Beautifully Dead FF Abhiya/Jisha/Maaneet/Chandeena

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

PROLOGUE

What does it feel like when your life is snatched away from you?

When your life crumples right in front of your eyes?

When you watch the person you love the most and value more than your life marry the person who was once your sister ?

What does it feel like when the people you care the most betray you.?

Here I stand all alone wondering about the choices i made in life as I stand here focussed on my decision to die . Everyone says cowards commit suicide but I say that its just something you feel to do when everything and everyone has crossed the limits of tolerance.

"Where are you Jeh?" I whispered

''Where are you? " I screamed,shouting out to those trees that surrounded me,for a fraction of a second allowing myself to thing that this time he would be here too-to save me but then when reality dawned I broke down.

Cried for the family I never had,for the love I lost,for the sister who betrayed me and then for myself who till now lived in an illusion and finally for all those "Trust Me's" that didn't last!

Mending a broken heart is a terrible and difficult job.

No! You don't need spanners and all other things.

All you need is a fixed heart.

What if both the heart were broken?

Can they heal each other?

She's broken - He's the tool.

She's lost - He's the clue.

She's clueless - He's her guide.

She's locked -He's her key.

Too lost in their pasts and having no hope for the future they meet in the most unusual circumstances.

She's the damsel in distress.

And he's her immortal stuck in his vessel.

Will they give each other and love a chance after all the "Trust Me's" that Didn't last.

INDEX

Prologue dedicated to all the readers' of this FF

Sealing it all, My downfall! dedicated trishnawaliya

Sneek Peek to Chapter 2: Broken hearted Girl

OK,

I will be focussing on three couples here.

Abhay-Piya *

Maan-Geet *

Jeh-Misha

*As per the original FF.

I will be introducing the concept of "mates" for Jeh-Misha. Yeah the mating mates. Anyone who wants to know more on the concept can PM me or comment below.

Maan-Geet will be having a Love-Hate relationship .

While Abhay and Piya on whome this FF mainly focusses on will ... well wait and watch.

Readers of Beautifully Dead (Oh! I love them so dearly (: Sacchi) will actually know that it had 13 chapters of drama or was it 15?

This one will only have 3 chapters of drama max. Alternate POV and proper format.

There will be no time leap. Reason: Mentioned below.

I'm sorry ofr not replying to comment's 'cause well I don't really have the time but trust me, they really do make my day!

PM's will be sent only on weekends. PLEASE LIKE THIS POST FOR PM'S!

Sorry i sound like a strict school teacher here (:

P.S. Abhiya,Maaneet and Chandeena (if included) ARE NOT VAMPIRES.THEY ARE IMMORTALS! WIll explain as the story is updated.

P.S Yeah I'm dedicating chapters to readers so ... be EXTRA NICE lol!

Edited by tiger_lily - 12 years ago

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 1 : dedicated trishnawaliya to for being such a great supporter and commenting on every update on every FF I ever posted. Your comments really made my day though I didnot reply to all of them *blush*!

SEALING IT ALL, MY DOWNFALL

"Jeh Khurana,Do you take this woman Misha Dobriyal to be your lawfully wedded wife?"

The question echoed as the anxious audience waited for the groom to respond. He looked at the guests present there and then he looked at me, into my eyes and said

" I do "

Two simple words that brought tears into my eyes,tears that threatened to flow.

Two words that had pierced like daggers into my heart.

The words that had hurt me more then anything else in the world and yet again reminded me that I was betrayed by the man I loved the most.

Jeh moved forward and kissed the woman upfront of me. The woman who was my own sister correction my half sister, a fact that I was reminded often. I looked over and noticed the smirk that crept up my parents' face and the awe's that escaped from the guests. Yet I stood there frozen as I grasped to the fact that the guy I loved the most had ditched me for my sister.

It felt like the world had frozen and I was stuck there in the moment that ruined it all.

I could feel my heart shatter into a million pieces.

I had watched.

Watched as my sister stole my love away from me.

Watched as Jeh ignored me.

Watched as he grew away from me.

Watched as Misha announced her engagement to Jeh and said that she wanted to get married fast as she could not risk breaking her engagement yet again.

I just stood there and had watched my parents get overjoyed hearing the news and had tried accepting the facts not have the heart to break my sister's engagement for my benefit or go and confront Jeh.

I just accepted the decision thrown,watched my sister go to la-la land and finally return to Planet Earth. I had watched as my sisters face lit up and as she finally got over the death of her ex-fiance Shaurya, who died in a car crash two weeks ago.

The marriage date approached soon later and everyone was busy,soon came the parties,shopping trips and all those pre-wedding ceremonies. I heard all those pesky filthy mouths gossip about Misha and about Jeh, but then I cared a damn.

I had considered Misha as a traitor.

Misha was my sister but now she was a traitor. A god damn traitor!

Misha knew how much I loved Jeh, but no she had to steal my love.

in a way I supported those people, felt their gossip was close to the truth- very close but there was something else that had made my heart clench, something more deeper, the feeling that made her feel betrayed.

Whether I could bear it or not that was not a question but an unsaid command echoing through the air screaming

"You have to keep a wretched smile plastered on your face. No matter how much it hurts .No matter how much it hurts.no matter how you feel. You have to be happy. At least pretend to be."

I could not sleep the previous night.

The knowledge that Jeh was going to marry someone else was killing me, especially when that someone was my sister,the one whom I had loved the most.

Each minute was like a spear piercing my heart. I cried myself to sleep that night just like the other nights,but that night was different knowing that after this night thinking about Hugh will not be good, I vowed that I would not back stab her sister. I was not like her.

I knew how to sacrifice not snatch

After all this was all I did all my life.

I sacrificed.

Sacrificed my dad, my home, my parents love.

Everything and cherry on the top my own brother treated me like trash.

Reminding me of who I was.

Doubting my character.

Blaming me for the mistake I never did.

My parents did.

At least Misha and Panchi accepted me as their sibling but Kunal he always treated me as an outsider, the other woman's daughter and not his own sister or even step-sister.

Kunal made it clear on the first day he met me that he would never accept me as his sister and I guess that stuck.

I had no idea how long I stood there lost in my own thoughts and staring at the glowing faces of the newlyweds until I felt someone nudge

" Piya! We don't have all the time in the world so move woman!" said a voice. A voice that I recognised as my elder sister Panchi's - My best friend's

Panchi Dobriyal is my elder sister. The girl who I started off hating but ended up being best friends with. She had accepted me the minute she knew I was her sibling. She was the one who stood up for me when our brother Kunal badmouthed me.

She was there for me when Jeh,who had promised to be by my side forever ditched me for my other sister. She wanted me to be strong, to fight my own battles and wait for no knight in shining armour to come and save me. The very one thing I couldn't do.

"Moving Panch" I whispered soft enough for my sister to hear.

With a smile plastered to my face I walked forward sparing a glace at the happy couple and then at him,not giving them a clue about the next step I was going to take that would alter their lives forever.

HEY,

Well... Yeah, I'm rewriting BEAUTIFULLY DEAD!

Editing was not gonna help so why not rewrite it.
YES, There are changes.
We get Abhay as the savior NOT Jeh.
And Misha and Jeh as a couple 'cause we get another love story unlike Abhay and Panchi which had no scope. Yeah, we get a half werewolf/Vamp/Human Kid (I love that breed .. Erm Hybrid type) kid too.

Abhay and Piya won't be vampires here.
Abhay will switch places with Jeh in the Khurana Clan if you get what I mean.
Haseena and Chand might be Jeh's parents ...
Ah! Anyone interested?

Edited by tiger_lily - 12 years ago

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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

I am interested dear plsss cont soon
and dont frgt to pm me
gn tc ks hsd

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

hey this is amazing...plz pm me too...

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Why u no pm me? *crying*
anyway I like this version better :D so will you go with this one? Yeah? Please please update soon...Misha and Jeh are anyday better than Panchi Abhay. :D

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

plz dont make abhay warewolf... dont like dogs and wolfs...

and ya plz chandeena must be abhays parents... plz plz...

hey one ques y u are not making pia vampire... u knw dis one is also gud but wat if u go wid old track just interchange d role of characters...

dat hybrid part is gud yaar...

by d way ball in ur court so ur decision...

Edited by trishnawaliya - 12 years ago

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dreamyjennice

@dreamyjennice

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

Tigress...I luv abhiya too much and yeah I too love ideas of hybrid kids...really wished if that happened in pkyek...but koi nai...tu hi bana de aisi story...me up for this...and plz pm me sweety...