DIL, DOSTI.. HUM!! thread #3 epilogue.. pg 33!

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DIL, DOSTI.. HUM!!
Hi all !!
its tuff 2 believe dis is happening for real..
a 3rd thread!!
thts definitely a lot more than i ever anticipated..!!
n d credit goes to all u readers!!
so 🤗!!

a big THANK YOU to all of u!
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index..


chapter 44, 45 .. post below

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Chapter 44

Geet

I so wanted to calm my senses!!

Bt as he stepped closer to me,


all I cud feel was my heartbeats which were almost echoing n my breathing which had become irregular!!


As he sat next to me..

I drew a blank!!

He slowly raised my veil..

Bt I cudnt gather enuf courage to look at him!!

Sm hw d present situation was making me shy..

N tht shudnt be d case after wht we had shared!!

Bt yet I only lukd at him when he raised my chin wid his finger..


his touch compelled me to look into his eys.. those molten chocolate browns.. which had me captive ryt fm d start!!

It was these eyes had spoken to me whn he hadnt..!!

I loved getting lost in them..!!

"mishty.."

His baritone voice which had alwaz allured me..!!

It had its own effects on me..

It was only him.. n I cud never hear nythng apart from his voice!!

I was totally smitten by my handsm husband!!

I looked down only to see his broad shoulders n glimpses of his well toned chest..!!

Reminding me of his greek god body..

N more importantly of d support.. he was alwaz my shoulder to lean on..

n d warmth his chest radiated every tym I had hugged him!!

N most important..

His heart!!

Which I know beats only for me.. as mine for him!!

"you look beautiful, mishty!! I don't know hw many tyms I ve pictured u in dis wedding dress n yet u manage to look even more prettier!!"

I blushed hard..

The first compliment from my husband!!

Husband.. even d sound of it send a tingling sensation down my spine!!

"wont u say smthng?"

I hugged him..

"I love u, maan!! I love u so much!!"

I managed to murmur!!

His arms tightened around my bare waist..

Engulfing me in his warm embrace!!

Then separating a bit, looking at me..

"I promise u mishty.. from today der were will be no secrets, no barriers between us.. I love u!!

Secrets.. I shifted uncomfortably..

I still hadn't told maan..

Bt he wasn't letting me think straight as he had already removed my dupatta n was planting kisses down d column of my neck!!

"maa'aa'n.. plz.. I need to tell u smthng!!"

"evrythng can wait for tomoro.." he murmured back..

I forced myself away fm his hold..

"plz maan.. I don't wanna have anything hidden between us.. like u said no secrets, no barriers!!"

I guess he sensed d seriousness of my voice..!!

I walked upto d window..!! my back facing him..!!

Needing sm distance to think ryt..

I dint know hw he wud react.. bt big or small, he deserved to know..!!

If he got annoyed, I wud make it upto him!!

"maan.. u remember tht evng, I knew tht dream house was my bday gift.. I mean.. umm..

..I read ur diary!!"

I finally uttered out without facing him!!

Will he get angry?

Thr was no sound from him..

I cursed myself for ruining our first nyt..

This cud wait for tomoro!!

Thr was almost a minute of silence!!

N tears were flowing down my cheeks!!

Sensing no response, I turned around to see him standing close.. smiling staring at me!! As if waiting for me to turn around!!

Why was he smiling..!!

He pulled me by d waist causing me to fall on his chest!!

I held him for support.. bt did not look up at him, confused by his reaction!!

He wiped my tears!!

"oh mishty.. I know.. I know!!"

"u know??? But hw can u? I mean.."

He dint let me complete as he kissed my eyes.. one by one!!

He lifted me in his arms carrying me to our bed, n making me sit, he got me a glass of water..!!

"tht evng wen we returned fm der, n wen I let evry1 know of my London trip, I did realize u were angry bcoz I was leaving.. I wanted to talk.. bt smthng or d other kept me busy.. by d tym I got free it was almost 2 in d nyt!! I was scared I hadn't really spoken to u abt my feelings completely!! N tuff as it may be, I wanted to clear it all b4 leaving.. I wanted u to know tht dis marriage wasn't happening just coz we were frnds who had chatted all dese yrs.. I loved u.. since forever!! I really wanted to make it upto u!!"

He paused luking at me..

"I came to ur room.. wanting to get rid of all assumptions. I wanted smthng definitive, even though we had professed our love for each othr bt still.. bt u were asleep, hugging smthng.."

He paused as I looked at him wid wide disbelieving eyes..

Babaji.. he knew!!

As if reading my expression, he continued..

"I cudnt help it as curiosity got d better of me.. bt nthng cud prepare me to see my diary der!!"

"initially I just wanted to wake u up n speak to u!! it was too much of a shock.. no one had evr touched, forget reading my diary!!"

"then y dint u?" I smhw managed to murmur..

He came towards me n bend down on his knees, taking my hand in his.. I cud feel his warmth flow into me!!

"u looked so adorable mishty.. I cudnt disturb ur sleep!! N seeing tht diary in ur embrace.. I cud only feel jealous.. wishing it was me instead!!"

The crimson color returned wid a vigour on me cheeks so he moved his finger across dem..


"u have no idea hw much just ur mere presence has such a calming effect on me.. helps me think rationally!! Seeing d diary wid u n dat u knew tht house was ur bday gift.. it dint take long to put two n two 2gthr to understand u knew evrythng!! Tht u had gone ahead wid dis engagement trusting my love n not just coz I was d guy u had been chatting wid!! N in a way dis was d best thng to happen coz I know I wudnt be able to express myself ny better!!"

Hw true indeed.. I wondered if I ever understand d depth of his love as I do now if it wasn't for his diary!!

"n probably thts y I was able to go to London wid a relaxed mind knowing tht u knew all tht was der to me.. n reciprocated my feelings or else u d never get engaged d way we did!! It was as if I had accomplished d biggest feat of my life, knowing u accepted me the way I was..

I cud be wid u d way I m..

No fears, no insecurities"

I kissed his forehead..

"nd I love d way u r.. a wonderful grandson for daadi maa, a son maa n dad dream of, a great bro for dev n meer's veerji, my best frnd.. fulfilling all my dreams.. ryt fm my favorite food to meer's name, her admission, us working together, my dream house.. u ve been der wid me living all my dreams!!"

Tears of happiness flowed down bth our eyes!!

Having this heart to heart talk was so important!!

It was a step ahead..!!

But suddenly d moment was so emotional..

".. though as a lover.."

I paused.. trying hard not to smile as his face reflected confusion..

"u r ok ok.. bt I ll make do wid it!!.. don't worry!!"

He stood up abruptly as I tried to keep a straight face..

n den suddenly bent towards me, his breath almost fanning my face..


"really? So I don't love u enuf? I think its tym to prove odrwise?"

Edited by nats0101 - 12 years ago
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Hey so many of u have already liked it!! lol!!

Here's d last part for u all!!

Not exactly sure hw its turned out!! Bt evry1 was expecting a SR.. it took me too long to write dis one!!

Ny complaints.. do pm me!! I ll edit it!!

CONTAINS MATURE CONTENT. PLEASE READ AT UR OWN DISCRETION!!

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Chapter 45 (last part)

Geet

I was lost in him as he uttered those words

N

I feared tht my attempt to lighten d moment had made me face a side of him tht I wasn't completely aware of.. especially considering..

The way he had teased my senses in dese past 15 days had left me craving for more!!

N I had challenged him to prove his love??!!

I cud see dat desire in his eyes.. or was it just a reflection of my own!!

But

His actions surprised me!!

I had expected him to be aggressive, wild, out of control!!

But he was just d opposite..

Calm n yet passionate!!

Making me lie down on tht cosy bed.. I cud only feel d flower petals tickling whrever they came in contact wid my bare skin!!

Bt It wasn't d petals tht caused dat tinglinging sensation down my spine..

It was his breath fanning my skin as he slided slowly down my body.. head to toe.. close to me n yet not close enuf..!!

It was pure torture as he made those deliberate pauses at d deep cut of my blouse, blowing at my cleavage, then at my navel exposed by d low waist lehenga!!

His not touching me was driving me more crazy than his touch ever had!!

All d while we never lost eye contact.. n his mere look.. had me lose my senses as I stared into his eyes!! Thr was no lust just pure love!!

I so wanted him to engulf me in his warmth as I shivered wid d intensity of his gaze!!

Bt he dint relent!!

I wanted to tell him to stop bt words died out n my throat went dry as he suddenly took my toe in his mouth n sucked it one by one!! i never knew such an action cud lead to so much pleasure as I closed my eyes trying to contain all d pleasure of it!!

Bt d way he was slowly relishing on it, taking his own sweet tym while I burned in his torment!!

Having satisfied himself wid tht, he slowly caressed my sole n feet, his fingers tracing evry contour as if claiming his territory.. n I cudnt stop those noises coming from deep within as he replaced his finger wid his lips!!

Then slowly remaving my anklets he planted kisses thr n moving upwards sliding my lehenga upwards..

I cudnt take it any more as I pulled him up!!

Thr was a brief eye-lock..

N b4 I knew it we were kissing each othr!!

I don't know who started it bt it had unleashed d passion in bth of us as we deepened d kiss wid d hunger tht had been bulding in for so long!!

Matching his intensity was hard..!!

N though I loved him as much if not more!!

Bt ryt nw it seemed as if der was so much he had held back, he desperately needed to vent it out..!!

N I wanted it all..

D way he was..

Aggressively passionate.. n only mine!!

We parted as breathlessness forced us to, bt my arms which were now around his neck, pulled him closer!!

He removed my mang tikka n earings n kissed me again!!

I dint even realize whn he unhooked my blouse from d back.. bt feeling his fingers trace down my spine feeling my bare back, I clung to him tightly!!

Bt he had lost all patience as he pulled it away in a hurry baring my upper body to his view..!!

I shivered in anticipation as I remembered d feel of his mouth devouring my breasts d way he had last tym..

N as he did d same, first kneading bth in his palms, den pouncing on one, adorning it wid his saliva, making dem hard, then sucking n nibbling on dem transferring me to a world of bliss,moaning his name aloud continuously!!

I wanted to feel him more as I pulled away for a moment removing his sherwani!! But I had to make myself content wid his back as he refused to relieve my bossom!!

By the tym he pleasured its twin, I cud feel d desire in me building up!!

I wanted him now, as I forcefully turned arnd, lying over him now. He looked surprised, bt dis was no time for words as his greek god gorgeous body called for my attension!! Tht well toned chest and dose wash board abs..!! n d knowledge tht dey were mine to claim!! My fingers n lips left no place unexplored!!

As I bit him at d nape of his neck, I heard him groan in pleasure which turned me own like never before!!

Wid it also came d realization of hw aroused I had bcm..

I cud feel d heat n wetness of my core!!

Suddenly I was shy wid consciousness, at my newfound boldness,

I closed my eyes tight!!

Which he took full advantage of turning me over, pining me to d bed!!

I hugged him tightly bt pulled away being startled feeling his arousal!!

he moved down kissing my navel.. n then bit it hard!!

Hadn't he teased me enuf??

"maan plz.."

Finally giving into my plea, he removed my waist chain n den slid down d lehenga..!!

Even in d heat of d moment, I first reaction was to cover myself wid d duvet!!

Bt wht surprised me was tht he let me!!

N

Worse still, he pulled away!!

I snapped my eyes open..

Wondering wht was wrong!!

Bt b4 I cud think further, he joined me under d duvet..

His sudden action had caused so much anxiety in me..

I hugged him tight only to realize y he had pulled out!!

He lay der naked hugging me tight!!

His gesture was overwhelming foe me!! His letting me get comfortable wid him, his letting me claim him..!! especially as he lay der passively let me feel him.. I was in a trance as I held onto his manhood!!

"m-ish-ty.. do-n't!!"

It took his voice to get me out of d trance!!

He turned me over..!!

His hard manhood perfectly positioned at my wet hot waiting core..

I cud feel the throbbing of my vagina.. n I knew I needed him completely now!!

"maan.. plz love me now.. u've teased me enuf.. plzzz"

I knew d he wanted d same..!!

"I love u mishty.." was all I heard as he broke thru me..

The pain causing tears to flow out..

Bt as he slowly moved in.. thn stopped letting me adjust!!

Thr was only pleasure!!

I needed him more..!!

As if understanding my need he moved in gradually increasing d pace!!

I now knew wht it meant..

The pleasure in pain!!

The ultimate surrender!!

It wasn't long until I drowned in an ecstacy tht gave me a high tht no drug cud ever make me feel!!

It was in dose moments I found my salvation in him!!

He followed soon after..

Resting his head in d valley of my bossoms!!

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It was nearing 4am now!!

I cud feel maan's regular breathing on my breasts!!

He seemed to find sm special pleasure der as he slept der peacefully!!

Bt sleep was far away from me..

Despite d MARATHON love making session!!

Keeping a count was difficult whn all I cud think was of him!!

The soreness lingering my body was enuf proof of it!!

As was d marks all ovr his back!!

I blushed at my own aggressiveness!!

Bt I wanted him like I never wanted anything else!!

I wudnt deny d physical aspect of it..

Thr was pleasure.. yes!!

Bt it was d ecstacy of our togetherness!!

We had covered a long journey together!!

I had lost my heart to him, n yet it was frndship tht was d basis of our relationship..

Finally resulting in our togetherness!!

I dint know wht d future held in store..

Bt wid maan by my side, nothing cud go wrong!!

These three things wud alwaz see us thru..

Our love, our frndship n our togetherness!!

DIL, DOSTI.. HUM!!




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Edited by nats0101 - 12 years ago
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a big THANK YOU to all d readers who have been so supportive reading my work, n even liking it n commenting on it!!
an epilogue is due.. i think!!
some last words from maan!!
bt tht ll take sm tym i think.. not today!!

i d just to share my thots wid u!!
not sure if i ever get such a chance again!!

its been an amazing feeling being on GEET forum!!
n writing here.. even better!!

i wud request evry silent reader to write smthng on dis forum..
an os/ss/ff..!!
not just to keep dis forum alive
bt to experience d joy of being a writer!!
whn every like, every comment of ur reader matters!!

so thank u guys for all ur support!!
a lot of u.. urselves write such wonderful ffs..
so it was a great feeling having u comment on mine!!

enuf of my bak-bak!!
i m really feeling emotional bidding adieu!!
so till we meet again..
farewell
take care
n
god bless!!

lots of love
natasha
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congo on new thread dear
waiting for update..
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congrats on the new thread

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cngrats 4 the new thread👏

W8ing 4 update...😊
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yes.. may take 10-15 min!!
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congrats...updating now???????😊

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