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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread...


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Congrats on the new thread...
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Congrats for new thread...👏Waiting for update...
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congarts for the new thread dear
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(Some violence might be here)


PART 23



Maan came inside house. He went to geet room and knocked. " geet... geet.. " but he got no reply.. he again knocked then he heard a click sound and door opened.

He saw a doll in pink , crimsoning terribly, standing fiddling her dupptaa in shy. He smiled looking his blushing sherni. He called her but she did not look up to him. She was smiling like a new bride. He cupped her chin and made her look to him. "geet kuch bologi nahi hmm ..

he liked her blush. He was very happy. She accepted his all wish so easily was taking him on cloud9.

He composed himself and asked " geet bhukh lagi hai ? " she nodded shying

he made some instant food and settled on table.. all the time she was shying. whenever he would see her , she would bend her head and smiled. He also smiled back.. Both sat on chair having their midnight dinner. He again looked her , she was shying... they had their dinner in silence.. after dinner both went their respective room to sleep.

"good night geet.." maan said holding door when she was going to close it.

"good night" she said still without looking him. " he kissed her forehead and left

At Morning

Geet came out to find maan.. was making breakfast. He smelled her fresh shower and turned to find again she was blushing.. "good morning geet' he wished.. she again replied without looking him... now maan was being irritated.. he was missing his non stop talk..

they both sat for food when again geet was blushing.. " o God.. iise ho kya gaya hai ' maan thought..

"geet ?.. ' he called

"ji .. '

"are you ok.. tum thik to ho na'

"haan maan .. kyu ??' she asked confused

"fir tum itna kyu blush kar rahi ho ? '

"wo.. wo mai sharma rahi hu " she said bending her head..

" geet.. tum sharma rahi ho ya sharmaane ki record bana rahi ho.. itna bhi koi sharmaata hai kya .. ' he said teasing " aur I dint know ki meri sherni ko sharmaane bhi aata hai '

"wo maan.. mai apni marji se nahi sharmaa rahi ' geet said looked him

"matlab ??

"wo..maine ek film me dekhi thi .. fir maine meera se pucha toh wo boli ki saari larkiyo (girls) ko sharmaana jaruri hota hai .. to isiliye mai sharmaa rahi hu ' she said innocently

"ohh geet.. you are so cute.."maan thought.. he laughed and hugged her lovingly.. both finished food and left for home. After dropping geet maan went to meet his raghav..

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Last Night

Mohindar was back to home with help of securities. Meera was already back to her home. Mohindar was sitting in hall worrying for geet. He knew maan and all securities are there for her still he was tensed. He closed his eyes thinking about geet then traveled to a place... a flashback of past...

" mohindar uncle,,,, darwaaza kholiye " geet shouts knocking.. ' jaldiii'

"kya hua geet beta??' Mohindar asked opening his door

"wo ..maa ne aapke liye kheer bheji hai " geet gave him vessel and run.. " okk byee uncle.. mujhe school jana hai 'and she raced away..

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" Mohindar bhaiyaaa ' a lady screams and continues bangs on door.. " bahiyaaa please open door.. bahiyaa they will spoil geet... please save her... "

he brought them inside and closed the door'. when a blast and everything went hazy...

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" papa.. papaa darwaaza kholiye ' ... geet shouts standing on door with maan.. mohindar opened his eyes and saw it was morning.. he jerk stood and wiped his dried tears and went to open '.

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maan drops her and went to meet his head guard. " where is he ? ' maan asked..

guard took him in a room. Maan entered. It was dark inside. Guard switched on lights and left closing door behind.. maan saw a figure, covered in blood, groaning.. looked like near to death.. Sitting tied, bending his head and closing his eyes'

maan went to him and clutched his hair. Raghav screamed in pain and opened his eyes to get biggest shock of his life.. he saw maan was pointing his gun to his head.. maan looked him in rage.. " how dare he touched my geet... ' " tumhaari himmat kase hui " he roared

Raghav laughed. his laugh made maan more furious. he punched him hard made him flinched in pain still he did not removed his gaze from maan. he challenged maan to open his rope and then fight. maan accepted his challenge and opened him. They fought like no end.. finally maan punched him hard making him fell..

Raghav was bleeding hard.. yet he decided to throw his last dice.. " jis geet ke liye you are ready to risk your life..you know who is she ?? " he laughed..

" once.. just once you take' geet name with your filthy mouth raghav'.you will be dead .. himmat bhi mat karna.. ' maan said and started to leave when raghav word stopped his step'

" tumhaari geet pahle hi barbaad ho chuki hai maan ' she had been forced'."

A gun shoot echoed in air '' raghav body fell on floor..



Precap : sorry dear 😛


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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yepppiieiee me first
dhinka chika

now about update
nice update
geet is sooo innocent
waise really missed our non-stop geet in this update
does geet has been force
plz this has to be a biggg NO
plz updaye next part soon
Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Raghav...😡 He is such a... What will be Maan's reaction...?? Our Geet is so cute...meera ne kaha isliye barbar blush kar rahi thi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update raghav is bas... happy that he is dead geet innocent barbaad ho chuki hai



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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg..what a shocking update..pls cont soon..what hv happen to geet in the past..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow lovely funny update..geet is blushing,bechare my maan missing his sherni geet..me too blushy blushy seeing my geet for my maan...oh god geet was forced?tats why she is like tis..i love te update so much..

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