MN FF-*Kuch to hain Tujhse Raabta* Prt-14,Pg-83 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update.

so beautiful ... very well written.

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago


Shaffyyy Sweetu
it was wonderful part
Mayur small scene at shopping mall was d most beautiful part of this update
it seems destiny is planing something for them
bapre- so MaYank is a VIP person...
hmm so zahir se baat hain ki he gonna rough n tough

i m waiting for mayur face to face meeting
GUNUR talk was very cute n nice
lovelyyy part
awesome update dear

keep it up


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.



Shaffyyy Sweetu
it was wonderful part
Mayur small scene at shopping mall was d most beautiful part of this update
it seems destiny is planing something for them
bapre- so MaYank is a VIP person...
hmm so zahir se baat hain ki he gonna rough n tough

i m waiting for mayur face to face meeting
GUNUR talk was very cute n nice
lovelyyy part
awesome update dear

keep it up






But Faria how can you say that Mr. Sharma is Mayank...
I mean he could any other person
may Mayank has different entry in this ss..
How can you be so sure..!!!!
Edited by shafyyy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy






<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">But Faria how can you say that Mr. Sharma is Mayank...</font>
<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">I mean he could any other person</font>
<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">may Mayank has different entry in this ss..</font>
<font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">How can you be so sure..!!!!</font>


haww
hmmm
ok sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago

no worry..
i can understand..
You all are so excited about Mayur...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 5-Page 30

Kuch to hain Tujhse Raabta


Part-6

Without arguing much with the cashier ,Nupur just nodded her head , and stands in the queue.

She was watching that how people are following a person ,She couldn't able to see is face only could see him from his back.He walked out from the shop as a storm and then after that cashier came to do billing of her dresses,After paying to the cashier she came out of the shop.Then only Gunjan came,She was out to take some coffee for them,"Where have you been Nupur'.Kitna time lag gaya'"

"Are..Gunjan some Mr.Sharma has arrived to the shop so all of them were busy greeting him and busy to attend him first so I got late'"

"Why didn't you fight with the cashier ... it's your turn first then'.Because when I left you your chance was about to come"

Nupur not able to understand why Gunjan asked her fight with the salesman or shopkeeper,"Gunjan ' how could I argue and I don't feel arguing about such a small thing.."

"Oh.. god Nupur'.It's not first time..Last time a person pleaded you and you gave your place to him and herself stands at the last of the queue..Why don't you fight for your right'"

"Gunjan .. iss choti si baat mein Right kahan se aagaya''"

"Nupur just because of your silly silly acts '.and you became completely shy regarding these act ' should behave atleast brave '"

"Gunjan .. leave it na''Let's have coffee.. it's already becoming cold coffee'"

Gunjan understoos that Nupur want to change the topic , without fightig her anymore regarding this she said,"Okay'''.."

Boh the friends headed out of the shopping mall and went after greeting each goodnight they went towards their respective homes.

After reaching her home'Nupur ring the bell and was greated by a hug by her mother,"Nupur,.. you know I am so happy today'"

"Why' mom'."

"Because you went for shopping today child'."

"So ''Mom'"

"'What Mom'..After 7 months 3 days and 3 hrs you went for shopping''"

"Maa.. you are becoming very filmy you know that'"

"I know'. Tell something that I don't know about my self'."

"Okay'okay' there is a good newz for you'Gunjan made be buy an anarkali suit which completely opposite of my taste.. wanna see'."

"Sure'.I would love too"

Nupur showed the dress to her mother , Mrs.Bhushan was very much happy to see that her daughter actually enjoying her life''seeing the colour of the suite she wish her life would filled by all the bright colours of the universe.Coming out of the trance she asked Nupur to freshen up and came to dining table.They Had their dinner and went to up to their rooms to get some sound sleep.But sleep was far away from Nupur's eyes'..As when she sat alone in her room ,,His words again struck her mind.

She very slowly opened her laptop and Login to I-F''

She saw that he has replied to her.

'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''*Hy'Kiddo'what happen'are you still angry from me'... Oh'dear''what happen have I hurt you*.

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Seeing his reply a small smile came to her lips but she quickly wipe it off and replied to him

*Yes you had actually hurt me'*

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*Really''*

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------*Yes'.And I suppose now I expect an apology'*

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*Excuse apology from me why should I apologise you'I am saying it's good if you get hurt becausse of my words because now atleast you will show some maturity to your story'..*

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Nupur's Mouth was big open..How can on earth the person could so rude.

*You know you are so rude'*

*And still you are talking to me'.*

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------A sMALL smile appeared on her face'.Before Nupur could think of an appropriate answer to reply him he Posted one more message at an instant'..*

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------And 'If am not wrong''.This girl to whom right now I am chatting is blushing'..*

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*Hy'..I am not blushing..*She replied still smile was playing on her face'.

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*Fine you are not blushing but a sweet smile is surely playing on your pink lips'making your eyes sparkle'..and you are also playing with one strand of hair'..*

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

After seeing his reply Nupur was dumbstruck as she was actually playing with the strand of her hair and she was indeed smiling''.

She tries to look here and there as if someone is watching her not 'But didn't found anyone.

She replied to him'''''''''''..

*How did you know.. that'.*

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*Hhahahaha'That means you were actually doing what I said ''*

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------*Ye'..yes'.*

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------*Hy ' Why are so hesitant ' Atleast you can chat me freely unlike the way you behave so shy and introvert with outsiders except your mother and your best friend.*

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Now this was really a shock to Nupur'.How did This guy sitting miles away just chatting with her on net able to guess these things about her'She was confused'..

*Is this is your guess'.*

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*No sweety''.I am prettly much sure about it'.*

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*But how did you know so many thing about me'I did never mentioned these things about me'.*

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*You yourself.. did..it..*

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*So you know everything about..me'*

*Approximately' YES'.!!!!*

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*Okay then tell something about me'..*

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*You are testing me''*

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*If I say yes'then''.*

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*Okay''You are a very shy type of person and is really very reserved for the outsiders,You hardly talk to anyone specially boys,You farther died when were small,You like light colours , hate shopping , love your mother who work day and night for you and also your best friend and always dreamed of a prince who will one day will surely come and will shower pure love on you'..and'You love to write stories when you are alone also want to become best writer'..

Anything I had left..???*

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Nupur's Mouth was wide open she was in state of great shock and superise how this person could able to know about her to this extent even to her dreams ..no one knows about them not even her mother'Then how can he'..

*How did you know these things about me'..*

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*You yourself told me.. dear'*

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*How'?*

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Part 7-Page-42

Edited by shafyyy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG whats happening

How could he know too much abt NUPUR

How it possible?? When did nups tell him abt herself…mujhe tou yaad nehi arahe

Wait wait- did he talking abt the story that she wrote on I-F

Or He was the secret admirer of NUPUR??

Yaar this guy is very mysterious person

Kch samajh nehi arahe..

But its going very interesting

Wonderful update

Keep it up

Edited by Faria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Nice updates..loved them.




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

OMG whats happening

How could he know too much abt NUPUR

How it possible?? When did nups tell him abt herself'mujhe tou yaad nehi arahe

Wait wait- did he talking abt the story that she wrote on I-F

Or He was the secret admirer of NUPUR??

Yaar this guy is very mysterious person

Kch samajh nehi arahe..

But its going very interesting

Wonderful update

Keep it up



First of all..






Well..This all you will get to know in the next part..
he will reveal the secret and also many more things...

of ehich you were waiting desperately...😊
Edited by shafyyy - 13 years ago
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