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Posted: 12 years ago

METICULOUSLY WRITTEN...HATSSS OFF 2 U...👍🏼...THENKEW FR PM...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow superb.both r unable 2 control their emotions.OMG d last part on call.even they didnt do physical their thoughts wer hot.even after bein a mother of two kids i was naive but u guys freak me out.i was unable 2 understand double meanings initially.but now im onto it..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aamshula87

Wow superb.both r unable 2 control their emotions.OMG d last part on call.even they didnt do physical their thoughts wer hot.even after bein a mother of two kids i was naive but u guys freak me out.i was unable 2 understand double meanings initially.but now im onto it..

hahaha...trust me...when i married i could understand pun...but felt real shy talking openly, there were some words i cudnt understand and wud ask my freinds generally male and they would say/..".tu Jhalli hai" (imagine sohisticated mumbai..and me jhalli)
good thing was we were such comfirtable lot...they would even tell me the meaning...its worth being embarassed among people u are close to rather than making a fool.
But now.,..after marriage, i changed place...and i can give the guys some lesson on vocab...gawd my GK in these have increased many folds...and this is in a small town...hahaha
Loved ur comment...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey folks...shall update the post today between 10 and 11 pm...IST
if u are waiting pls do wait...



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mtina0207

hey folks...shall update the post today between 10 and 11 pm...IST

if u are waiting pls do wait...



hi tina, will wait.
by the way did you read my comment, hope you liked it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: laksh65

tina,


amazing chapter, the way you have portrayed their monologues is too good. she is heartbroken when he left her just like that and he is expecting her to treat him as special, what is very appealing that inspite of khushi giving him open invitation, he knows about her very well that she is not that type of girl and he wants her to trust him but failing to tell her due to his ego, this girl has trust issues, in the end, she really challenged him by talking about banana and the x rated movie, she is hell bend on making him believe that she is that type of a girl and am sure arnav would never buy that.

You have shown though asr is so arrogant but is a great logical thinker, he would never believe just by seeing something or what is shown to him. Khushi has lost her logical thinking , the day she met her asr.

In both their monologues they are having their thoughts which expresses a very good understanding but they are failing to express that to each other face to face as their false ego rules over them at that spur of a moment.

Waiting for THE MOMENT between them. cont soon.

Hey am sorry...i thought i had already posted my reply to ur comment...wonder where did that go
Of course i love ur comments and wait up for them.,...
Yes...its very important according to me to know the monologue,...coz unlike serials where their facial expression speak in writing its only words and expressions. One has ego one has fear...lets see when both will crash down and how...
Thank you for the comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
ROFL...poor poor poor arnav...khushi is going to be his death one day...lol...cant stop laughing...and temme arnav dint seriously ask aman to ask khushi all that...oh god i still cant stop laughing...waiting eagerly for next update...thanks for pm:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi friends...
Thank you so much for the comments and praises.Been a tad down with whats going on in the forum..
Thank you all for taking time out in this hussle and commenting too. Hope this update brings a smile on the face of a few reading this update
As always...do let me know how was the update...
Love to all...we all need a jaadu ki Jhappi
Hey dont forget to enjoy and comment and yes dont forget to too

"AMAN ..AMAN, Is that girl ur friend,. I SWEAR, TELL HER NOT TO COME IN FRONT OF ME IF SHE KNOWS WHAT'S GOOD FOR HER. I SWEAR I WILL COMMIT MURDER TODAY.

"ASR calm down" what happened 'why are u cursing Khushi,

"U have no clue what she did yesterday'I mean .and u guys say she is innocent. God she is *****

Now Aman was worried, what had khushi done to pique ASR so bad'he really looked tired and unslept.

MMM ASR, what did khushi do, do u want me to speak to her''

'why would I want u to speak to my girl. I can do my talking, just do me favour, when u speak to her, just ask her how was the movie and was the fruits that she bought any good. Were they enough for her.'

"what"

"Yeah, she was talking about eating fruits and watching movie, I was surprised, u generally sit with popcorns..,but with khushi, well we know she is different right??" said ASR with a Sugary smile

Aman left the room confused and tried khushi's number It was engaged.

. ASR with the smile'something was definitely brewing . he tried the number again, the same result

Aman had a flight to catch in 3 hours' time. He was going to Australia for some important office project and would be back only after a week.

Well he would speak to her from there sometime.

But before that he had to do something. He went to ASR's room and said, "ASR I need to tell u, don't do anything that u will regret and don't hurt khush, I promise if I see her in a bad state, u will have to answer me. And this is personal'and e know u know how to keep personal and professional separate"

What the??

"Now having that out of way, hey boss, I am gonna rock the investors out there and gonna come a success."

Bye.

"Arnav's anger at the initial mention of Aman to not do anything he would regret, vanished in the air. He knew aman was looking out for khushi and he so envied their relationship, he wished he had that open right on khushi to protect her. It had hardly been over twelve hours since he had seen khushi, and the craving to see her, hear her, sparr with her was distracting arnav.

"Hi ASR do u need coffee?" asked Rose.

And all ASR could think of was the way he spilled the coffee last night after Khushi's call. He turned red, which intrigued his secretary big time. She looked at him questioningly. "mm nnooo Rose, mmm thank you. I am on Coffee strike for the time being?" Coffee off late came with packaged images he could currently do without.

Damn Khushi was playing havoc with his emotions. He was missing her, he could see her everywhere and he even goofed up in a meeting taking her name, instead of the endorsement line they were to showcase in the winters fall.

Everyone at the meeting gave him a questioning look but he saved his ass by using Khushi as happiness instead of name

The woman was lethal'present or absent. 'O god help me'

******

Khuhsi was sitting in a meeting with viren going over the file of one of his clients when he asked khushi, so khushi, any latest movies did u to catch up on last night?

Khushi was completely shocked, had Arnav spoken to viren on last night. Does he know what she did'."mmm why do u ask Viren?"

Well u seem unrested and unslept. So thought to ask if it was a movie..

"Ohhh'wooo'..nahin'no new movies'hehhehehehehe"

The day was completely unfruitful for khushi. everywhere she started seeing arnav , by the pantry, water cooler, ladies toilet'what the'.damn'that was limits. 'Oh god help me'.

****** the next day Arnav had to go for the party and he picked up his phone to ask khushi to stay ready but didn't, "let her suffer". Let her taste, how it feels to wait. Let us up the game, let her feel the other woman."

Khushi waited for her phone to buzz but nothing. She wanted to speak to him'she wanted to hear his voice.

Even Aman was not there. He had had a long flight to Australia and he would be tired. So she did not want to disturb him either.

She went off to sleep with her usual prayer that constituted cursing Arnav.

It had been two days since they had seen each other. Khushi got up in the morning, picked up the kettle for the coffee and took the newspaper.

What she saw shocked the life out of her

Arnav was in the party with Tanya, she was falling all over him and he was smiling at her..

This guy is gonna be meat'khushi started crying coz all her belief about men was coming true and ASR was no different

She had to harden her mind and heart. she missed arnav, missed the glimpse of him. Missed him period.

She was thinking over her time with arnav when viren knocked and told her that Astitva was in town. Astitva is Viren's younger brother and equally handsome. He has been doing his management at US and had come down for the holiday. He and khushi had hit it off immediately as Astitva too was a fun loving guy and he enjoyed Khushi's company. Khushi, immediately called him up and set up a dinner and dance with him. Astitva adored Khushi and waited patiently for Khushi, to grow into her feelings for him. But for khushi it was mere friendship a good friendship.

They went partying to the volcano (pub) where they danced like there was no tomorrow. They cracked jokes, and khushi genuinely enjoyed the time. Not that she was not missing him, but she was trying to prepare herself for when Arnav would leave her. And she really liked Astitva, so no harm'he is a dear friend

Khushi held on to his arm and were walking. Astitva flirting with khushi, and khushi giggling holding onto his arm.

They were clicked by the paparazzi as the happening crowd of the happening pub in city

Surely the photographs had to make a round in the newspaper

It was Saturday and had been 5 days since either saw or spoke to each other. Khusi was very restless. She buzzed Aman, who was on the verge of sleeping. "Hey khush, good I could get thru u'have been trying hell no of times. How are u baby,. Hope u a good girl and hope ASR ain't troubling u?"

Khushi spoke to Aman for a very long time giving him all the sharable details and avoiding the topic of ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA. She was weak there, raw with her bruise. The feeling that probably her behavior ticked ASR off and he is no more interested. She hoped he had the decency to tell her on face, rather than letting her derive the conclusions.

Suddenly Aman asked, Hey khush, I almost forgot, Arnav had asked me to ask u how was the movie and the fruits and whether they were enuf for u?

"Khushi face was like a perfect o'..what the hell'..?" khushi went into silence mode

Hello??? Hello khush u there, what happened khush, did arnav do or say anything'what did he mean by that statement khush come on tell me? Khush u worrying me? What did ASR mean by that?

"BY THAT STATEMENT UR BOSS MEANT THAT HE IS A PERVERT. With capital P AMAN"

"Really?"

khushi whipped around at the familiar voice to see Arnav at her door in a relaxed stance and smiling, slowly walking towards her.

"Last I checked, calling a guy at midnight and telling him about the sexual pursuit u plan to carry out is what one would call pervert khushi, how was I pervert there?" if anything I was being a gentleman asking if all was good"

Precap

Will khushi share her dark secret. Will arnav be any wiser of Khushi's past. Its time guys

waiting for ur verdict friends...
Edited by mtina0207 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

ROFL...poor poor poor arnav...khushi is going to be his death one day...lol...cant stop laughing...and temme arnav dint seriously ask aman to ask khushi all that...oh god i still cant stop laughing...waiting eagerly for next update...thanks for pm:-)

Just updated dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh Tina, on first page..yippee. pat on my back.

lovely lovely update. you know you have such a gripping control on your updates that i am glued to my inbox..awaiting your pm.

absolutely different story keeping the character traits intact. take a bow girl.👏

waiting for more...
Edited by mouramen - 12 years ago

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