TERE ISHQ NACHAYA!! *totally updated*

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

so here I come with my OS... specially for my pyaari 5 cuties...
LAILA!!!
SWEETU!!
KIDDO!!
MISS PERFECT!!!
SHRAVS!!!

ps: i know tum sab abhi res nahi karsakte on a line...coz i learnt ki log res karne mei tez hai... including me...so i resed for u ppl i want ur cmnts and i will paste it...coz i want ur comments on first page for this...this story is really close coz ...hmm

guys mujhe dhaantna mat but i wanna dedicate this to these 5...they have become so lose to my heart ki kya bolun???
for u my cutie pies!!!!!!!

so here goes

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"kk guys ab next mai bulana chahungi ...kria ghai on the stage plzz ... "she said and left...

all the 11 heads shot up... ( louisans completed their studies 3 yrs back they lead a dance insti and do their side own bussiness as rey helps his father same with swayam ... sam ,shar and rinni owns a fashion insti and amar a big restaurant..bharat a car centre... nil and vicky animated short movies.. (funny) etc etc,... swaron are engaged...on their marriage rey and taani are gonna be engaged... ri8 now taani is out in bus to gather something she forgot)

the lights went dim...(imagine same dress of footloose eliminations...red and black...she was in same attire *first wala in lehanga* but with ghunghroo and free hair ...bangles ...no red cloth on hands...totally indian style...)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=01qQ039BLkA[/YOUTUBE]

all were shocked to see her...she had glown more thin...but her muscles were perfect...her face had lost glow but she WAS healthy...she stood one leg with eyes closed and her hands folded.. (namaste style)

as the music started all lights went dim...a spot light on her... *just like in video* and same prop at the back...

TERE ISHQ NACHAYA

she moved her hands slightly and took a pose...

TERE ISHQ NACHAYA
next pose

TERE ISHQ NACHAYA
took two turns...
KAR KE THAIYA VE THAIYA
she lifted her leg from and bet her right hand and fell on knees

JALDI AAJA VE TABIBA
forwarded her hand calling someone...

ps: eyes closed

JALDI AAJA VE TABIBA
she walked front slowly on her knees..
JALDI AAJA VE TABIBA
she kept her ri8 hand back and slowly got up...
NAHI TE MAIN MR GYIAAN..
turned her back towards audience and did a back bend...

TERE ISHQ NACHAYA
TERE ISHQ NACHAYA
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she just samng with pain on her face and angry on herself...

KAR KE THAIYA VE THAIYA

as the music started she shot her left leg up...(at 4:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dpcfetVt32Y[/YOUTUBE]

ISS ISHQ KI BAGIYA, ME MAYURA GAYE

she flipped back and ended in a split...and shake her hands as morni... and opened her eyes... and looked front... (that means not at audience...her side was facing them...
MAINE KABA-TE-KIBLA mere YAAR ME PAAYE
she folded her ri8 leg ended up pulling her knees close on her left and got up slowly

MUJHE KAR KE JO GHAYAL
she turned once and banged her hands ..her bangles broke
took a turn and fell down...and sang looking up
MUD KE KHABR NA LAIYA..
she stood up wrapping her hands around her..
she danced like mad on the pieces of bangles hurting herself ...

but a constant smile played on her lips...she did khatak as fast as she cud...

at thayya thayya music she just stood in different postures...

ISS ISHQ DAGAR SE, MUJHE MOD NA MAYE
LAHOO JATE BEDE, KAUN MOD KE LAYE

she looked front and ran somewat front...tears filled her eyes..rey was happy atleast she noticed him...

she went back and danced lyk nobody is watching
MERI AAKAL JO BHULLI
SANG MAALAAHON KE GYIAAN..

BULLESHAH CHAL CHALIYE INAYAT DE BOOHE
JISNE PEHNAYE HAME
SAWE TE SOOHE
MAINE MAARI JO ADDI MIL GAYE PEEYA O DHAIYA

she went on the prop and did some breath taking moves came down and did some bharatnatyam steps

TERE ISHQ NE DERA MERE ANDAhR KEETA
BHAR ZEHAR PYALA,MAIN AAP HI PEETA

she stood as if catching a bowl in right and her left hand holding her left foot which she bent back...*bharatnatyam mei aisa jyaada hota hai...*

all were moved by her performance...she took sharp quick turns...

*sorry kaan pakad ke ...i couldnt explain moves as i imagined...sorry*

and the lights went dim...all were shocked*11 members*

there is a huge applause in the hall...

it was first tym in india they are selecting 3 from a place and this is finals and louians ki insti ki students were selected so they came... kria cme to give the last special performance as the one who conducts this fest is a grt fn of her dance...

as soon as the light glowed two girls clinged on kria and hugged her lyk no tommorrow...

the gang wondered who they are...all are waiting her to see them...kitna bhi gussa ho...they shared their most precious tym with her...

she was awarded a NATRAJ!!

for her dance..she took it and was looking ahead and smiling wide
all were confused at whom she is looking coz her eyes were fixed at the same direction...

they follow the direction and found a handsome man *the conductor of this show* folding his hands leaning on the door and smiling wide at her...

after some tym the two girls literally pulled her away...

as it was called the end lousians followed her backstage atleast in a hope of talking to her...but as they went near they heard some one shout.

"payal!!!!!!!! kaha reh gayi yeh ladki paani lene gayi hai ya dharti se nikal ke purify kar rahi hai..."she shouted...

they looked in kria was sitting on a bench and she was bandaging her leg which was literally bleeding now..all felt bad... rey's heart pained... tears formed in swayam s eyes...

"arey aarahi hogi baba..."kria said with a slight laugh...

"tu chup hi reh...tumne hi bigaada use..."the girl scolded..

"arey bachi hai chodo na krati..."kria said...

"bees ki ladki ko koyi bachi nahi bolta kria ..."she was serious...

"arey tum gussa kyun ho rahi ho???"kria asked irritated of the shoutings...

*phew* sisters always loose their patience quickly while talking to each other...

"tu chup hi reh..kya zaroorat thi wahan naachne ki ...agar chudi gir gayi toh itni badi stage hai doosri side nahi jaa sakti???"krati scolded...

*should say huh...krati is print of smriti*

"arey tumhare gussa ka yeh reason hai...solly baba. wo mujhe pata nahi chala..."kria said with smile...

but something was different...the gang did notice something wrong in kria's behaviours but nothing clicked them...

"tujhe kuch pata nahi chalta...dekho khoon nikal raha hai... badi aayi meera ban ne wai"she slightly choked...

*damn ab ro rahi hai* kria thought...

"arey sorry na ab ro mat..."she said and moved her hand...

"waha nahi yaha..."krati took her hand and kept on her face..

rey left the door which he was clinging on to ...swayam swayed back catching sharon's hand... all were shocked to core...

now they got...she was just staring at one direction...she is *sigh* blind

kria touched her whole face ended near her eyes and wiped the lone tear which started its way out...

"bas kria aur nahi...plzz"krati pleaded...

"krati please... mujhe dance karna hai..u know ri8 ... dance karne se..."kria was cut...

"whatever kria u will not dance kk??"she siad rudely...

"meri dance karne se sabko itni kyun problem hoti hai pehle maa ab tu"kria shouted in anger...

"i dnt abt mumma...par tu nahi karegi...samjhi??"krati too shouted back...

kria: tumhari problem kya hai haa????

"mai apni behan ko aise nahi dekh sakti...wahh kya baat hai...ye yaha meera bhai banke unkeliye naachegi aur maharaj waha ache see tumhe hate kar rahe honge aur ache se apni life mei move on karchuka hoga... bas kria i dnt want this crap anymore..."she shouted...she was damn pissed with this

"krati plzz... mai chahti thi ki rey mujhe bhool ke aage bade aur agar wo move on kar chuke hai toh i will be really happy... par unki baare mei aisi baat mat kar"kria said in concern for her sis and angry for talking sarcastically abt rey...

*bhool ke aage bade???"rey said to himself when swayam looked at him knowing what he is going through now...

"tumse mai baat nahi kar sakti...yeh payal kaha mar gayi???"krati scowled annoyed to core with kria...

kria sighed...she had to change the topic...

"next ab hai..kaha hai ??? hum ghar kab jaa rahe hai...mujhe next keliye practise karna hai...

this krati more angry...

"u know what kria...i ...i hate ur this character lyk hell...i hate u dammit...wo waha ache se jee raha hoga aur ye yaha uskeliye naachti rahegi uski khayalon mei... ..kabhi kabhi lagta hai tera ghala khot ke maar dun"a super fuming krati barked...

the gang rewined her dance...yes it was for HIM...for REY...she danced in his trance...total trance lyk ppl will dance for god...rey gulped hard looked at her helpless as tears flowed down continuously

"toh dekh kyun rahi hai... saamne hi hongi na ab maar dalo"she barked back..

*cant she understand she can live in his world totally while dancing..nothing ...just REY...huh...*

"huh???// tumse baat karna meri galti hai..mai jaa rahi hun...kabhi tera shakal mat dikhana mujhe...i hate u ria ghai...to my death... "she shouted...

she rushed out bang opened the door... *second door of the room...*

kria heard footsteps getiing away and stop...a smile started spreading on her lips...

krati stopped at the door she was hell angry on kria now...but she spoke calmly...

"mai payal ko dhoondh ke paani leke aati hun ayahi baiti raho.."she said...

kria chuckled and said kk..

"hasne ki koi baat nahi"she shouted again and stormed out banging the door...kria closed her ears...

"arey dheere ...aankh gayi hai ab kaan bhi kya???"she shouted chukling

"shut up moron..."she heard the voice as it almost died at the end...

"paagal"she said giggling anf shaking her head...she stood up and walked touching the table to its end and took three steps from there and took right and took 5 steps...and lifted her hands to feel the wall...when she found it she slowly bent down touching the wall and sensed a big iron box she slowly traced to her left and found the NATARAJ...she took it ...caressed it and sensed everybit of it...she felt a strange feeling...

ONLY A DANCER CAN FEEL WHAT THAT PIECE OF CRAVED ART.. MEANS TO THEM...

a tear rolled down as a wide smile spread on her face.she opened the box which contains her awards and she thus placed this carefully in it...and closed back the box and locked it ...she sat to the wall and hugged her knees close...this was routine for her.first dance lost in him and then cry thinking and missing him...

as she cried hard rey looked down totally helpless and not able to see her cry...soon kria heard the foot steps and wiped her tears and sat normal...

"hoagaya naatak??? ro rahi thi hume pata hai ab ye paani pee "krati again barked and literally dragged kria's hand and slammed the bottled on her hand...

"sorry krati...but i cant stop dancing...bas wahi ek hai jo mujhe..

sabse jyaada khushi deti hai "krati ended her line irritated but pain is clear...she cant see her sis ...lyk this...

they were twins... almost looked the same... (consider neeti mohan)...coz of fights .smriti and sandeep divorced and took a child each...he married another girl and payal was their daughter 6 yrs small tham krati and kriya... (u can imagine mukti mohan)

but sandeep died coz of some problem...later when kria returned dehradun one fine day the two ladies smriti and preeti accidentally met each other...settled everything and lived together...and on one of their trip they met with accident .the girls lost their both mom's who loved the three equally and kriya lost her eyes ...

krati hugged kria and payal joined too...she is too cute and bubly and totally childish...

"*ahem *ahem* someone cleared their throat...

a handsome man...the same on at the door entered...kria smiled...lousians glared at himhe came in flirted with kria...

"haha oye fattu ...paagal ho kya???koi ladki ko pata ne keliye usse flirt karta hai aur tu mujhse flirt kar raha hai...??"kria laughed hard...

payal too laughed ... ajay looked down embrassed when krati blushed and bet kria silently...

"mai box car mei rakhta hun.."ajay spoke to get out from there fast ..coz he is hell embrased..he took the box and went out...

kria stood up and the three walked out...but as soon as stepping out kria stopped and asked

"krati koi hai kya yaha aas paas???"she asked...krati looked around but none ...

"nahi hai chale???"krati said...

"kyun ajay se milne keliye wait nahi ho raha??? "kria teased and payal and kria tickled her and they walked away laughing when the gang came out...all were looking at her when rey fell on his knees ...but no tears ...his eyes just glued to her...swayam too looked at her helpless when rest cried hard but silently...

taani was in hurry and she dashed with kria...

"oye dekhke nahi chal sakti??"krati shouted as payal caught kria tight by shoulders wh was abt to fall...

lousians looked up and were worried for kria...

"im sorry wo jaldi mei"taani said..

"kya jaldi mei??/"krati was cut...

"krati please/...aap jayiye ..koi baat nahi aapki koi galti nahi..."kria smiled as she held kratis hand to stop her...krati turned angrily and walked away shouting at payal...

"iss gadhi ko leke aa car ke paas"

payal and kria giggled and followed her out...

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Edited by deetha - 13 years ago

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

all looked at rey when she finally vanished ...

he was lifeless...he got up and walked out hands in his pockets and walked out...taani called him thrice but no response...

the two days they spent there was hell to them...he used to spend all the tym just by sitting near the window resting his palms on tha table and looking out ...

a month passed ...rey used to be by himself...they dnt remember when rey spoke to them after that day...finally swaron marriage was near...that means rey and taani's engagement...swayam so wanna stop that but he was not sure where kria is..will she come back...does rey want her back...and more over all its his sisters life...he should be careful...

finally swaron marriage completed ...that was the happiest day coz rey spoke somewhat and smiled heartily...

and he almost was himself with sharon...she got her bestie back..not totally but somewhere she has hope...sharey were chatting when rey was called upon the dias...he was confused...with his feelings...
SHARONS POV

finally i got my bestie back...par ab ye engagement...kya sach mei????

i saw him walking to the dias lifeless the same way he was for this whole month...only i knew how much he used to cry...they love each other toh alag rehna zaroori hai kya???

wo mere aur swayam ki jaise ek kyun nahi ho sakte??

hmm ...mai khush kyun nahi hun... meri bestie ki engagement hai...

hmm..i cant be...

i saw taani blush...somewhere it pained me ...i care for her too...

she was happy while sliding the ring into his hand...will rey put on the ring on her finger??? yup he took the ring and *sigh*

i looked away...i cant see this... but y??? i dnt know...

thats it...i dnt know i cant see this..im gng...

she left the place for an unknown reason she was crying and left the place ...

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birds chirped as sun rays entered the room...

he twitched his nose and closed his eyes to sleep...but wait...something...naah someone is also moving ...he opened his eyes...

aahhh!! who else ...his life...yup from the day they got married she never let him be sad...he looked at her carefully...and slowly traced her face with his lipsshe clutched his vest tight yeah...she got up he can say...finally he kissed her forehead and pulled back...

"goodmorning"it was so pleasant...

she smiled and slowly slid her hand up and sensed each and every part of his face...this was their routine..to sense each other's angelic face ...and she pulled him close and kissed his forehead...when she pulled back he pulled her close and kissed her softly for which she too responded equal softly...

after their morning "bed kiss"as he named it he got down and picked her up and took her to washroom...made her stand washed her face and gave her the brush...yeah she can do it...but he found peace in doing those small things/...he wanted to fall in love with her more and more that he cant even think abt another girl after that
he pulled her close and gave a sweet kiss on her cheek and handed her the towel and went out to change himself ...while he entered she was stnding there with tat towel around her...he walked to her scooped her in arms and let her in the big bath tub adjusting himself beside her...

yeah from two years he is pampering like a kid,.she moved close and rested her head on his chest...he took some lotion and applied to her hands...and his hands circled more tym on her cheeks...

afte appling that to her cheeks and hands he kissed her hair and got up and took a shower for himself and finally came out making her stand at place for her shower...

he came out took her dress and knocked the door...she voiced him to enter after draping herself in the bathrobe...he handed her the dress and went out...

she sighed... even after two years of their marriage they were just rey and kria ...not kriyaansh soulfully... may be she is not correct for him...she thought but whenever this thought passes her mind she remembers his words...

i u really feel u dnt deserve me then i will think that i dnt deserve this life...

it was on that night when rey's parents were in her house talking with krati asking for her hand for their son...kria said she is blind and she thinks she doesnt deserve rey...

she cant see but she can feel and sense how serious he was when he said that...

she put on her clothes and walked slowly to the door but the floor was too slippery... she was abt to fall she caught the clothes hanger

"rey!!!!!"she slightly screamed in fear and in next second the door opened...he was waaiting for her...he quickly held her..

"maine bola tha na...mujhe aawaaz dene keliye..."he was angry slightly...

she made a sorry face...he lifted her and took her out and finally after getting ready they led down stairs...

"ajay stop it... maine bola dining table ri8 now.."krati shouted...

"do min baba bas ye wala blog"ajay said trying to read that blog of newspaper fast before that rudrakali will jump on him...

"ajay!!!!"she shouted

"arey mai yahi hun"ajay literally threw the paper and ran to the table while kriyaansh giggled ...they reached the table when the whole gang wished them...

"good morning !!!!!"all said but as usual vicky and nil shouted banging the table...krati bet her head but couldnt stop herself from smiling...but wait,...teen bandar hai Gandhi ji ki...teesri kaha hai??

"payal??" krati called...

"haan aarahi hun..."she came with two plates in her hand..

"ye kya hai?? "nil asked..

"wow parathe..."vicky said and reached it when payal pulled back...

"partner 1 ye tumhare liye nahi hai...aaj di aur jiju ki anniversary kisine wish kiya?? ye unkeliye hai"payal said...

all bit their tongue... even kriyaansh ...even they forgot that...

"isiliye... single hi acha hai...sab yaad toh rehta hai..."payal said proudly...

all looked down but soon turned towards kriyaansh and shouted wishing them...

they blushed and thanked them...

"now kiss di jiju"payal said...

"what???"kriyaansh shouted...

"haan...ek mahine pehle maine yahi bola par tune meri suni??? ahi na now kiss her"swayam said..

how dare rey made him kiss sharon in front of everyone...

"arey aise kaise kiss karoon??"rey asked... kria was fidgetting with her dress tensed...

"kk kiss karo ya phir aaj poora di kria se door"someone said...

they turned around... there stood taani holding her hubby's arm...rajesh!!!!

"what???"rey said ...his mouth wide open..he cant even think abt that...

"haa taani is ri8.."all supported her...

"fine"rey said finally...

kria was totally shocked...all hooted when rey hesitantly took steps towards her...she started breathing hard...he cupped her face and and leaned in...she cant ...she pushed his hands and turned around to escape anywhere..but rey pulled her back making him bang crash into him... he can be away fro her whole day without pampering her...so better to kiss her...

he cupped her face with one hand finally placed his lips on hers and kissed her lips softly..it was short and cute...and he pulled back.all hooted more ...she just dug her face in his chest...even though she cant see she felt she was in the worlds brightest place as he hugged her more tight

ps: taani and her husband came to wish kriyaansh thats it they dnt liv with the gang...

finally after completing their breakfast all left for dance insti where kriyaansh danced to teach their students...

it was night...they were in their room after the party and all...as usual kria looked ravishing...he just kissed her neck and kissed her breathlessly and pulled her into his arms...she traced his face with her hands...

"rey mujhe aapko dekhna hai"she choked...

he crushed his lips over hers as both cried and kissed this tym with all the pain...finally he pulled back...

"just 15 days dear..."he said and pulled her close and she fell asleep thinking finally the day of their becoming one is near coz he said till he wont make her back to normal he wont make love with her... ...he looked at her sleeping peacefully...

"bas 15 days..i can drown in my world..."he said thinking abt her operation on next day...

***********END**********

kaisa tha???
cmnts plzz...

like too please...both the updates...upar wala aur ye bhi...

gaana kaisa hai???

i dance madly on this for someone☺️

love u all
joy
-deetha😳

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

u can read and res now guys!!!!!!!!

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Beautiful_King

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Posted: 13 years ago

res

unres

😭😭😭 *no words*

2nd part

haye mere KR mujhe pata tha ki wahi hain...aur koi ho hi nhi sakta kabhi nhi...

song hmmm i'm totally in love with this song...

Edited by sachiarsha - 13 years ago

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vaishali

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Posted: 13 years ago

min nhi kar rhi res...

ab padhke comment dungi😃

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Snigdha

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Posted: 13 years ago

😃😃

Gng 2 read nw...

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Akanksha

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Posted: 13 years ago

res... Unres... Wat the heck... Ye kya tha...????? *super confused* ... I loved the story... But... Der r hell lot of questns in my mind... 1. Why did kria became blind..???? 2. Ye 15 days ka chakkar kya hai...????? 3. Rey ne taani ko engadgement k liye kaise mana kia..???? 4. Is dis actually the end...??????????????????????????????

Edited by akanksha_arsha - 13 years ago

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vaishali

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Posted: 13 years ago

mast tha...

just loved it...

tu na hamesha ekdum kuch naya dhundh ke laati hai...

i love u for that...

that was so very touchy...

main jinna bhi bolun kam hain

Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago