Thoda sa pyar milega-ff 4 Nihal-suhana

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Posted: 19 years ago
#1
PART-1...Nihal is a sweet guy who has brothers like
Vishu & Shubam.he has cousin brothers like rishi &
swayam.
1 day Nihaal sees a girl in a white salwar.she was
dancing in rain:taal se taal mila....o..o..
Nihaal feels
funny:this girl is mad. suddenly he sees her beautiful
face.he was attracted 2 her.
that day he cud'nr
sleep.that girl was cuming 2 his dreams.he felt sweet.
he
goes 2 his friend's house.he hears music from the next
house.
his friend:there a dance class is going on...all
the dance students cum out.
he sees that girl among
the m.he hears her friend calling her'Suhana'.he was
thrilled 2 no her name.
N pronounces her
name:SUHANA!
he was excited...he asks in her
mind:Suhana,will i get sum luv?
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jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#2
Part-2...ppl look 4 the girl 4 vishu.atlast they go 2
see a girl.Nihal & shubam
teases V:waiting 4 the
girl?losing patience? the
girl cumes in a pink
salwar...with coffee.V
likes her at the 1st
sight.Nihaal was shocked 2 see
her.bcoz it was none other
than Suhana. he looks at
S & V.he realizes
that both of them liked each
other.he was upset.the
wedding gets fixed.sujal was
really shattered.it was
disgusting 2 see S's
shyness.he felt jealous of
V 4 the 1st time.the
engagement day of
vishu-suhana cume.S
cumes in a shining yellow
choli.Nihaal cud'nt tolerate
their ring exchangement. he
eyes rose up.they all dance.he
was brought forcefully 2
dance by shubam.again N
was broken seeing S
dancing with V.S's
younger sis Alpa was
walking carelessly.so she
cumes 2 hit shubam.
she:sorry...Shubam feels
atrraction 2wards her.he
does'nt hear her sorry,but
keeps on looking at her
eyes.A becomes shy.she
runs away.through out the
party they were looking at
each other. the funny A
has got dreams about her
guy,she thinks:i think this guy
deserves 2 be my guy. Suhana
cumes near her:where u
looking at ? A:nothing
like that.who is that
guy..not familiar at all.
S looks & says:he is
vishu 's youngest brother
shubam A:his name is so
hot. S smiles:i noticed
that ur eyes were on
him.why?u liked him? A
smiles:suhana
didi...S:after our
wedding,i'll tell vishu
A
smiles:but shud no what shubam
feels about me...
S:so u r that
serious..ok..we'll see.seeing his
eyes,i think he also has a
crush on u. A smiles.
Nihal goes 2 bar & drinks a
lot.song:thoda sa pyar....he
cumes out in that
situation.Suhana sees it & has a bad
impression on him. she goes
near him:nihaal whats this?u
drink a lot? N was
embarrassed. suddenly his purse
falls down from the
pocket.Suhana's photo falls from
the purse.S was shocked
& she takes it.on the back
of the photo its
written:suhana...i luv u..nihaal.
S cud'nt tolerate
this.she puts the photo down.she
loses her temper & slaps him.
N thinks:the 1st
present from my beloved.
S:i never thot that ur a
dirty guy.vishu is so
nice..how did u become his
brother?u don't deserve such a
nice family.u were
cheating on them.but they
trust u.how cud u do this 2
me.ur supposed 2 see me as ur
bhabhi.but u...N:i'm
sorry..i did'nt purposefully
luve my future bhabhi.i no
that u r going 2 be my
bhabhi.i respect u as my
bhabhi.plz 4giv
me..S:never..bcoz i don't trust
the guy who tries 2 win over
his own bhabhi.but since u
r vishus brother,i'll do a
help.i won't tell this 2
any1.bcoz i don't want 2 spoil
a family's piece by
revealing ur real face. she
goes away. N cries:i'm
sorry...i luved u.i did'nt try
2 snatch my brother's
luv...he takes Suhana's photo
& tears it into pieces.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
PART-3...
Nihaal goes 2 see suhana b4
the dance
classroom.Suhana becomes angry
seeing him:why did u cum
here.i hate 2 see u.don't u
giv me sum peace? N:u r
misunderstanding
me...she:no,is it gud 2 see ur bhabhi
as ur dreamgirl? N:no,i
haven't cosen my bhabhi as
my luv.sorry suhana... S:how
can i trust u
nihaal?now u called me suhana
instead of calling me
bhabhi. N:i'm sorry suhana.oh
sorry bhabhi.
S
becomes angery & walks away
from him. N was upset.
vish goes 2 a far place 4 a
business tour. Shubam sees
Alpa infront of a textile
shop.she was in a miniskirt.
they become happy 2 see each
other.they were having
starting truble 2 talk.
S:why r u here? A:i
went 2 buy sum dresses.
S:ok,what did u buy?
A:jeans..tops..S:don't u like
salwar kameez?
A:ya...but it suits suhana didi
more. S:it suits
u also.4 the engagement u had
worn a pinksalwar no.it
was really cute 4 u.in short
skirts ,short tops,jeans
..u look really hot. A
smiles:thanku. S:can we
go 2 an icecream parlour?
A was very happy:why not?
both of them go 2 an icecream
parlour. S orders:1
chocolate icecream...A
orders:1 vanilla plz..
S:ok,bring 1 vanilla 4 me
also. A:but u 1st u
ordered 4 chocolate no.
S:ya,but now i changed my
mind.i want 2 taste ur
favourite. A:ok waiter,plz
bring 1 chocolate icecream..
she tells S:i'll also
taste ur fav. S
smiles.both of them look at each
other 4 sum time.they did'nt
no the waiter's arrival
with icecreams. atlast the
waiter had 2 call them in a
loud voice.they become
concious & were embarassed b4 the
teasing smile of the waiter.
Shubam-alpa tell gudbye2
each other & go in their own
way.Shubam sees
Vish.S thinks:vIsh
bayya said that he is
going4 a business tour.but he
is here? S was
shocked 2 see a glamour
girl{Sush} behind
him.they were laughing &
talking each other. S felt
weird:so that is why he lied 2
us.i never expected this
from vish bhayya. he goes &
tells Nihaal whom he is
more close to:nihaal bhayya,i
want 2 tell an imp matter.
N was anxious.

jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#4
Part-4...Shubam tells Nihaal what
he has seen. N slaps him.
S:i no that u won't
believe me.even i was'nt able
2 believe.but this is the
truth. N:i no my brother.
S:nihaal bhayya,Vish
bhayya is mine brother too.why
shud i lie about him?
N becomes confused. Vish
cumes. Shubam asks him
personally:u went 4 business
tour or sumwhere else.
V got tensed:why r u
asking like this? S:giv
me an answer. V:business
tour.where else i'll go?
S:Vish bhayya..u can't fool
me like u fool
others. S goes.V felt
weird. S goes 2
nihaal's room.gets a diary from
the waste basket.he goes
thry it.he was shocked 2 read
the things which happened
in N's life relating 2
suhana.shubam feels
sad,bcoz its too late that
their wedding day has cum.but
shubam feels nihaal deserves
suhana more. Suhana
was pretty as a bride. Vish
did'nt reach the wedding
place at the correct time.so
every1 gets tensed. sum1
cumes with V's
message:i'm sorry.i'm in luv with a
girl called Sush.we r leaving
2 usa.i'm sure that my
brothers will look after the
business well.ppl were
shocked.ppl curse him.Suhana
starts crying. Shubam
shouts at Nihaal:now u believe
me?when i told the truth
vish bhayya u slapped
me.if u had trusted me
suhana bhabhi's life wud'nt hav
spoiled. Nihaal's mom:who told that
suhana 's life is spoiled.just bcoz
her wedding got cancelled?her
life will get brightened
bcoz she is escaped from a guy
like vish. Nihaal's dad:don't get
upset bcoz suhana's wedding did'nt take
place. Suhana's dad:its very
easy 4 u 2 tell.u no the
fate of a girl who gets
insulted when she cumes as a
bride?if her wedding does'nt
takes place...what will be
her future? N's dad:who told
that her wedding won't
take place.her wedding will
take place 2day.Nihaal will
marry her. nihaal-suhana were
shocked. S's parents
were relieved. S
screams:no i can't marry nihaal.
her dad:i no that u r still in
a shock.but beti..just
think of the shame we'll hav
if ur wedding won't take
place 2day.4 us plz marry
nihaal
S cries:ok..4 my
parents i'll marry ihaal.
Nihaal-shubam become
happy.N was tensed too
about her reaction.he puts
sindoor on S's 4 head.ties
mangalsuthra around her
neck.she was like a cold body
which has no reaction.
Imzi thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
it's good continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
PART-5....Suhana was in a
shock.she did'nt even look at
nihaal.Shubam tells
nihaal:nihaal bhayya..i no the
pain u had about ur luv.
N did'nt understand
anything. S:i read ur diary
which was in the waste basket.
N was shocked. S
takes him 2 his room & gives
the diary:this u put it in
the waste basket thinking that
its a waste.bcoz u thot
that ur luv is a waste.but the
destiny proved that luv
is not a waste.urs was true
luv.thats how finally
suhana bhabhi reached u.
N smiles:but i dunno how
Suhana will react.she hates 2
see me. S:that will
change into luv.which girl
can't luv a guy like u? N
had little hope.N goes 2
his room.Suhana was
sitting there.N slowly
sits near her.his hands
shiver.slowly he touches her
hand.S slaps
him.N was upset. she
screams at him:how dare u touch
me? N:now u r not my
bhabhi.i'm ur husband. S
cud'nt bear it. she:so u can
do anything ith me? N:i
no why u hate me.but believe
me suhana,i did'nt try 2
snatch my bhabhi.b4 my bhayya
saw u,i hav seen u.
suhana ...i hav seen u many
times in diff places.i
luved u so deeply..but i was
shocked 2 see u as my
vishv bhayya's fiancee.i lost
my control.but i did'nt
try 2 snatch my brother's
happiness.plz believe
me..Swas shocked. after
a few seconds she:i'm not
a fool 2 believe ut lie.
N :i'm not
lying..S:stop ur bloody
drama.do u think that u've
won.u married me tho i was
supposed 2 become ur
bhabhi.no nihaal..tho u married
me ,i won't be ur
wife.i'll never luv u.a guy
will be really hurt if he
does'nt get his wife's
luv.u'll feel it now. N was
really upset
Edited by jasminerahul - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
PART-6..the next day Suhana does
all the morning pooja as an
ideal bahu & wins the hearts
of the other members of the
house. shubam asks nihaal:how
was suhana bhabh's response?
N hides his
worries:not terrible as i
expected.she was really nice.
S notices a change in
N's face:i hope u r not
lying.during the pooja
sumthing was missingamong u.
N:during pooja can we hav
romance u fool...? S
gets shy:o!i'm sorry...N
tells suhana:suhana,i no
that u can't luv me.but plz
pretend 2 be in luv with me
infront of my family members.
S:so u r telling me
also 2 fool ur family like u
do? N was
disappointed:plz try 2
understand.they won't bear
it.thats why..S:ok..i'll
act as ur ideal patni b4
others.not only b4 ur ppl,also
b4 my ppl i hav 2
act.bcoz my parents think that
their decision was
right.poor ppl.they think that
i've got a gud husband.
her eyes rose up. N:what
wrong thing did i do as a
husband 2 u.i always want 2
make my wife happy. S
was angry.but she controls
herself. they all go 2
Suhana's house 4 a party. it
was a grand party.Shubam
wants 2 see Alpa very
badly.so he goes searching 4 her
room. he hears a music-my
heart is beating....S
follows the music.he reaches
Alpa's room.A was
singing with a guitar.she was
in shorts.S smiles at
her.she was shocked 2 see him
in her room:u here?
he:ya..i heard a beautiful
music & followed it.thats how
i reached here.anyways u sing
well. A smiles:thanku.
suddenly her tone changes:u r
not shy 2 get inside a
girl's room?u go.let me
change... he was embarrassed.he
goes out.A wears a
shinning jeans& top. S
smiles at her.every1 was
dancing.shubam-alpa dance
2gether.S notices that
nihaal-suhana were dull.they
were not dancing at all.his
mind gets diverted 2 that.
Vandu4ever thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
wow
its interesting 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#9
part-7...Shubam goes near
suhana:bhabhi,how r u going 2
celebrate? Suhana:what?
Shubam:valentine's day..or
whatelse? Suhana was'nt
interested. Shubam:this is ur
1st valentine's day after
wedding.so it wud be more
sweet. S did'nt mind.
Shu:since u got a gud hubby
like nihaal bhayya this
day wud be more special 2 u.
S gets
irritated.butshe does'nt
express it:sum more days r
there 2 reach valentine's day
no.that time we'll think.
she goes away.Shubam felt
weird. nihaal's mom tells her:i
want a grand child
suhana…S gets annoyed.she
becomes moody. she was
irritated b4 Nihaal:i this
house every1 wants 2 see ur
son. N smiles.
S:but don't dream that
ull grt a son from me.
N becomes sad. akshat
overhears it. when N cumes
out he sees shubam's sad
face:so were hiding it from me?
N weeps. Shubam talks 2
suhana personally:why r u
giving my bhayya pain.however
u both act as a happy
cuple the truth has cum b4 me.
Suhana gets embarassed.
Shubam:u no how much he luves
u...as u think nihaal
bhayya is not a flirt.plz
believe whatever he has told
u.u were there in his mind 4 a
long time b4 ur
engagement with vish
bhayya.4 his happiness nihaal
bhayya hid everything.god will
never 4give u if u don't
see his heart. Suhana gets
confused. the next day
there was a big traffic bloc n
the road.Nihaal cumes 2 no
that its bcoz of an accident
that has taken place.he was
shocked 2 see suhana bathed
with blood on the road.he
goes crying near her.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#10
u have made a v. perfect fan fict. 😊

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