WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE~~MANVEER SS~Prt24 newpg 78 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Hey this Update was really awesome...The jungle part was so sweet and cute..I really loved it..Thanks for the PM dear..Update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Amazing work MAHI. Loved Uday beating Akash... And, of course...the Manveer scenes. BASICALLY...I loved the whole thing! Thanx 4 making the story move so fast. Thanx 4 the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
gr8 dear was waiting for this😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
thank u guyz for such lovely cumments...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE

PART 5: MANVEER:::::::: <3 :::::::

Its morning'.

Anya gets up yawning and rubbing her eyes'.

She blushes remembering last nights dream'

(uv kissing her) which wasn't a dream but reality'

She turns around and sees uv sleeping'.

She remembers last night'and is sad as well as happy'

She thinks'

" kitni galat thi main tumhare bare mein Uday'.sote huye bade hi cute lagte ho'"

Her eyes move down and she realizes that he hadn't wore his shirt'. She was just awestruck by the shape of his body'.

" haye kitna hot hai'.. OOO teri pagal anya ye kya soch rahi hai'."

She touches his cheeks'. Her touch wakes him up'.

Both in eyecontact'

Then she realizes he had fever'

She understood he had removed his shirt and kept it on her just to keep her warm'

She gets angry at the thought that he had fever due to her'

Anya: pagal gadhe kahike'jab bhagvan akal baat raha tha tab tum kaha the??

Uday confused: kya??

Anya: kya matlab kya'kya jaroorat thi apni t-shirt nikal ke mere upar dalne ki'thand lag gayi na tumhe'

She touches his neck and forehead'

Anya: haye rabba dekho to kitna bukhar hai'

She gets up'uday is just staring at her with a huge smile plastered on his face'. He also gets up'.

Anya very angry: ab kya muhrat chahiye tumhe?? Ye lo t-shirt pehenlo..hum abhi yaha se nikal rahe hai isse pehle ki tumhari tabyat aur bigad jaye'aur ye kya smile chipka rakhi hai'

She is about to continue her blabbering when Uday interrupts'.

Uday smiling: bas karo'ye kya nonstop bag bag ki express train laga rakhi hai??boli hi jaa rahi ho'train mein peda hui thi kya jiska koi station hi nahi ata???

Anya: mein kahi bhi peda hui hogi'pehle to hume waha jana hai jaha tum peda hue the ise pehle ki tumhari tabyat aur bighad jaye..han nahi toh'

At this both start laughing like mad'.

Uday wears his t-shirt'

They somehow find their way back to the road and then go to college'.

Uday removes his car and asks anya to come with her'

They go to his mansion'.

The gates open'

Anya was amazed to see the house'.

It was a million times big than hers'.

They both entered the house and saw niks aarman unnati vijay jagat'

All sitting tensed'

They all see uday and anya..

All start questioning them that where were they what happened etc etc'.

Uday at last irritated': are yar bas karo tum log'hume andar to ane do'

Anya chuckles at his side'..

They come inside uday drinks water and tells evry1 what had happened'.

Remembering all that moments anya again becomes sad and sits silent'

Aarman angry: is akash ki to mein'

Unnati also angry goes and sits near Uday:is akash ke par katne padenge dada bahot ud raha hai aj kal'

Vijay: haye finally humari najuk billi ne apna jangli sherni wala rup dharan karliya'I tell u'.

Unnati gives him a death stare'

All start laughing but anya remains silent'

Uday notices this and also becomes sad'

Unnati touches Uday's shoulder and realizes that he had fever'.

Unnati: oh god dada aap ko to fever hai'.

Uday: han choti but I'm f9 dnt worry'.

Unnati: aap dono jaiye aur fresh ho jaiye'dada hum apke dawaiya bhijwate hai and ya anya apko ek dress bhi'.

Both nod and leave'.

Uday shows anya a room besides his and tells to her to freshen up'.

Both silent the whole way.. he knew his little angelic princess was upset and hurt as well'.

After sometime'

Anya comes out of the bathroom'

And finds a beautiful anarkali on her bed'she loved it'

She wore it and looked very pretty'

It looked somewhat like..

http://www.google.co.in/imgres?q=designer+anarkali+churidar&start=118&hl=en&sa=X&biw=1280&bih=654&tbm=isch&tbnid=4XHU3n0DMX940M:&imgrefurl=http://www.cbazaar.com/readymade-salwars/wedding-salwars/designer-net-long-anarkali-churidar-set-p-slmcm6191.html&docid=aa6N3Px7r4W2jM&imgurl=http://www.cbazaar.com/images/prd_img_b/Designer-Net-Long-Anarkali-Churidar-Set-SLMCM6191-b.jpg&w=400&h=600&ei=-J4mULjOFI3IrQfx4IHIDw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=986&vpy=94&dur=697&hovh=275&hovw=183&tx=105&ty=161&sig=102507261379899072447&page=5&tbnh=154&tbnw=102&ndsp=33&ved=1t:429,r:65,s:118,i:221

Anya comes out of the room' unnati sees her and her smile widens'

Unnati: wah yar kya lag rahi ho anya'. Kahi humare dada tumhe ese dekhke faint na ho jaye'.

Anya smiles lightly: ye Uday ki dawaiya hai?? Mein dedu use??

Anya takes the pills and knocks the door'.

Uday was standing in front of mirror with his black trousers'no shirt'

He thinks it must be unnati so tells to come in'

But as soon as anya comes'both shocked'.

He turns to look at her while she turns back facing her back to him'obviously blushing who wouldn't?

Uday quickly grabs his shirt from the bed and wears it'.

Uday smiling: piche ghum sakti ho'

Anya turns back': wo mein tumhare dawaiya leke ayi thi'

Uday was lost in staring at her'.

She looked so beautiful'.he thought'

Anya felt his eyes continuously gazing her'..

Blood boils under her skin'then she shoves away her newly rised emotions'

Anya: halkat vede ab mujhe hi dekhta rahega ya dawaiya bhi lega??

Uday laughs: ye har baar tum humare liye galiyo wale phrases kaha se lati ho??

Anya: tum bas unhe sunane ka kaam karo unnki history se tumhara koi matlab nahi'

Uday laughs' anya irritate hoke use bed pe letati hai'anya hands him the medicine'

Uday: hum thik hai anya hume inki jaroorat nahi hai'.

Anya: mein tumhe puch nahi rahi rahi hu'mein tumhe bata rahi hu ki ye dawaiya kha lo'

Uday: aur tum humhe batane wali hoti kon ho??

Anya's happy face suddenly turns sad'.

Uday notices that and cursed himself for saying that'anya keeps the pills in his hands and starts moving from there silently'

Uday holds her hand: agar koi nahi ho to ban jao na'

He says in a soft voice'

Anya: kya matlab??

Uday: humse dosti karogi??

Anya does drama of thinking over it..: han but sirf ek shart pe'

Uday: kesi shart??

Anya:mein tumhe Uday bulaungi tumhara original naam bahot bada hai'and boring bhi'udayveer huh'

Uday: ok agar tumne ek shart rakhi hai to humari bhi ek shart hai'.

Anya's brows lift..: kesi???

Uday: hum tumhe anya nahi princess bulaenge thike??

Anya: princess ye kesa naam hai??

Uday: hai ek naam tumhe pata chal jaega'.

Anya: ok done so aaj se hum frnzz right???

Uday smiles and nods'..

~mahi~

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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
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Awesome update Mahi.👏 👏 👏 It was supercool yaar.😉
Morning scene was so sweet n cute.☺️Anya thoughts It was her dream but she didn't know UV kissed her in reality.😆
So UV knew that Anya is actually Princess Manyata.😛
I really liked Anya's dialogues.😉 n spcially this one,"Hum kahin bhi paida huye ho lekin abhi humein wahaan jana hai jahaan tum paida huye the."😆
Both reached into Jaigarh Mansion.😊
All buddies were worried for both of them.😊 n I liked UV's room scene when Anya came inside UV's room without knocking t the door.😳 Loved UV-Anya Convo.❤️
Anya's dress was also beautiful.😊
Great job.👍🏼
Thanks for the beautiful update n PM.😊
Do update soon.😊
🤗 🤗 🤗

Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

very sweet update Mahi...Too nice!

I have an answer to this:
Anya: pagal gadhe kahike'jab bhagvan akal baat raha tha tab tum kaha the??
Uday was already waiting in the line where God was distributing looks😉😆
Almost forgot...BEAUTIFUL OUTFIT!!!
...you have good taste👍🏼.
Continue soon.
Thanx 4 the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Edited my comment on Page-8.😊
Thank you.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
very nice update so finally manveer r frnds now...update soon n thnks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
wowww,yaar,itss soo lovelly updatee!!!!!!! anya taking care of udayy,dats soo sweet!!!!!! and dta trainwala part was too good!!!!!! uday ka wo dialog"agar nehi ho to ban jayona" oh my godd,dat wass soo rmnticc!!!!!!!!! cntinuee soon!!!!!!!!!!!

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