WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE~~MANVEER SS~Prt24 newpg 78 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
amazing update
thanks for the pm :)
do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Super update Mahi👍🏼

Agar kuch nahi toh ban jao...awesome😉 they both are getting along very well😉 but abhi to dhamaka hona hai😆

update soon and thanx foe the pm dear🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

i luv luv luv luv ur ff! its rocking and how swwet!

awww...😳

uday is so awesome i luvd these lines:

(personal thought____THIS WAS LOVE..IN WHICH THE PERSON WAS READY TO TORTURE HIMSELF FOR TAKING CARE OF HIS SOULMATE'..)

they really are made for each other...

plzzz make the updates longer n longer n longer

and continue sooonnn and do pm me plzzz

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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Ausum loved it update it n pm me plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE

PART 6: MANVEER:::::::: <3 :::::::

Anya Uday ko bed pe leta deti hai'

uske upar blanket dalti hai...

she bends down near uday's face'

anya: khabardar agar bed se uthe to'

Uday(flirting): nahi uthenge agar tum hamare sath yahi rahogi to'.

Anya: par uday mujhe ghar jana hoga'mom dad pareshan ho gaye honge'

Uday(smirks): princess unnati ne already tumhare ghar phone kardiya'so tum yahi rahogi'.

Anya shocked: kya par kese tumne pucha kyun nahi'

She angrily moves her face away from Uday '.

Tabhi uske neck mein pain hota hai'.

Uday remembers the nail marks on anya's neck'

Anya: ouch..

But she ignores the pain and goes near dressing table to keep uday's medicine there'and sees uday through the mirror'smiles and then lost in her own thoughts'..

Uski nazar waha rakhe uday aur manyata ke engagement pic par jati hai'

She is standing there looking at the pic frowning at each of her thought'

She was so busy wid her thoughts that she doesn't even notice uday coming and standing back of her'

Uday uske neck ko cover karne wale balon ko dhirese hatata hai'

She feels her hair move and looks at the mirror and sees Uday standing behind her'

Anya: ud..uday ye tu..tum'kya..

Her voice was stuck in her throat'.

She wasn't able to speak'.

He touches her bare back'

His mere touch sends shivers throughout her body'.

Uday lightly touches her wounds..

It pained her but the warmth of his hands had vanished off all her pain'.

He slowly applied ointment on her wounds'

Anya closed her eyes'

Uday then turns her back'caresses her cheek..

Anya opens her eyes and directly looks in his deep brown coloured eyes'

Both in deep eye contact'.

Uday bends towards her'

Both of them's heartbeats rising both didn't know what was happening'

He moves more closer'and lightly places his lips on her cheek'

Blood boils under her cheeks'

Butterflies flying in both of their stomach'

A thought struck Uday at the moment he had kissed so many girls before but this was special very very special effect she was having on him'.

He then moves towards her ears'

His lips touching her ears'

Uday whispers: princess tum thik to ho???

Anya nods'

Then he moves a little back near her lips'

Moves his fingers on her lips'

Uday: princess plz kabhi hume chod ke mat jana plz'.

Anya nods'gathers her voice to speak'

Anya: kab..kabhi nahi Uday'

He leans more down'

She was able to feel his warm breath on her face'.

His lips almost touching hers'.

And they were about to kiss when there's a knock on the door'

Anya and Uday realize what they were doing..

Anya gave a sigh of relief although she wanted that kiss but she knew it was wrong'

She realized that Uday sort of had a disappointed look on his face'.

She felt a bit happy that Uday too wanted that kiss to happen'.unnati comes in'

Unnati: dada hum apko batane aye the ki dad wapas aa rahe hai'

Unnati sees him and smiles'.he was lost staring at anya'.

Unnati goes and shakes him'

Unati: dada dada aap thik to hai??

Uday is snapped out of his thoughts and looks at unnati'

Uday:han'choti tum kab ayi'.??

Unnati: ah I don't believe this' dada hum tab aye jab aap anya ko stare karne mein busy the'.

Anya and uday smile and blush a bit..this was noticed by unnati'.she keeps her hand on his forehead'

Unnati: dada kahi apka bukhar sir mein to nahi chala gaya'I mean look at you you are blushing'..

Uday: esi koi baat nahi hai choti'unnati giggles'. Wese tum yaha??

Unnati: han who hum batane aye the ki dad wapas aa rahe hai'wese hum chalte hai'.

Uday turns back with an apologetic look on hi face'

Anya notices that'.

She had that urge to kiss him but shoves that thought away'..

Before leaving she quickly kisses on his cheek '

Anya whispers: you are a true friend'.thank you uday for everything'.

She runs out of his room quickly'leaving Uday in shock'

He touches his cheeks and blushes'

Uday in mind: wah kya baat hai'akhir yuvraj udayveer singh ke princess ne tumhe blush karwa hi diya'..kis duniya se hai ye?? Kahi alien to nahi hai??? Uday tubhi ye kya soch raha hai bache jaise'alien kese ho sakti hai??pagal..to kyun ye tumpar itna effect kar rahi hai..???

Here Uday's heart and brain were fighting same was with anya'.

Anya was in her room blushing and thinking'

Anya: ye kya ho raha hai mujhe??? Kyun uday ka mujhpar itna effect ho raha hai who bhi bas so sin mein'.kahi mujhe tumse pyaar to nahi'anya shut up ye tu kya soch rahi hai'who ek yuvraj hai'toh who kese kisi commoner se pyar kar sakta hai use ek yuvrani se hi shadi karni hogi'

She saddens at the thought'.

Just there's a knock at her room door'

She says the person to come in'

Its unnati'.

Unnati: hi anya tum thik to ho na??

Anya: han yar unnati mein thik hu'andar aa na'

They both go and sit on her bed..unnati is lost in her own thoughts'.

Anya: kya baat hai unnati??

Unnati serious: pata hai anya jab manyata dada ko chod ke chali gayi tabse dada pathar dil insane ban gaye'.unhone to jese apne dil ke charon taraf diwar khadi kar di thi'

Anya confused: kya baat hai unnati??

Unnati: I know mujhe tumhe ye sab nahi batana chahiye but pata hai aaj dada ne najane kitne salon bad dil khol ke smile kiya'aur blush mein toh abhi wahi par atki hu'.plz anya dada se tumbhi dur mat jana plz'.

Anya is shocked uday said the same to her to never leave her alone'.

She smiles and nods'.

Unnati: are ye hum bhi na kya lekar beith gaye'hum to tumhe lunch ke liye bulane aye the chale??

They go on dinning table'.

All are already there'.

Vijay uday arman niks'..

Anya sits in front of uday avoiding eyecontact'.

Unnati and vijay notices that'.

Vijay: kya baat hai bandariya uday se ache kyun chra rahi hai??

Every1 laugh'uday and anya glare at him..food is served every1 is eating suddenly unnati eyes go on uday and she nearly gasps'.

Unnati: dada ye kya kese?? Aaj ghar mein aap ki koi fan bhi nahi ayi thi'

Uday:kya baat hai choti??

Unnati: ye gallon pein'

Uday: hamare gallon pe kya??

Every1 looks and are shocked especially anya'.

Uday:kya hai??

Every1 say together ven anya: lipstick mark'

Uday shocked : kya??

Vijay: na koi mehman aya nahumne kuch kiya to phir uday ke gallon pe kis bala ne kiss kia???

All giggle as if they knew who it was'.

All look at anya'

Anya is still shocked'.

~mahi~

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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
WOW LOVED THE WHOLE UPDATE PLZ CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Nice update dear i loved how everyone teased uday on the lipstick mark on his face 😉 update soon thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Mahi dear ye toh mene 15 parts padhe hai...tum 48 humesa mujhe iss ki link bhejti ho...par baby cupid kab update karogi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
👏 Nice update , loved it
Pls continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Very nice update dear. I missed all of them so much. I loved the part when everyone was teasing uday. Update soon and thanks for the pm.

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