--DOR-- Thread 2 UPDATED Pt 33 / Pg 92 @ 3/11

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Heyy deariesss ...



Hope now you all know me.. who dont know so let me introduce you. i am Monika and i live in Maaneet world... dream them and draw them in words... so here i am with my 2nd thread of DOR ...


It was never possible if you all would not have supported me






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Prologue

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" geet ...geet kaha ho. Dadi geet kaha hai.'

Kyu maan bete aaj badi jaldi office se aa gaye aap. Kya baat hai.pahle to hum khate kahte thak jaate thy ki maan bete kabi to dinner ke time pe ghar aa jaaiye aur yaha lunch bhi ghar pe hi kar rahe hai. Kya baat hai. Ye kisne jaadu kiya hai aap pe

Dadimaa ho gaya aapka to mai kuch bolu.

Haa beta boliye. Wase bhi hum to taras gaye ki kabhi aap humse bhi do baate kar liya kijiye..warna geet k aane k baad to humare liye kisi ke pass time hi nahi hai

Maan roled his eyes. Dadi maa ab aapki tabiyat nahi khrab ho rahi itna bolne se. Ya aap pe bhi geet ka asar ho gya hai jo rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi

'Kyaaa' kya kaha maan aapne. Mai bolti hu.haa mai jayada bolti hu. Abhi batati hu. Dadimaa jaane mat dena inko.

And they started running like two kids.

Iin dono ki khushiyo ko kisi ki nazar na lage bhagwaan. Dadi wiped her wet eyes wishing all happiness of world for her maan and geet

After 2 years

Nooo m not geet ..mai geet nahi hu mujhe jaane do...Nahiii chodo mujhe ..chodi jaane do mujhe.. maaan...chodiye mujhe, jaane do please... mujhe yaha se jana hai..please jaane do..mai geet nahi hu.


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When you were mine, nothing else I wanted

You were mine, Whole world was in my heart

I never need anything, which I never had

I had you only you , now I wish you to be only mine


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They had small world, full of love and happiness. They never need anything beyond it. They were happy, very happy. Their small world had all happiness what anyone could wish for. They had unperturbed past and peaceful future. But one day she lost something. Something which had his and her each and every moment of love. She remembered something which she should not. But alas! It happened. A reality which took away their each and every memory of life


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