real love never fails

Posted: 12 years ago
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Hola guys updated next part , thanks for so sweet comments...its nt in a new thread but i wanted this to be in d3 forum so in new post
LINK TO PREVIOUS CHAPTERS
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65318814

recap : dance in rain .and some 1 s at the door ?

So her u go with the update SPEAKERS ON KAR LO

She opens the door and she gets a shock the whole gang was standing der with a person ...who spoke?
P: beta aap bearish mai kyu bheeg rahe ho...
Kr : ( hell shocked and speaks in low voice) mom mai ...( she turns back and see rey's eyes which wer also popped out , of shock and she turns and speak again ) vo mom itne din baad collage aye hu to bohat aacha laga so I came to enjoy the climate ...
Sm: ok beta aap ko aapna promise yaad hai na..
To this she didn't replied as she has already broke the promise
rey knew about wat promise she was talking ...( the gang bounced on her)
Ne: how u ? Neha missing u a lot ...
Vi: ya man I also missed u like hell ...
Kr: I am fine guys will meet u tomorrow in collage ...&she leaves from der as she wanted to save rey from being caught ...she left from der and next moment rey came out of the pillar ...ps(SHIVAM and taani is nt der)
Wen he came out tears wer rolling from his eyes...and he stood like a statue der without even moving a muscle ...gang was going near him but swayam stopped and said them to wait and he moved in his direction and wen rey saw him he spoke...
Re: swayam hum shyad mil kar bhi nahi mile ...( he had tons of tears in his eyes and he was having the pain of loosing his breath ( kriya) he couldn't control it)
Swayam kept a hand on his shoulder and rey fell on his knees and was crying hard and this time swayam hugged him the way rey hugged him at his hard times...
Re: I can't stay without her swayam ( he spoke and was literally crying hard and he broke the hug and looked at swayam )
Sw: dnt worry I promise every thing will be back in place mai vada karta hu !
Now every 1 just left for the home and next day Smiti came to collage to drop her and even to meet prince...
Wen they both got down from the car rey also parked and was going in den they both faced him and wat he did suprised nt only smriti but kriya also ...he backed off 2 steps and. Went away back in parking area so dat she should not hurt kriya any more by reminding her the promise ...

Now they talked to the prince and came and principle made her the new ags again of mr . Amar ( ps in my story amar is gs nt Shivam) ...now they both headed to the gang as she wanted to talk to them wen rey saw that she was coming closer to the gang he just slid himself away and went behind a random door ..
Smriti was talking to the gang and the devil entered
SHIVAM: hello aunty ! How cum ur here?( the gang was suprised to hell dat how cum this moron no her )
Sm: o hello beta kaise ho Tum?
Shi: I am fine aunty...
Sm: so ok guys I wanna say u something abt kriya , she can dance with u guys but...
Sw: but kya aunty.?
Sm: I dnt want kriya to talk with that shirtless wonder anymore.. ( by hearing this Rey was smiling away thinking dat at least she took his name )
Sw: (thought if she said to some 1 to eye on her it's better he should only say ) ok aunty mai is Ba'ath ka dhyan rakhana ( the gang was shocked on this answer as they thought swayam is on kriyas side) but ..( she thought y nt give kriyas responsibility to some 1 and she turns at SHIVAM and says )
Sm: Tum nahi swayam SHIVAM will take care of kriya...
Gang : kya?????
Sm: ha SHIVAM make sure she dnt talk to him..or meet him...
Shi: ( he was just waiting for this chance ) ok aunty as u say...

Here rey was boiling in anger and mumbling ...y does every1 have problem with me and her being together he sees up and says hey universe Ji raksha karna ...
Now he peeps out and kriya see him and he catches his ears and say sorry ...and to this she nods her head in a no...( saying dat he shouldn't be sorry) and again he talks to himself. If he even some close to my baatcutter na den I will kill him.!

Now smriti left wen she left the whole gang turned towards SHIVAM and they was fuming in anger and was moving close to him swayam came near him and said ..
Sw: agar kuch galat Karene ke koish ke na to mai Tujhe ...( he was moving behind and behind and he clashed with some 1 and dat person spoke the last word) it was Rey ...
Re: to mai Tujhe mar dunga ...( now SHIVAM was standing in between rey and swayam,.)
Now SHIVAM spoke in attitude
Shi: u better be carefully rey coz mai aunty ke Ba'ath ko serious lena wala hu! I have my eyes on u ...and he left from der

Some time later the whole gang was in canteen except rey ...even SHIVAM was present ...they wer sitting on the tables and rey was peeping from behind the door and staring at kriya he was lost in her eyes and den she sneezes which made rey concern , and the caring corner of Rey got in action, and he was about to go near she sneezes again he understood this was the effect of dng romance in rain he massaged her same line ...

" I guess this is the effect of romancing in rain:)"

By reading it she blushed and den sneezes ...rey went away from der , now swayam told..
Sw: I guess kriya u have caught cold ?
Den a waiter enters with a cup and says kriya ...
Wa: beta ye tumhare liya ...
Kr: but ye hai kya
Wa: chai adrak wali tumhari sardi chali jayagi ( rey comes back and rest his head on the wall and stands. Der)
She holds the cup and interrogate the cup and rey was looking at her so sweetly and he quietly took a pic which sharon noticed ..him .the plate even had a medicine in it( remember rey left of.min he went to bring tablet for his sweet baatcutter) ..kriya messages him...
Kr : I will nt take this medicine ...
Rey was angry by reading this messages ( her SHIVAM was just looking at every 1 who ver ignoring him , which was hell irritating for him) he replies back
Re: kyu?shut up and have it ?
She sees this and giggle and SHIVAM notice this and ask
Shi: Kis ka message hai kriya kahi rey ka to nahi...(rey get hell angry on him and again mummers ise koi Dhaka mar kar bahar nikalo... I hate him)
Kr: replied him Tum SE iska koi matlab nahi so shut up...! ( she was he'll irritated with his stupid disturbance in between the talks of her and her love)
By hearing this rey says" dats like my baatcutter" and den history even he sneezes which make the gang face him and the gang calls him in and he goes and sit near swayam and den sharon spoke..
Sh: I think u also have cold ...
Re: I guess yes (sneeze )
Sw: ( in Reys ear) aur karo bearish mai romance!
Re: Tujhe kaise Pata .
Swayam smirks and laugh hard and den Sharon says...
Sh : I guess u also should drink some thing hot ...
Re: no I dnt wanna have
Sh: den eat some thing ?
Re: I would love to have chocolate pastry ( he looks at his love and winks they get lost in the memory of food fight )

To this answer came the reply from kriya
Kr: sardi mai thandi Cheeze nahi khani chaiya us SE ..gala kharab ho jati hai...
Rey made a puppy face and was looking at her ...
SHIVAM spoke : I guess u shouldn't talk to him kriya ...
Sw:vo rey SE nahi mujhe SE Ba'ath kar rahi hai SHIVAM ( swayam explained by pointing finger at himself )
Re: ok to mai bhi chain he pe lunga, ( by hearing this dazzlers wer shocked as they knew he doesn't like tea )
Vi: dude tu kab SE tea peene laga ...
Re: jab SE mujhe pyaaa ( he was about to say Pyaar but swayam made that sentence as paagal ho Gaya hai...he nudged rey and pointed towards SHIVAM...

Now every 1 went to der own way and kriya went home...
Now rey in RH and gang in BB court discussing something...


Phew ho Gaya ...
Percap :gang plans something fishy ...without telling rey ?
Wat will they do will their plan bring kriyansh close or tear them apart ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Index :

link to previous parts :


part 5- scroll above

part 6- pg 8

part-7 -pg 14

part-8 -pg 19

last part-pg 27
Edited by enrique - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yippie im first..!!!!

wohoo..!!!!

Di its just awsm 🤗

luv d update

Kriyaansh ko sardi ho gayi

rofl aur karo baarish mein dance

n how dare smriti 😡

us shivam ko kyun pakda di duty 😭

update soon else 😉
Edited by abhiyakreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res !
Unres !!

Awesome update Maggie ! 😃

Uff ! Ye Shivam ne yaha par bhi picha nahi choda !!
Smriti ko shivam ke alwaya aur nahi mila kya ! 😡
And she wants rey to be away from kriya ! Uaahh... 😭

Dono ko ek saath cold !! Hehe !! Aur bheego Rain mein ! 😆
Awwiee Rey caring for his baatcutter was supercute ! 😳
Rey drinking tea for kriya ! Aww !

Precap : Gang planning Something ! Epp !! Waiting ! 😆
Edited by hetalt29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hawww!!!!!

huh!!!

me commenting and going...😭

Update toh phirse u made me speachless awww it was amazing...aarrrggghhh ye smriti kabhi nhi sudhregi n ye shivam oh horrifyingly mediocre uurrrggghhh but kya answer diya kria ne awwieee phone chats...haye romance i toh was mantling 😳 haye swayam is such a great frnd hahahaha rey drinking tea though he doesn't even like it...awww...he's soo dainty haye...

comment toh hogaya but mai abhi bhi gussa...huh ab manao to bhi nhi maning main bye...mamma!!!!!!!!

update toh jaldi de dena plzzz...


MUMMaaa!!!!!! 😭
Edited by sachiarsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update maggie...

Loved it

smriti ko aur koi nahi mila kria ki duty dene ke liye... Hate that CHEEVAM 😡

nd she also told that kria will not meet rey... Aisa hamesha kriyaansh ke saath hi kyu hota hai 😭

Both hav caught cold... Aur karo barish me romance 😆

nd rey was taking care of his sweet baatcutter.. Aww

precap is interesting..

Gang is planning something for kriyaansh... Excited

update soon

thnx for pm 😊
Edited by GayatriJethani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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luved it like hell...

aur shivam tu toh gaya bahcho...

how dare u ki tu rey ar kriya ko dur rakhe..
n hate kriya's mom
voh kyu nahi samajti..*cry*
Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

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Yippie im first..!!!! always first in my ff how sweet

wohoo..!!!!

Di its just awsm 🤗thanks baby

luv d update i am glad u liked it

Kriyaansh ko sardi ho gayi ..hahahah dats mast cool thing

rofl aur karo baarish mein dance

n how dare smriti 😡 ya i can understand ur feeling baby

us shivam ko kyun pakda di duty 😭 she trust him more i guess

update soon else 😉 will surely do

Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hetalt29

Res !
Unres !!

Awesome update Maggie ! 😃

Uff ! Ye Shivam ne yaha par bhi picha nahi choda !!
Smriti ko shivam ke alwaya aur nahi mila kya ! 😡
And she wants rey to be away from kriya ! Uaahh... 😭

Dono ko ek saath cold !! Hehe !! Aur bheego Rain mein ! 😆
Awwiee Rey caring for his baatcutter was supercute ! 😳
Rey drinking tea for kriya ! Aww !

Precap : Gang planning Something ! Epp !! Waiting ! 😆


awww hatu so sweet comment

i will surely uupdate soon and pm u

i am glad u liked it

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