Beautifully Dead FF Abhiya/Jisha/Maaneet/Chandeena

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

do cont

its amazing

do pm me from next time

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zara

@meerubzara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow its awosome

eagerly w8ng for next part

plz pm me

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

SNEEK PEEK 😉

Broken Hearted Girl

Tears welled in my eyes. I felt anger fuel the pain I felt. Something inside me snapped.

"Don't ever talk about my mother like that." I growled. I felt my hand hit his face and the slap echoed.

Heads turned and then came the gasps.
People stared and then they whispered.

I could feel my hands push him away and I spun around and started walking off the dance floor.

I could decipher the whispers.

"What a bitch!"

"What was she doing forcing herself on him?"

"Bloody wh**e. First Jeh and now god knows whom?"

They went on and on and I could feel a tear escape my eyes.

P.S. The previous chapter was dedicated trishnawaliya to for being such a great supporter and commenting on every update on every FF I ever posted. Your comments really made my day though I didnot reply to all of them *blush*!

Anyone excited? 'cause I am!

Anyway I like this version better.

You?

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

I am defo excited Kiara 😃 Bring it on 😉

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

i loved the whole concept😉 continu soon & do pm me😳

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@-The_Tomboy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

ki ki!!! what an update!!!

i saw pkyek only like just for kabisha!!

but eeeppp that was awesome!!

arre yaar meri misha ko traitor banaa daala!!

aiyyoo!! chalega!! kum se kum ab humari misha will do some romance!! i have not read ur other ff beautifully dead!! but i am surely reading this one!! if i am free for some time from my studies!!

no matter this was beautifully written!!

btw did their brother actually enter in the serial??

thanks for the pm though!

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

hey kiara! its intriguing...do update soon...

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story but i really love the old story
thanks for the pm

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Hey Kiara,it is really gr8 dat u hav decided 2 rewrite this ff as in d earlier one Abhay marrying Panchi 2 cover her sins n betraying Piya,this track made me almost cry!
Plz end it in a good note this time.

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

nice update and very interesting

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