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BETI KO PATANE KA 1st STEP- PROPOSE HER MOTHER
(KR OS)
weaklins had cleared d footloose eliminations round !
it ws moment to cherish !
but yes two ppl werent happy...d pillars of d team !
kria had to leave and she cudnt hav done dat widout informing to swayam atleast !
she felt tht it wudnt b gud widout her telling him...
but yea she ws doin injustice to rey..she dint tell him..she dint want to hurt him..
she wanted 2 hav his happy memories wid her and nt d sad 1ce !
just as d performance ended she left frm der..ya she ws caught by rey but widout paying any heed to him se ran frm der !
der at her plc smriti had already made all d arrangements fr der departure !
all wer very happy..dey decided to celebrate d moment at d plc tht connected dem !-ST.LOUIS COLLEGE
guyz evn d dazzlers had cleared d competition..dey had done a previously practiced performance of deirs and awesome dancers as dey wer..dey cleared it out and uss cheevam ki chop ho gyi :P
he wudnt succeed in any of his plans ;) :P
so back to ST.LOUIS..dey wer celebrating..kria ws missing..swayam made a excuse tht she had to go home
everybody ws enjoying and swayam cudnt hold himself fr any longer tym..he just went frm der and as everybody ws busy dey dint notice except 1..it ws rey...he followed him...swayam had gone to d fire exit..and soon as he reached der he started crying..
Sw: kyun kria tum mujhe chod ke chali gyi..ab mein apni best friend ke bina kaise rahunga??
rey had heard all dis...and gt tensed...abt hearing kria leave..
Re: swayam..kya hua tu ye kya bol rha..kaha gyi kria aur tu ro kyun raha hai??
swayam tried 2 hide his tears and pain bt cudnt hide dem frm rey !
Sw: kya kuch bhi to nahi..
Re: dekh jhoot mat bol..tujhe kria ki kasam..
swayam narrates him d whole story...and dat she ws leaving mumbai in d very next 10 mins...through bus..
rey widout waiting evn fr a second..rushed der..driving carelessly...he reached der..
der wer nt many ppl at d station as it ws night tym..and d last bus fr today ws frm mumbai to delhi !
he tried finding her..asking ppl abt her..der wer 2 busses..ready to leave..he checked dem ova der..
smriti sw him and hid behind a poll...
smriti felt sumthing wrong..bcoz if rey ws a casanova and dint luc her daughter whole heartedly y wud he b here??
may b his luv ws true and she had mistaken !
kria ws totally lost in d moment..she cudnt see her rey in pain..she ws broken...dey hadnt evn boarded d bus and all d buses had left..!
rey jus cudnt hold himself anymore..he fell on his knees...cried a lot...venting out his pain..wch nw ws endless..
Re: kyun universe ji..aapne usse mujhe alag kar diya?? kaise reh paunga mein uske bina??
rey's love had already melted smriti she said..
Sm: kria..meri kismat mein sacha pyaar nhi tha.. aur tumse mein tumhara pyaar nhi cheen sakti...
she looked at her mother nt beliving her..smriti gve her a approving look..amd kria widout evn waiting fr a second ran into his arms who ws on his knees..
he ws taken aback..he pulled back..to see it was..though his heart had already told him..but he cudnt believe instantly..but seeing her in his arms...he hugged her wid all her might..showing his love..after remaining like dat fr a few mins...he pulled back and slapped her lightly..she pouted...
Re: pagal mujhe bata nhi sakti thi?? tumhe kya lagta hai mein tumhe aise hi jaane deta..hum dono milkar tumhari mom ko manate na..mujhe aise hi chod kar jaa rhi thi??
smriti cums frm behind and answers dis Q of his...
Sm: beta wo iski koi galti nhi hai maine he isse promise liya that wo kisi ko nhi batayegi..
he gt up..and went to her..
Re: aap pls..apne aap ko blame mat kariye...aapki galti nhi thi..wo to mein hi aapko impress nhi kar paaya..
Sm: kisne kaha mein tumse impressed nhi hu..meri beti ko jo itna pyaar karte ho tum..aur mujhe kya chahiye hoga haan??
Re: sachi??
Sm: muchi !
he bent on his knees...
Re: mein ab aur koi chance nhi lena chahta..kria ko puchne se pehle mujhe aapki permission chahiye..
kya aap mujhe apni beti ke boyfriend ke roop mein abhi ke liye aur as a son in law after a few years ke roop mein accept karogi??
smriti jus laughed at his innocence..and kria cudnt help but adore him..
Sm: haa baba..aaj se meri beti tumhari hui...
he instantly gt up and hugged her !
kria ran to her ad she too hugged her and den..
after a while dey left fr her house in rey's car..
as dey reached der destination...kriyansh felt sad..dey had to b separated..
smriti sensed it an thought of giving dem sum tym..as she had already done bad to dem !
Sm: kria mein abhi jaa rhi hu..tum thodi der ke bad aa sakti ho..
dey instantly looked at her..and she smirked and left..
dey bth came out of deir car as she left...
Re: kria mujhe gud nyt wish nhi karogi??
Kr: gudnyt rey..bye !
Re: oye wait..kya itna rukha sukha bye..??
Kr: rukha sukha??..aur kya karna chahiye mujhe??
he took her into his embrace..wrapping her around her waist and resting his chin on her shoulders..
Re: tumhara boyfriend hu..ek gudnyt kiss to banti hai na??
Kr: mera boyfriend??..maine kab kaha?
Re: abhi abhi to station par aunty ne kaha na...he said turning her to him
Kr: maa ne kaha maine thodi na kaha..
he gt wat she ws trying to say..
he bent on his knees..extending his hand..
Re: kria kya tum ye chahti ho ki tumhari subah mere pyaare se text se ho??
aur meri raat tumhari gudnyt kiss se khatam ho??
mein tumhara official driver banna chahta hu...jo tumhe daily college ke liye pick karega..aur chodega..baitogi mere saath front seat par??
kya tum meri har baat cut karogi hamesha ke liye...u noe i wud luv to do dat..
kya tum mere aur sirf mere saath date par chalogi??
kya tum mere saath apni 1st kiss share karogi??
she ws just taken aback..wht wud a girl want if she had a loving partner..
she instantly said a yes..and as she did..
he took her into a kiss..
wch ws a smooth 1 1stly and den wch changed into a passionate one...
and den dey parted wid her givin a gudnyt kiss to him...to meet up fr d next day !
the end !
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