st expression
of luv. Shubam-alpa
laughs.nihal-suhana become
shy. VIshv:so,this stupid
circumstance had 2 cum 2 show
how much nihaal & suhana luv
each other. Shu:thats
right. A:actually 2day is
their real wedding.so lets
enjoy with a grand party.
Shu:thats true. A grand
party was arranged.
Nihaal-suhana dance 2 the song
'thoda sa pyar hua....' THE
END
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
yayy..... good story.. please give to bhabhi serial writers.....

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