FF: maein tumari saas hoon,tho maein aapki bahu p2 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

16

Views

1.7k

Users

9

Likes

30

Frequent Posters

MereMahiyaa. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Loveeed it Great start Bhavya
Cant wait tooo read the next part :D
Vinder90 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#12
loved the first part. .

Lali lipistick rocks! as always. 😃 awesome work byu including sections of prakash and kussum too. . lol Imarti telling sajni that ved will be scared of too much make up lol šŸ˜† pretty awesome šŸ‘
Haifa_JayBFan thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#13
woww...gr8 work bhavya!!!!
i neva thot u wud write an ff on ambi n imarthi but u did a fab job, seriously!!
well done...
will wait 4 the next part!!
Peacefulmind thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Guys i am writing the second part... Please give ur suggestion u want ambi to be educated or uneducated in the FF...


Please suggest what u want ambi to be in my FF... As i have two ideas to proceed wants ur suggestions here...


Pls pls...i will update tonight...
Peacefulmind thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Ha ha ha.. Koi those suggest karo... Where are u kairians...
Vinder90 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#16
i want Ambi to be educated 😃, sorry for late reply, am pretty far from home now, and browsing on my phone while moving about is annoyingly hard. . 🤢

edit: IN serial she is educated but only seesmm taht her english is the weak poin, reading and writing, so you could keep her as educated as she is in the serial, or even moer educated which I prefer . .


Edited by Vinder90 - 12 years ago
Peacefulmind thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#17

PART 2

"sajni, I know that vedji is a good person, its maaji who is keeping all her sons in control, atlest after their marriage , maaji would have given them freedom to her sons, she is scared that we will snatch her sons from her so she does like this.."

"but jeeji, I just want just love from maaji and vedji, "

Kusum replied

"sajni don't worry one or other day maaji will understand the meaning of love…"

Saying this she leaves the kitchen…

Sajni is confused again and thinks and walks to her room..

And talks to herself

"what did jeeji told, maaji don't understand what is love. ? , but without knowing love how did she have three children?. This kusum jeeji bhi na she is so buddhu…"

Saying this sajni hits her own head

"Arrey kusum jeeji….", shouted Laali lipstick….

"Haan sajni ek minute I am busy with sonu, he is troubling wait for sometime I will come to your room….".

Ufff jab thak jeeji comes here let me go for dream land……and only me and my vedji…

Laalilipstick stands infront of mirror again and starts dreaming ….the same song

"dil garden garden ho gaya hai"

Sajni will be so happy and romantic… she will hug her vedji and caress his cheeks, and our buddhu vedji is shy in dream too he is trying to run away from sajni…she holds him and takes a initiative to kiss him, and moves towards vedji……and her eyes are closed..

But unfortunately vedji is in dilemma and confused and scared asks..our sajni

"sajni what aare you doing , please leave me, sajni wake up from dream lamd

Laalilipstick in dream land…

And suddenly laalilipstick wakes up from dream on hearing the shouting..

"sajni maein hoon tumari jeeji"

Laali sees kusum in her arms and gets scared and leaves kusum jeeji…

"sajni what were u doing, "

"jeeji, sorry I thought u are my vedji..i was in garden doing dil garden with vedji"

"dekho sajni, wake up from dream, now if we both bahus don't join our hands and teach a lesson to maaji, we both will be like doormat in imarthi nivas forever…so I have a plan "

"jeeji, you have plan too…to teach a lesson to maaji,…jeeji I just want vedjis love that's it I don't want to hurt maaji"

"oh oh sajni , jab tak maaji is stubborn and meany she will not vedji near you…see atleast I have sonu…what about you, you want vedjis love na?..."

"haan jeeji vedji ke liye kuch bhi karoongi….i will do anything for it.."

"ok, listen there is a girl called ambi in my village, she is very clever and good girl, and she knows to handle a woman like imarthi, my mother called me and said we should think of ambi for anuj…socho if ambi gets married to aaniuj she can take care of imarthi devi, and we both can happily live with our husbands"

"but jeeji, how will maaji agree for ambi?"
"don't worry I and my mother have a plan, we will somehow take whole family to my village and will make anuj to fall in love with ambi, and than we will create drama and make ambi anuj get married…."

"jeeji , I am scared if maaji comes to know than what will happen she will kill us"

"don't worry sajni I am with u…we will make this plan sucees. Id ambi comes as a bahu of imarthi than this house will become a happy home"

"jeeji, how do you know ambi is good and courageous to face maaji"

"sajni, ambi is a different girl, she plays so many pranks and always makes the evil to get punished, and I am sure to kill evilness of imarthi, a girl like ambi who is a kaali roop to come to this house.."

"jeeji , is she beautiful"

"Haan I have her photo in my mobile, mom has sent her photo, wait I will show…"

"jeeji, she is beautiful but not more than me….i am a only beauty queen of this house.."

"haan sajni I know how beautiful u are soorath se bhi aur dil se bhi…."…..

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".