THREAD 2: and he returned (part 28)! :D - Page 48

Originally posted by: bavucute

thnx dear..for such a long update 🤗...finally Arnav got the truth...very happy to read such a nice post...once again thnx for such a beautiful & awesome update ❤️

Originally posted by: chemistry9

awsm

loved it

hate daadi

poor khushi

finaly arnav knw's d truth

enjoyed alooot reading such a long update

thnx fr d pm

Originally posted by: IPKlover

Update soon please! I so want to know Arnav's reaction once he sees the wounds. dadi tou gayi kaam se! heheheh :)

Originally posted by: Sweta...

Well well well what can I say... It's amazing, it's epic, it's wonderful, it's romantic, it's intense

All these descriptions fall short of your writing yaar! I mean the passion which you write with is... Speechless seriously yon have a god given talent to write.. And I'm glad your not letting it go to waste! You know I always wait for your updates p, everyday I come back from school and see oooh 10 Pms .i wonder if Mushfika is one of them, during school when I get emails to say you have revived a pm... But it's never you :( but I see a pattern you update over the weekend... And you updates are a stress reliever... Trust me stress gets to me soo easily you don't know how i passed my gcse's and how I've started my alevels but your updates cheer me up... I just love it... And your ff is something I read since I joined India forums so its great :D a huge smile :D

Now onto your update... I always notice every small detail especially from your fr, and it's also becausSimple things please my mind hahahahah! Just loved the way khushi was clinging on his shirt... The passion, he pr being scared and arnav being the only one who she can rely on is the speciality of their relation... And arnav being mad at the world but so delicate with khushi is mind blowing.. I deffo want someone like him for me :) the way she didn't even want to let go of him I felt, her pain, her worry, and the way arnav wanted so badly to go taunt his so called dadi but couldn't because khushi is his first. Priority loved to see it! I like how this update focused more on them, and ther trust, love, it was amazing... Tough I would love to see dadi bashed by her potha hahahahahahahahah wll I can't wait till next week for that ;). Loved how arnav knew she was lying over the phone, he knows her so well, the basis of a good relation, A strong relation, however much she lies he knows it- though thaA could be annoying at times, if your lying to hide a surprise lol! I even knew khushi was going to try hide the dadi abuse and say she dropped... But I loved how she alas goes to tells arnav and then... BAM the flashback of dadi threatening her come to her mind and she doesn't...! Dammit p.. But our arnav is no less, loved how he asked her yes or no questions.. She couldn't avoid them... Loved how he did question her 'truth' on the qualitative question but didn't doubt her bless him.,! :) our arnavs so clever hahahahha thanks god for that :) and yes the doctors call...

That's made me shout out in joy luckily I could cuz I was basically alone upstairs so no one would hear me... I did a khushi dance and then resumed reading a hahahahahah! So glad... I just so badly wanted arnav to hear what happened between the doctor and her, and about her wounds on her back... Ughmy back feels sore just thinking about it.. And the way docs like I know u've told mr Raizada about yor wounds and he's probs thinking... She hid alot of pain away from everyone suffering alone! And to wear backless suits... Well thats'll be a turn on for our ASR ;) lol! He's going to take proper care of his wife like one should! :) his mom would be so proud of him.m he's the best... He had to control his anger towards dadi and look after his khushi :) and dadi, who's going to help her now yeah baby karmas coming and it's going to knock you out :D spooo happy :) can't wait till next week when arnav confronts her anpboutbher wounds on her back, when he rubs antiseptic cream on her back... Should be some fantastic rabba ves :D

Awhhh Mushfika u just do such a goood job., you should publish this ff as a. Book... And never end it.. At least in the near future this better go on for atleats 50years :) :D I just loved it, words cannot describe... I've used every single word that comes to mind yet I'm can't get over reviewing the updates, your so mean for cutting it, you should've made it even longer :P I hope you update very soon and that to a dhamakedar one... Not that they aren't anyways but this next update is going to just be amazing... Right I'm going to stop writing now so you can carry in and psot the update very soon :) can't wait... It's weeks going to drag now... Loved the update incase j hadn't said already :) thanks for he pm

hey guys!! first of all "EID MUBARAK" to all of the Muslim Readers of my FF ...I hope you had/have a warm eid and enjoy your day!

secondly, haye ! mein marjawa! you guys nearly killed me with your comments!!!! i couldn't stop saying aw over and over again! love you all for such a encouraging, fantastic, minblowing, awesomesauce super duper comments!!!

Just finished writing this Part on EID DAY ONLY FOR YOU GUYS! i thought of not updating this week but i could imagine some of your dangerous and horrible expression which will make my condition worse...🤣 lol

and i hope this part is long as well? i don't know, it is long to me 😳

here you go!

IF YOU WANT pmS, PLEASE BUDDY ME!

PART: 22

KHUSHI WAS HURT?? The wounds? Won't heal? Needs air?

The tests??? Bad conditions? SHIT@ ! that means dadi

ACTUALLY! SHIT!

ALL the horrible stuffs started coming into Arnav's mind

The first day when subhandra came into RM

Khushi getting senseless

Her fever all of a sudden

Doctor asking if she got hurt.

Her wearing full-sleeves outfits everyday no matter how HOT the weather was

Khushi hissing whenever he touched her shoulder

Khushi crying her heart out when he asked about dadi

Her getting scared at the name of "DADI"

Not sounding OKAY at all when he called her yesterday''.."YESTERDAY! " he widened his eyes realizing something. "khushi said that the reason of not sounding well was because of dadi scolding her badly. That means. ''. That means SHE LIED TO ME AGAIN?! It is '..it is because of'." Realizing every single thing that was going on over this 2 weeks, he clenched his fist. He was still hoping that whatever he heard or whatever he thought is true is just a nightmare and ONLY his doubts which is not true AT ALL!

30 minutes past and Arnav was still in his wave of thought when he felt a pat on his shoulder.

He looked up to see it was khushi.

Khushi who was looking down at Arnav with a huge smile although it was just to make arnav feel that everything is fine, most importanty SHE is fine raised her eyebrow to ask him what happened.

Khushi knew Arnav was still thinking about what happened and how she was crying and sobbing clutching Arnav's shirt which has made it clear to Arnav that it was NOT a MINOR ISSUE made her really worried. She tried to make Everything normal.

Khushi: Arnav! GUESS WHAT?

Khushi: I had a AWESOME DREAM LAST NIGHT !!! guess what I dreamed *clapping with excitement* . '..i dreamed that we went to a place where it was SNOWING. Oh Arnav you won't believe how MAGNIFICENT IT LOOKED. And the most amazing part was we were playing in the snow and were THROWING SNOW BALLS!!! Arnav SINGH RAIZADA was THROING SNOW BALLS!!! *said mischievously*

Arnav just stared at her. He fully knew that she didn't have such a dream and was just saying it to make HIM FEEL BETTER and FORGET everything that happened today. He wondered what he was made of! How could she still think about other's happiness while SHE is going through SO MUCH PAIN!

But he came out from that thought and stood.

Arnav: oh that's superb khushi! *he touched her shoulder on purpose to clear his first doubt*

And YES! Khushi DID HISS in pain AGAIN but realizing that

she was infront of arnav, she just shut her eyes off to come

out from the pain! And THIS TIME although she tried a LOT

not to show the pain on her face went all in vain.

Arnav: umm khushi, why have you been wearing these full

sleeves outfits for TWO WEEKS?? Think about me, I;m your

husband''..how long will you torture ME by not showing your

beautiful arms?

Arnav's pleading voice was much to get her worried and

nervous at the thought that he'll see her wounds.

Khushi: uhh'.well I just recovered from fe

Arnav interrupted: oh PLEASE khushi! Now don't give me the

excuse of your fever. I can see you're totally okay.

Khushi lowered her eyes to think of something else to get rid

of these questions.

Arnav stared at her and then: khushi? Do you want to say

something to me?

Khushi looked into his eyes which was clearly stating her to let

him know about what happened. But she convinced herself that

he didn't find anything about it.

Khushi: n''no arnav''what would I want to say?

Arnav: are you sure?

Khushi: yes''..yes I'm confident *trying to sound confident*

Arnav came cloder to her and held her by her shoulder lightly

and turned her around much to khushi's confusion. He took

her hair and put it in one side.

He started opening the zip which was at the back of her full-sleeve outfit.

Khushi: Ar'.

Arnav: shhh!

And as he half opened the zip from the top , he was frozen at

the view of her back'..at the STATE OF HER BACK! He saw

little bit of reddish marks on the top. He was too shock to

push the rest of the zip down. But he slowly started opening

it. As soon as he opened it, he saw her bare back filled with

red, black, blue and brown bruises. He saw the red marks of

long sticks and some part of her back had turned blue.

Khushi was already in tears. Moreover, Arnav has seen it. He

didn't know wjhat to say or how to handle the situation which

will be created within some minutes. She knew very well that

Arnav wouldn't bear a SINGLE TEAR in his wife and THIS???

Bruises? Wounds? On top of that, she HID ALL THESE FOR

TWO WEEKs! "Hey devi maiya raksha karna" khushi prayed

But she was Khushi Kumari Gupta. She wouldn't give up so

easily.

Khushi trying to stop her tears coming out from her eyes:

uhh'.Arnav you remember I told you how I slipped in the

washroom?

Arnav started sliding her sleeves down to see the state of her

right arm. And not much of his surprise, he saw the blue and

brown bruises. He felt as if thousands of knives was piercing

his heart. He couldn't but curse HIMSELF for what has

happened to khushi. He closed his eyes in pain.

He slowly touched her bare back filled with bruises which

made khushi cried out in pain.

Arnav went to her bed table and got an anticeptic cream. He

came back giving khushi a serious and stern look and went behind her. He opened the tube and started applying the

antiseptic cream on her bare-bruised-back. Khushi sut his

eyes off in pain not wanting to cry and hiss in pain and make

her husband worry more.

Khushi: uhh ''I didn't even realize how it got THIs worse''I thought it was just a minor pain because I just SLIPPED''but'..

Arnav closed his eyes in frustration: khushi shut up!

Khushi immediately stopped talking. She was too scared to

even imagine Arnav's reaction.

After finishing applying the antiseptic cream on her bruised

back and and arm.

Arnav ordered: GO and change your out fit AT THIS VERY

MOMENT! You DO REMEMBER WHAT THE DOCTOR SAID

RIGHT??

Khushi was too scared at the sound of his voice to ask or say

anything. She took one of her half sleeves outfit and went to

the changing room to change.

As she changed, she came out of the room and slowly walked

to arnav not knowing what to say.

Arnav heard her foot steps and turned with a SERIOUS,

stern and FURIOUS READ FACE.

Khushi: uhhh''Arnav'''..you'.

Not giving khushi an opportunity to say anything, he held her

hands andwalked out of the room and headed towards

Subhandra's room.

i hope you liked this part as well...and dadi part will be next for SURE!!!! sorry for not including that yet ...😕

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