Real love never Fails

Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys hola me back with a new SS I hope u like it ...as u all liked my other works...now no baak baak and update...

Amar has won the gs election and der was a party to celebrate the whole collage was invited for it ...every 1 was excited ...As it was a ball room batty for the 1st time in collage and every 1 was in pure black dresses ...and they had to be in 2 ...to enter the party as couple entry was compulsory ...And they wer provided with the mask at the time of entry ...every 1 was present except ...swayam as Sharon chose rey over him as they wer fighting ...

Out side the door of the collage a girl was fighting with the gaurs to enter the collage but he didn't allowed her and shushed her bu saying dat she need to have a partner ...

G: Aab partner kaha SE layu...she went and sat near the bench close by and heard a boy doing same thing wat she was dng couple min a go fighting with the guards to enter ...he was swayam ...

An idea stuck in her mind and she saw a mask lying on the table of the gaurd she picked it...and wore it the mask was a bigger dan her face and it covered her face till her mouth ...and now moved towards swayam ... And said


G: u can be my partner ...

Sw: sorry do I no u ? I mean ...( he was trying to see her face as it was nt visible ) I dnt no u ?

G: so wat happened u r also alone like me so y nt enter in as 1 den part away ...

Sw: was confused and was think dat he saw the girl some wer he shocked her from top to bottom and was thinking dat he has seen her some wer ...

G: waves her hand in from of him and bring him on earth back and says...let's go!!!!!

Sw:aaa...aa. ...ya...let's go and he also got 1 mask ...

Now they both entered and saw the whole Gang standing some had der mask on and some didn't ...they all wer looking at swayam who was standing der and was looking smashing hot ...the gangs mouth was in a shock state after seeing a girl who is hotter dan swayam ...

Rey felt a sudden gush of wind blown on his face and was lost in his own world and was looking at them and for a sec his hand shook in nervousness ...

Now swayam forwarders his hand towards the girl and she placed her hand on his and wen she did this a sudden jolt ran down his body as her hands wer cool and even soft and he closed his eyes and only 1 image came in to his mind ...and he took the name of the picture which he imagined ...so slowly dat even he couldn't listen ...

Sw: kriyaaa... And opened his eyes and faced her ...and the girl suddenly pulled back her. Hand and went away...

Now he came near the gang and as usual the rain of questions started !

Nil: who's the chick man ?

Vi: swayam shekawat with a hot chick maana padaga yaar ?

Re: in a sad voice who is. SHE.?

Sw: will u guys let me speak ...

Ne: to say na kon she is ?

Sw: I dnt no ?

All the gang except rey ...WAT?

Den he explains wat happens at the gate and all started to talk and few shattered but rey , swayam , Sharon and amar and rinni was standing in a group and the girl passed from behind the group and unfortunately her hand touched rey's hand and for a moment both of them froze to the ground ...and swayam bought them in senses again and was about to talk to that girl and she ran away while she was running a girl dashed in her and the whole glass of juice was poured on her and the girl stopped der and turned back and looked at rey...he didn't noticed dat but swayam did ...

The girl ran in washroom and so did swayam to find who the hell was she after all...

Now the girl was in washroom and was cleaning her dress ...and swayam didn't wanted to but he entered the room and peeped from the glass door without her notice...the girl was getting irritated with the mask and she did the mistake to remove it and her identity was revelled to Swayam ...

Swayam just froze to the ground by seeing that girl...

Who was dat girl? Wanna no so hit the like button and drop ur precious comments please

Percap : let it be suspense...

Chalo bata he deti hu ...

A really hot dance between all couple and rey and the unknown girl dance like never before and the crowd sticked to them ...

BAS thats it now comments please...


part 2 -pg 8

part 3 - pg 17

part 4-pg 27


next part in new post heres the link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66100223

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Posted: 13 years ago
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res...

unress
yay me frst one to cmmnt...😃

m sure wo Kriya hi hogi

nice start


nxt part jldi update krdo
thnx for th pm




Edited by heavenlyangel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW!!! it was so nice...luved it I Think tht the girl is none other than kriya...hope it would be her...plzzz update fast...waiting...
Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: arsha.kriyaansh

WOW!!! it was so nice...luved it I Think tht the girl is none other than kriya...hope it would be her...plzzz update fast...waiting...


thanks for liking dear will surely update soon pakka
Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: heavenlyangel

res...

unress
yay me frst one to cmmnt...😃

m sure wo Kriya hi hogi

nice start


nxt part jldi update krdo
thnx for th pm





i am glad u liked it dear will surely update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res😉
unres😃

heyyy amazinggg cncpt,,,,,,,,,,,suprlyk

i m loving it😃😃

n dat girl most be kriya or kan hogi😃😃

btw thnkx 4 pm,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,update nxt prt jaldi se plzzz😃😃
Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all I Don't watch D3 , so Don't know abt Amar , G , Sh !! I was Confused while reading it 😉 🤣

But I have read the whole , i would say it was nicely Written though i didn't the Characters 😆 But It was Nice SS !!

Thanks for the Pm . & If u've written anything on ArHi . Do Pm Me !! I'll read it !! 😉 😉


Posted: 13 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: ...Areeba...

First of all I Don't watch D3 , so Don't know abt Amar , G , Sh !! I was Confused while reading it 😉 🤣


But I have read the whole , i would say it was nicely Written though i didn't the Characters 😆 But It was Nice SS !!

Thanks for the Pm . & If u've written anything on ArHi . Do Pm Me !! I'll read it !! 😉 😉



areeba ke baachi ...chal no prob i will surely pm if i write on our arhiii😉
Edited by enrique - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome concept
kriya hogi...
pls update fast...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb start...maggie...pls pls update fast...

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