FF: maein tumari saas hoon,tho maein aapki bahu p2

😃 awesome to see you starting off creative work on the forum . .

wil add this tot he FFs section in the Craetive writings index 😃

the title is fantastic. . . both imarti and Ambi asserting their relations to each other. . .very interesting. . wouldl ove to see your take on this 😊

PART 1

Vedji, vedji, vedji, vedji where are you….vedji, vedji…

Ufff this vedji bhi na, he will go gayab all the time whenever I need him ….i know its all because to of that Imarthi devi my one and only saas….what she thought to my husband he has become a thotha (parrot) he will be chanting either hey ramji or meri maa mahaan….there is no day which went without listening to his bajan of meri maa mahaan, meri maa mahaan…

And upon that he thinks that I am his naukraani and imarthi devi I hate u for this…you are thinking by making my husband stay away from me you can rule this house I will teach you a lesson soon, what you thought of me…

Maaji aap mera nature Jannthi nahin ho…agar aap ser tho maein sava ser….

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Areey Kussum, areey kusssum bahu zaldi bahar aaa…

Arrey kkussum bahu,,,,,,,kahan mar gayi,,

"kkusum maa is calling you from that time why cant you go and ask her"

"prakashji, your maa is so clever I know why she is calling me, she wants a glass of water, for that she is screaming like hell instead of that she would have got water by herself, actually she is not thirsty or tiered she wants we bahus to dance on her tunes….but all thanks to you prakashji, that you will never open your mouth nor your brother…"

"kussum she is our maa, you cannot speak against her"

'prakashji there is a limit for everything I am educated, and my parents are ready to offer as a better living and we can live peacefully with our son sonu, but your maa is not willing for our happiness"..

Kkusssum arrey bahu I am calling you from that time I am thirsty meri bahu, ohoh what are you doing inside your room come out…soon…

Ambe, ye dono bahuyein kahan gayi…. Ek tho laali lipstick doosri goongi bahu…whenever I will ask them to do simple work they will take hours to do 5 minutes task…

Abb mujhe hi kuch karna hoga ….in dono ke dekh rekh maien..

"first let me check out what this laali lipstick is doing I asked her to call my dulaaara beta ved, …"

"arrey sajni laali lipstick open the door maein kabse darwaaza kat kata rahin hoon…khol darwaza(open the door)"

"ye bagwan is maazi ko bhi na, abhi aana tha, jab maein saj rahin hoon, meri jaan legi ab"

"Arrey bahu, open the door kya lipstick ki dukhhan kholna chathi ho kya"

"Kya maaji can see through closed door also that I am applying lipstick, she can do anything, that's why vedji always tell maaa is devi, but she is not devi a big rakshas she is, what shall I do first let me hide all these cosmetics if she comes to know that I have purchased all these without asking her permission than she will make big hungama"

IMARTHI WILL BE BANGING THE DOOR

Sajni will open the door with fear

"mmaaji I was searching for vedji but I did not get him, I think he is gone outside the house"

"ohhh meri boli bahu, laalilipstick I know that vedji has gone outside the house but what were you doing inside the room from that long time, I was calling kkussm to get me a glass of water but not even you and kussum came out of the room…why did you latcht he door from inside"

"maaji mujhe maaf kardijiye, I did not hear you, aap tho mera nature jaanthe ho na"

"haaan laalipstick jaanthi hoon tumara nature, isiliye kah rahin hoon, thoda makeup kam lagaaya karo,,,, agar ved dekhega thuje is haalath maein tho dar jaayega, "

IMARTHI WILL LEAVE VEDS ROOM LEAVING SAJNI IN A SHOCKED MODE…SAJNI WILL SEE HER BEAUTIFUL FACE IN MIRROR AND AGAIN WILL BE BUSY IN APPLYING TONES OF MAKE UP…

"kussum kahan ho tum"

"maaji, juice"

"arrey goongi bahu Juice, I just asked saada paani"

"maaji I knw that u asked water but you got so tiered and came from outside so prakashji asked me to get juice for you.."

Sajni and KKussum is kitchen preparing for dinner…

"aarrey jiji who imarthi devi is there na she is such a big devil, she will get to know what I do inside the closed doors, I doubt she have third eye also some magic, vedji has become maas puppet, "

"nahin sajni not only ved bhaiyaa even prakashji has become puppet in maajis hands…and we both bahus have become the servant of this house….i never thought prakashji will give me this type of life or else I would have not married him"

"but jeeji yours is a love marriage and mine is a arranged marriage but I thought you will be happy with prakash bahiya"

"nahin sajni we both love each other a lot, but I want a freedom for myself, cant listen to maajis taane baaji all the time, "

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aww..great work bhavya👏...very beautifully written..loved every bit of it..eagerly waiting for ur next update..

What's about the idea on Ambi that you got after seeing COMEDY KA Jashn.. Liked this one...

lovely ff Bhavya, so beautifully written
seems as im watching it, not reading honestly you are such a good writer!!
It sounds relistic and loved the diologues u used
lali lipstick part was hillarious, u made me laugh so much
carry on with ur awesome, wonderfull ff and update quickly will be waiting for the next part
thanks for the pm
and all the best for the next part
luv ur writing style 👍🏼