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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bluelove97

I love this FF! Its amazing and you are an great writer. I love how you show arnav's care for khushi so much its amazing. Continue writing because I'm sure whatever you write will be awesome! 😃Waiting for the next update, do post it soon pleaseee... 😊



OMGGG~!!!!



REALLY??@!!!!


come girl! give me a hug! 😳😳



thank youuu for such a sweet comment!


and lol well i don't think watever i write will be awesome but i will surely try my best to full fill what you guys wish to see in this FF...

thnx again for such a sweet comment once again

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AbdulloveIPKKND

TWO WORDS:





LOVED IT!!!!😃




awww!!

thank youuu!! 😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: coronapsyche

Buddy,Eid Mubarak🤗
Hope ur Eid went well, Mine went well too😃

Now,coming back to the updates-
Ohh Boy! dadi is in real trouble now!! Yappy
I am happy, couldnt want more 😉
Dadi- its payback time😈


OH! Khushi had to go throgh this much pain
I felt bad reading that,I dnno how much pain Arnav had felt seeing it😭
Still Khushi didnt tell him the whole truth!!😲 Still she is hiding the Dadi's act!! Girl! Ur a gem of a person👍🏼 kis mitti ki bani ho tum!!- Only God knows that😲

Glad that Arnav saw that bruises despite of Khushi's hesitance, that gave him the insight that what a cruel person his Dadi is🤢

Go Arnav Go! Give Subatra a piece of ur mind & show her that 'Karma is a b**ch & it will bite u real hard'👍🏼

Mushfika-why did u stop it there??????????😡 Arghhh! U dnt want us to sleep in peace ,na??😔

Update soon,plls❤️
Hugsss🤗



yah my eid was mind blowing Alhamdulillah!

and god to hear that ur were too 😃

YAP!! SHE IS IN TROUBLE!! 😆😆

hahahha wow!!!! you couln't WANT MORE??😲 you surprised me man! 😛😛

yah i knowww


i felt bad when i was writing tooo😭😭

hahahahahah


I AM A QUALIFIED CLIFF HANGER you know!

i love to make ppl hang on the clifff


LMAO joking yaar

sorry but didn't have enough strength to write


and thnx a lto buddy
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweta...

What the ???. How could you not have included dadis part :O hawww you going to mak eme wait a whole week, your going to make your whole ff readers wait the whole week for arnav VS dadi???? Hawww and to think my holidays next week, I've got to pray it goes quickly just to read our arnav stand up for his kkgsr :D defooo cannot wait for that... There's going to be shouting, screaming, ahhh just can't wait it's going to be fun to read, hahahahha dadi karmas coming with our ASR :D defoo excited you better post early Saturday :P


Next... Well wht can I say a smile appeared as soon a I saw you, the great Mushfika had Pmd me to say he next update was up, I was jumping out Off the bed to read hahahahaha... Then as I click and it loads, I see ur reply to my comment and may I say if ur on clud nine I'm on cloud 90 reading anything written by you :P yeahhh u gave me 10out of 10 for my intro... That's an achievement hahahahah I'm going to frame tht.. Ok I'm not tht crazy bt I deffo will screen shot it :) really, happy about tht :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

And I'm serious this should be publishesed as book, if you don't I'm serious I'll print out each update and put it together for myself because sometimes I like to read stuff I've read already, when arnav and khushi On tv aren't happy I read stuff thy r happy in and this ff he always supports her! I love it :) don't even consider ending this ff any time soon... I pray to god for its long life :) (Y)

As for the the update it was amazing like always :P there's no doubt you can write... That too with intense passion :) I just loved the way arnav was recalling everything which led him it believe this matter was bigger than what khushi made it out to be... A I can imagine the utter shock on his face, the tear that escapes his eye when he looks at khushi and imagines what she went through... She went through he'll lot and and back and yet she's still trying to tell arnav she's alright... Truly whtq is khushi Kumari Gupta Singh raiziada made of? Ow can she still the day she slipped in the bathroom, and say it wasn't his horrible dadi, how can she still the and hide it,,,. She surprised all he rains for 2 weeks, finally arnav realised and was doing something abut it! :) loved the way he asked her do u want to say something she's like no, confidentially he moves her hair and khushis like shit... Someone's about to face the wrath of ASR she better make it seem its ok... Like hashes casually saying oh it must've been foprom when I slipped in the bathroom and he's like in his head how many lies, how many times is she going to hide it from him...seriously what is she made of that she doesn't want anyone to get huge because of her... So she takes all the pain not air to her at all :( :( :( bt I respect her and u bet arnavs respect for her is rising just while living with her knowing how she is... I mean th e way u described all the marks, scars my face was all scrunched up and in pain, my back felt sore just think gin about it having the actually pain she went through is like on another planet pain... Loved the way he told her to she up when she tried kt say it was format he 'bathroom slip' I mean really... Then he slime go and change u do remeber what the doc said... And khushi knows it say anything would be pointless so takes a sphalerite sleeved suit... I also a loved it when she tried not to cry from the pain as she knew it would hurt arnav more than her... That was just the sweetest and that's the bonding every couple should have so down to earth and love between them :) <3 loved how she went to speak after changing and he just takes her towards dadis room hahahahahahahahah a someone's not going to know what hit them in the next update can't seriously wait for the confrontation then we'll see arnav she really soft towards khushi a hahahahahaha hopefully you update sooon and make it a little longer ;). Lively update subtle love, pain all emotions Love it every single time my day will go well sic e I read your update now :D thanks for the pm :)




LOLLL SORRY Sweta for not including...but i thought arnav needs to tend to her wounds first

and lol nope i am not gonna make you guys wait THAT LONGGG!! SEE i'm updating nowww


lol yappp shouting screaming...muahahahhaha

LMHOOO!!!! on 90 CLOUD??? 🤣 i donno, you are the funniest 1 ever man!

awww!!! REALLY??? 😳😳 *blush blush* thnak youuu!! and gladd that you have added mine in ur list as one of ur fav FFs

hahahahhaha for you relief...NO! i am NOY ending it so quickly ...inshallah1

itni asani se pichha kaise chod sakti hoon? hm?

😛😛😆

you knwo hwhat i like the most ??

you notice eahc and EVERY SINGLE part of my FF

TNX A LOTTT FORR THAT SWETA!




i am glad that you liked the "do you wanna say something to me" part LOL

YAPPP...his respect is TRULY increasing

your comments always make me feel better, charmed, do balle balle dance LOL

*HUGS*

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Posted: 12 years ago

SURPRISE SURPRISE!!!

it is wednesday and i am UPDATING!!! 😃😃 do i see a smile in every1's face?? 😉

lol anyways, no more talks now

here you go😳😳

THOSE OF YOU WHO WANTS PMs, PLEASE

BUDDY ME 😳😳


PART 23

As she changed, she came out of the room and slowly walked

to arnav not knowing what to say.


Arnav heard her foot steps and turned with a SERIOUS,

stern and FURIOUS READ FACE.


Khushi: uhhh''Arnav'''..you'.



Not giving khushi an opportunity to say anything, he held her

hands andwalked out of the room and headed towards

Subhandra's room.


He dragged khushi from their room through the hallway to

dadi's room.


The anger in his face was clearly seen. He was all in rage.


Boiling with anger.


Khushi: ar'.arnav''where'..re'


Khushi couldn't gather the courage to even ask him a question.

Arnav didn't even look at her and didn't say a WORD.


As they reached infront of subhandra's room arnav literally

started BANGING on the door.


The door was opened after 5-6 bangs on the door. Subhandra

slowly opened the door.


Arnav stormed into the room but Khushi still stood at the door

and didn't enter. Arnav looked over he shoulder to see that

she was still at the door. He held her hands and made her into

the room with a stern look. He made her stand beside him,

however, khushi was so scared that she went behind her

husband and hid herself.


Realizing her condition, her mind, he slowly turned to

subhandra who still didn't have a SINGLE ssign of guilt in her

face.



Subhandra: Arnav, before you say something, I want to talk to


you. ALONE!


Arnav with a cold and dangerous voice: whatever DAMN thing

you wanna say WILL BE INFRONT OF my WIFE, Khushi

Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada, incase you have forgotten her

name and who she is.


Subhandra: but-


Arnav interrupted: I think you didn't HEAR properly what I

just said, Mrs Subhandra Malik


Subhandra Widened her eyes with shock at what he just

addressed her by.


Subhandra: ARNAV!


Arnav: I don't have all day Mrs subhandra malik. Make it quick.


Subhandra tempered '..

Subhandra: Before you say anything to me, I wanna let you

know what this girl's been doing for the whole year.


Arnav: Her name is khushi, Khushi kumara gupta SINGH

RAIZADA.

Subhandra looked at khushi as if she will murder her at that very moment.

Subhandra: Arnav, Khushi has tied BLINFOLD in your eyes. It

is all her BLOODY PLANS. Since the day you met her, she's

been trying to get you in her net so that she can get all your

property.

Arnav: and how do you know that?

Subhandra: Damadji! Damadji has told me EVEry single thing

about her. She has done the same thing with him as well. she

tried to get him in her bloody plan so that she can marry a

"MARRIED-MAN" which was FULLY known to her, to get ALL

OF of the property. But when she got to know that you are the

owner of the WHOLE raizada mansion, AR company and other

properties, she left him and gripped your hand''..


Arnav clenched her fist


Subhandra continued: she gripped your hand and started

pretending that she loves you. LOOK how you have been

changed''how she changed you! It was HER PLAN TO

KIDNAP YOU AND SHE BLAMED DAMADJI because she

knew she had a risk that he will tell everything to everyone.


Khushi was crying like hell yet without any noise but not

without arnav's knowledge''Arnav started trembling with

anger. His face went red in rage.


Subhandra: SHE WANTS TO BREAK THIS FAMILY'..And can

you even think HOW CHEAP SHE IS???? How CHEAP SHE IS

that she wanted to make a relationship with a MARRIED

MAN?? And then YOU??? God know how many men were in

her life before you. She is a TWO FACED, CHARACTERLESS,

SHAMELESS, blobby BITCH I ''


Arnav not being able to bear anymore: SHUT UP! JUST

SHUT UP! ENOUGH OF THIS NONSENSE. ENOUGH OF

THESE Freaking story! I DON"T WANT TO HEAR not even a

SINGLE WORD COMING FROM YOUR MOUTH. What did

you say? Khushi, MY WIFE has done all those Cr*p ? well let

me be CLEAR mrs Subhandra Malik, SHE IS THE ONE who

didn't say a WORD after what you have DONE TO her. She

didn't ask a SINGLE QUESTION TO YOU or fought back for

how you TORTURED the HELL out of her, HWO YOU BEAT

HER UP WITH THOSE STICKS, HOW YOU SLAMMED THE

DAMN DOOR OVER HER FINGER'...AND SHE WANTS TO

BREAK THIS FAMILY? SHE DIDN'T EVEN UTTER A WORD

WHEN I SUSPECTED THAT SOMETHING IS WRONG. SHE

DIDN'T UTTER A WORD AGAINST YOU'.. do you know why?

DO YOU GOD DAMN KNOW WHY? SO THAT I DON'T GET

WORRIED FOR HER, SO THAT THIS FAMILY DOESN'T

BREAK' BECAUSE SHE FULLY KNEW THAT I WON'T BEAR A

SINGLE TEAR ON THE EYES OF MY LOVED ONES AND

this? FOR HEAVENS SAKE , SHE WAS SAVING YOU!!! SHE

WAS SAVING A LADY, A CRIMINAL WHO HAS

PHYSICALLY ABUSED MY WIFE?? Who has MENTALLY

TORTURED ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA"S WIFE??


He shouted at her with the loudest voice he has ever used in his life.

Subhandra: arnav i''''.

Arnav: Excuse me? Did I say I am DONE yet?? No

ight?...don't you dare think that you can do the same

freaking thing with MY WIFE as well what you did my my

MAA! She used to cry! Cry every single time you blamed her

for something she DIDN"T EVEN DO! It was ALL dad's

fault'.he had a relationship with another lady which had

bought such a storm in our lives; YOU SON HAS BETRAYED

ME MOM, and THAT LADY AS WELL! the terms YOU USED

To call MY WIFE should be put before YOU SON"S NAME,

mrs subhandra malik. Oh wait''frget about dad'those are

PERFECT for if you add it before your name'.


The three of them did't even realize when nani, Anjali, akash,

payal , mamiji and Nk gathered infront of her room. She were

just frozen at what was going on.


Nani: Arnav! WHAT are you saying.


Arnav turned.


Arnav: exactly what you heard nani. You friend and samdhi has

PHYSICALLY ABUSED MY WIFE and MENTALLY TORTURED

HER''.and it's the matter among three of us''..let us clear it

FIRST!


Arnav turned to see subhandra looking down

Arnav took out his cell phone and dialed a number.


Arnav: yes! Inpector malotra? Yah this is Arnav Singh Raizada.

YAP! Can you just come to RM RIGHT AT THIS MOMENT!

It's really urgent. Tyah'ok''yesss so ohysical abusing issues

which needs to be sorted out! Yap'ok thank you!


Subhandra just widened her eyes in shock.


Subhandra: Arnav? Arnav you called the police?? To'


Arnav: oh yes! What did you think? You would behave with

wife WHATEVER way you want and I would do NOTHING?


Everyone was too shock to say anything to anyone.


Finally nani gather courage to utter a word from mouth.


Nani: Arnav, can you please'.please tell us what is going on?

What are you saying?? Subhandra?? Tortured? Our khush

bitiya?


not saying anything, he just turned khushi who was facing her

back to the famly members and was hiing herself to face

Subhandra, so that they all could see he condition


and each and everyone in the family left their mouth open at the state of khushi. The bruises in her arms, balck, red,blue,

purple bruises''..red stick signs on her back which was

partially seen cuz of the slight low backed salwar-kameez.


The whole family was mummed for god know how long''


Here khushi who couldn't stop crying was engulfed into arnav's

arm. He took her in his protective arms.


Nani slowly started moving towards Subhandra.


She stod infront of her and looked at her for some seconds

and then'.BAM!


Nani slapped her hard.


Nani: HOW COULD YOU SUBHANDRA? How couldn you do

this to KHUSHI BITIYA? How could you blame her for all of

these? I feel ashamed to even call you my friend. CHHI!


Anjali: dadi, why did you do this? Were you gonna make

everything perfect like THIS? And now I AM TELLING YOU

that whatever Shyam has told you was a STORY MADE BY

HIM. I TRUST KHUHI JI! She can't do anything like this.

SHYAM IS THE PERSON who did these and played with her

innocence and with out mind.


Police came'.



Arnav still holding khushi in his arms: hello inspector Malotra.


Inspector: hello Mr. Raizada.


Arnav: inspector, MY wife was physical abused in my house

by Subhandra malik for the entire 2 weeks. Get this lady out

of here and convict her with the WORST PENALTIES that

can be given for this offence !


Subhandra: aRnav no'.Arnav! Arnav you are making the same

mistake you made years ago'I was right then and I am right

now


Arnav held her arms and dragged her out of the room at the

way as if he was throw a garbage out of the room.


Arnav: JUST TAKE HER OUT OF HERE RIGHT NOW! I don't

even see her face!


The polices put the hand cuffs and took her to the prison.


Khushi was still in arnav's chest weeping and hiding her face.


Nani stroke khushi's hair and Arnav took her to their

bedroom.


sooo?? long enough?? and did i give dadi the right punishment??


pls comment and hit the like button to let me know how it was ,...your comments are the ONLY thing that encourage me in writng...and i will be replying to each and every comment!!!

THANK YOU!

PART 24: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69137795

Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rot in jail Dadi😈 I hope u die a dog's death
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!! i love you😊 what a update!! hats off to you👏 you made my day with super duper update😊 awesome and wind blowing!! arnav i love you man! you stand for khushi😊 wow nani slapped that witch Mrs subhandra malik should be hanged to death😃 can't wait for next part update sooon plz😊 love you❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
dadi deserve tz kind of punishment...
seem dadi track is over..so wat should be next???

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loved it dadi gone to jail n she got slap by nani cant wait to read more loved the update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update..the great dadi deserve this!

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