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Thanks a lot
everyone..
For your such a warm replies Loved it..

I had replied to each and everyone's comment individually...



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Part-4 -Page 25


Kuch to hain tujhse Raabta



Part 5

Fighting and arguing with her sleep'.She slowly and gradually she drifted to sleep.

Nupur sleeping very peacefully when a piercing sound hit's her ear drums , they were btiting her ears as if were in intentionaaly doing to broke her sleep.Slowly and steadily she opened her eyes and found her alarm clock is ringing .She put an off to the constant ringing of alarm clock '

Lazily got up from the bed , cleans her room ' freshens her self and moved to downwards.She straightly goes to dining room to grat her mother but found that she is ot their 'she thought may her mother is still sleeping .

She went to check her room seeing her mother sleeping soundly unaware of the consequences of the world,she didn't wish to make her wake up ,as it was long days she is seeing her moter sleeping so soundly but she has to wake her up,today is very important day for her .

She has to get ready on time...She went to her mother and very lovely wake her up.

"Maa'"

"HMM..."

"Maa'it's '..8'Get up..."

"Is it 8'I kept sleeping so late'."

"Relax maa' "

"But I am late; I am just getting up dear' Last night I work late so couldn't able to get on time'.."

"Okay ...you go and get ready, till then I'll make breakfast.What would you like to have"

"My darling ... anything made from your hands..."

"Maa... tell Na... else I'wll is highly confused what to make or what to not'"

"Okay' le I think'..How about veg-cheese sandwiches with confleks'"

"Okay' as you say Madam'.Get up and freshen up fast..."

"Yes... Boss..." They giggle and both of them went to their respective works.

After having their breakfast .They drove towards ther repective works.

Nupur reached her institute and goes to staff room to collect her belongings'

"Hy dear'"

"Hy ...Gunjan' How are you'?"

"I. is Fine sweetoo' ", in shock tone,"But what happen to you..."

"What'..Gunji'."

"Nupsi... Look at your eyes' Haven't you slept last night or was crying whole night... Does someone say you something... Tell me who is he... I will beat him till blues and black... tell me... Is he from this institute...? Any teacher or student.I won't spare anyone' Who tries to hurt my angel..!!!Come on tell me'"

"Shhant ... gadadhari bheem' shaant'., actually I slept very late last night so couldn't get proper sleep as in morning also got up early'"

Gunjan frowining a bit,"May... I know the reason why you slept late last night..?"

She was about disclose about Hate_me but didn't felt right time to tell her so she said,"I was reading some stories online and was so engrossed in them that I forgot the time'"

"OMG'"

"What happen Gunjan...?"

"Oh'!! Freak' Nupsi'"

"What happen dear? Kuch to batao."

"Time se mujhe yaad aayaa, actually today we have an appointment on rose spa"

"We! You mean to say only you... ha Na..."

"No dear I mean to say we''"

"Gunjan'i'",Interrupting Nupur..",Nupsi' my girl' you need a good body spa' look at yourself..In mirror; sometimes I wonder mein nahi hoti tera kya hota'"

Nupur smiling a bit,"Wohi... jo mere bina tera hota'."

Both giggles, Gunjan,"Acha... let's finish our classes then we will go", Pointing a finger to her," and don't you dare to cancel our program this time'"

Nupur,"Okay...okay... madame' as you say... for now mine and your's students are waiting for us'"

"Let's go nupsi' will meet after classes... Okay..."

"Okay'."

They both reach to mall, went to the spa center which was on the second floor.Talking to themselves they had a great spa.

Gunjan:"Wow it feels so relaxed Na, Ha Na nupsi'"

"Yes' Gunji... I am really feeling very rlaxed..."

"Chal... let's go for shopping'Nupsi..."

"What... but you didn't said about it... and I haven't inform maa about this and plus I am not doing any shopping , I hate it."

"Come on Nups'you have so many outdated wardrobe'you need new outfits dear and I also told to anty about this..She became very happy that atleast you will shop something for youself'..Stop being a kid now'"

Hearing the kid word from Gunjan's mouth , her mind went to the chatting of last night,somewhere she doesn't liked being called kid from Gunjan's mouth so not to show her anger to her she politely says,"Okay.. Let's go'."

"Yeh' hu na baat' chal' I have seen very good showrooms here '.let's check them out"

"Okay let's go'."

Both went to a suit and saree shop and were looking outfit's for them.Where Gunjan was choosing bright colors ,Nupur was choosing sweet , sober and light color.

Gunjan saw a very beautifulll blue coloured anarkali dress having silver border on it's end and beautifull neck work.She immediately thought of Nupur.

"Nupsi'see this dress'It's awsome na'."

"It's so awsome Gunji'You'll look an angel in it'.It's really very beautifull'"

"No it's not for me dear 'it's for you..Go and try it'"

"No ..No.. yaar I can't you know na I don't Like bright colours and it's so gawdy'Please Gunjan..I can't.."Nupur was very reluctant in wearing that dress.. though it was pretty but since because of it's bright colour she was hesitant to wear it.

At the same time a man entered the shop,The shop manager greeted him and give him very warm welcome as if he is some V.I.P.

Being insisted by Gunjan ; Nupur didn't want to dissappoint her and for her sake she headed to trial room'..While moving towards trial room Nupur's duppatta was flowing and it brushed some one's face,The man was mesmerised by the touch of her duppatta but soon his chain of thoughts were broken within a second when the shopkeeper provide him the blue colour armaani suit to try.We see that the same person also entered the trial room which is adjacent to Nupur's one.

Nupur Hanged the dress to the near by wall , due this her half of dress of hanging to other wall of the adjacent room.

The person who was in the adjacent room didn't notice what is hanging on his wall he also hanged his dress on the same wall.Both the dresses were lying above each other.

Soon both of them drag their dresses to change; making just a mere touch of their fingers .Nupur shudderred a bit with the slight touching of her hand with another person but then thinks it's just her illusion so she diverted her mind in changing her dress..

Where the person on the adjacent trial room also feels that his fingres had brushed with another person but since it was mere very light brushing of their finger tips

So keeping these thoughts aside he went out of the trial room after trying his dress.But still that touch resides in his geart and also on his fingers.

Nupur also liked the dress ,it was indeed very very pretty and thought to buy it to keep Gunjan happy.

She came out and told Gunjan that she'll buy it.Both of them headed towards cash counter for billing.

Nupur's chance was about to come when cashier interrupted her,"Excuse me Mam,Actually we need to done the billing of Mr.Sharma first till then please wait."

But it was chance of Nupur,"But, it's my chance."

Cashier made her understand,"Mam, we know but he is a very big personailty , it has been an honoured for our shop , so please wait in the queue .Only five minutes Mr.Sharma is a busy man,he gave us only 5 mins to do the billing so please mam try to understand."

Without arguing much with the cashier ,Nupur just nodded her head , and stands in the queue.




Hope you all like..it




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Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It ws very nice part.
Bt I want to know at is the age difference between Mayur?
Thnx for Pm
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amazing update👏
Edited by ....vula_kv.... - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Irum.

It ws very nice part.

Bt I want to know at is the age difference between Mayur?
Thnx for Pm








How do you know that That Man is Mayank..!!!!
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wow mayur on the way
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Originally posted by: shafyyy








How do you know that That Man is Mayank..!!!!

Good question.
"Nupur's chance was about to come when cashier interrupted her,"Excuse me Mam,Actually we need to done the billing of Mr.Sharma first till then please wait."
Only Mayank's touch can effect her.Or itna arrogant and saro sirf apna Mayank hi ho skta hai.
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Originally posted by: shafyyy


ye khul k kuch bataye to pata chale

Awww... u both r so sweet.
Don't worry I have taught them lesson.
Main tu bhool bhi gaye thi wo to yeh story ne yaad dila diya.

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