SwaRon SS: Dancing lovers in Boston UPDATED!! - Page 5

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom

You know I have my own term for this kind of writing. I call it a clean piece of work. That means that there are no irregularities in your writing. It a smooth, perfect read. In short I absolutely loved it.

It was so easy for me to imagine Swayam and Sharon like this. Living in some part of the world, doing the thing they love the most with the person they love the most. This SS here had a serene undercurrent to it. I felt no kind of agitation when I was reading it and I like it when that happens.

That whole SwaRon Dance center thing had me smiling like an idiot.

You've managed to nail the essence of both Swayam and Sharon. And you did it quite beautifully. Amazing work. Please do keep writing more, Nikita. And thanks for the PM. 😊

Read both parts in one go

Originally posted by: Rutu

Read both parts in one go

The entire SS is really sweet and romantic too. And the end was beautiful as well. Keep writing more and PM me each time😳

Just read both the parts and it was simple and a pleasure read. The first part with small tiff's between SwaRon and i loved the idea of them owning a dance school. The second update was cutely put as well, SwaRon reminiscing their past and the moments they share under the moonlight was nice. Do write more and thanks for the PM.

it was a fab ss...i enjoyed reading it...a cute day spent by swaron...i wish a wify like sharon comes in every man's life...because she really makes swaron perfect...and swayam ofcourse just the way a fun loving boy he is...most of d boys are like this only...so a perfect description of cute couple...

thanks for the pm nikki...do write more dear...

it was truly perfect awesome👏

Originally posted by: doll_sg

it was truly perfect awesome👏

Thanks!

Do u really want to know how it was...than here we go...its was just AWESOME...i mean wow wow n bada wala wow... just loved it. i like the way swayam feel his presence by encircled his hand upon her shoulder...hayeee...n that caressing kiss... how romantic....

superb upate