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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsum ASR is alwaz ASR.
Vry vry vry nce update.
Edited by gangsu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
It is getting more and more interesting. You've got to update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Great FF read all the 16 parts together

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivani_Priyam

It is getting more and more interesting. You've got to update soon!

Thanks yaar...i am totally blocked...too much pressured with office work
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: natalie12

hey i think wat ur trying to tell thru hint-
aman gave away .even he didnt know.he said asr came after la and khushi,
so arnav might have figured out it was either of them.aman wont have to ruin his frndship with arnav
if he were doing this to some other girl.but that girl was khushi and she came before asr. Aman gave imp to khushi.asr might have figured it wasnt la bcoz she was engaged and obviously aman wouldnt let him NEAR LA.SO ASR came to know it was khushi.
i'm not good at puzzles,but i think i blew this one off.
pls reply if my guess was right.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ASRandKKGSRFan

Hey!

This was yet again a pleasure to read. Full of emotions and desires, ready to be unleashed šŸ˜‰.
I like how Arnav was quite the gentleman initially, but then let out a small amount of his frustration in a short space of time. From his point of view, it appears that he was being played. Whereas Khushi feels that he was ignorant in thinking that someone sooo beautiful could also have brains too.
Well whatever it maybe, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks for the PM. Let me know via PM when the next chapter is ready.

Thanks dear
one has to let the steam off...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dorindakate

Thanks for the pm...


Lovely chapter...ASR was just right (like baby bear's porridge and bed)...

I wondered about Arnav picking up on Aman's declaration, at the time, but since nothing was written about Arnav pondering it, I thought that it went over his head, or that he only associated it with her legal work...but I should have seen it coming...

Anxious to see what happens next...

😊 u know ASR cant think we he is too excited or angry,...mind is a mush...am so glad my readers did nt say that it was a blooper ...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
and i purposely let the story go as if nothing happened...else the essence wud have been lost...i feel like that
Edited by mtina0207 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry Guys.,...
DOnt think will be able to update today
Apologies to all waiting for the update.
Tina😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey friends...thank u for the patience. and comments.,..Also thank you to all who tried the quiz..."oh i know not much of it..."but still here is ur answer...again sorry for a short update
trust me too much going on at home and office and too much travel involved at work..so hardly get time to write. but will try and finish this up very soon...pls bear.
Here s the next upadte, please read and do comment on how it was

What was bizzare was Aman coming to ask me to let u be.. to stay away from u. He had this regret written in his eyes. I have never seen Aman like that. Even b4 that wen he confronted me with the news article there was no regret in his eyes. U know what khushi?, U guys under estimated me, probably that's the reason it never occurred to you that I might be aware of the whole game. I am a self-made man Khushi and I have not been so by fluke. I strike multi-million deals, not just on the presentation'.but I also know to read people and know what's required when and then with people who have worked for me for as long as Aman has, I can read them like a book.

and U know what hit the nail was his unexpected words "U will Eventually hurt her ASR. And I know this. after la and Khush, u are the closest I have and I like working for u , and I wud hate to ruin that relationship."

U know the irony Khushi, it didn't hit me then too'.coz I was in some other land''

I went home and started thinking of myself exactly as what u said 'PERVERT''here I wanted the mystery girl very badly and at the same time am attracted to another girl. What the hell kind of pervert were I. I I ' I (not able to speak because of emotion), I actually drank that day'"CAN U EVEN BEGIN TO IMAGINE WHAT I FELT THAT DAY, NO KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA, U CANNOT, COZ U WERE ENJOYING EVERY MOMENT OF SEEING ME IN THE STATE."

And guess what I met Viren,

(FB: "ASR? What are u doing here, and u seem to have taken a fair share of ur drinks. Shud nt u stop?" said Viren

ASR: Hi Viren, come and meet ur friend, a pervert, wanting two females at the same time, And u know the best part, I want both of them with the same intensity. Can u beat this. Even I never imagined, I could be into threesome"'.hahahah laughed Arnav aloud at his own predicament. "Hey what if the one of the two deny'.hmmm I ll need to ask them. But hell how can I, there is one who is playing hide and seek'.she has just taken herself off from the face of the earth."

Viren knew ASR though not in stupor didn't realize what he was talking. Viren has been his friend since ages and he has seen ASR in this state every year, on the day of his mom's death. It's his way of hiding pain, dealing with it. But today wasn't the day, so what is it that has overwhelmed ASR so much, given him so much pain. And threesome, ASR wasn't making sense, he never indulged in such topics. He sat there listening to Arnav.

ASR what are u saying, what threesome, who are u talking about?"

Mystery girl and of course KHUSHIii

Viren was totally dumbstruck/'" Khu KHu Khushiii? ASR what are u saying?":

"Shut up Viren, u sounding like a tape recorder, Stop repeating urself dude. Khushi, ur Khushi,'no no not ur Khushi, my khushi...yes My khushi'.but then I also want it to be my mystery girl'.what's happening to me Viren. There is one girl about whom I know nothing.,'when I sleep I see her face'her beauty enthralls me and there is the other one whose entire persona enthralls me. .when I am with her, I do not think of the other, I wish the day wouldn't get over. I just love sparring with her Viren, love her company, not that I have spent much but still'.this has never happened to me. And look at the destiny, it's happening and with two women at the same time'hahaha WOW ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA, DO U NOT GET THINGS IN ABUNDANCE''WHAT LUCK MAN WHAT LUCK'."

"ASR, hold urself, control buddy'.listen.. mmm'.i can only say one thing listen to ur heart. Question ur heart, what does it desire? Not both, think who has more weightage in ur life, who is more important. Is the person who is not visible more important to u or the one who is right there'..and make decision.

But Arnav, I cant deny the fact that I am an interested party, and biased towards Khushi, I would say u better meet this girl of urs before making any move on Khushi. She isn't ur usual kind of girl and not used to people like u and if u hurt even a hair on her body, friend or no friend ASR, I will smash u. so u better be very very sure before u think of approaching Khushi'."

"What the !!!!"

"Am serious ASR, u better let khushi be, coz knowing u, I am not sure u wudnt' discard her once u get what u are after?"

"Some friend u are Viren'some friend. U really think all this is just to get the gal in my bed? Are u freaking crazy'.i can get n number of females dammit. I speak to u my most private thoughts and this is what u come up with'some friend u are.."

ASR stood up and started leaving, Hey ASR? I would be the happiest if u are serious about khushi and u and khushi got together . that's the kind of respect I have for u my friend."

"Whatever?"

Viren smiled looking at ASR, the man is doomed and wished him luck..)

And that sat with me Khushi, what Viren said, think who do u want'.and I was like I have had females earlier then what was so intense this time. surely, I have had other females, but never were my thoughts in turmoil and never were I forced to choose'and that day I was being forced to choose'.and I started thinking who attracted me more and why and all the information connected with each. But guess what'it always was a blank with respect to the model'.and then something hit me.. something vital that Aman said,'and I was like What the hell'.how the hell did I miss this'.he said that after la and Khush I was important'.that is after u and la am the third'.sooo , if we three were important then where did the fourth wheel Fit? If she came after me then how come she commanded loyalty more than me. Why were Aman and lavanya both willing to give up their job'.Such a well-paid Job.

"Khushi looked sharply at him.. "yes khushi, I threatened them with the job and they said they would rather resign than give the information."

My mind went into over drive. It then started thinking, that even though I had a PDA looking at Aman and la, nothing came out.,'coz outside office, there was no one remotely looking like the show stopper that Aman met. It was always u. That was strange. Also, I had instructed my accounts department to let me know when the cheque for the show stopper came for signature'I would at least get to know her name, but guess what, there were no cheques signed. Aman and la were close mouthed about this mystery girl" Arnav turned towards khushi." But u know what hit me then, I thought, if they were that loyal to this girl, where both were ready to give up their job, then she has to be someone special and close right'.but amazingly there was no one with the said description that Aman or la would meet except u. THERE WAS NO 4TH WHEEL'..U were the only special person as far as the information could be collected.. Isn't it strange, which model would not want the money khushi, unless she has a different source and she was doing it for a friend. ''Werent u khushi, doing it for Aman . I wanted to blast u off that point in Time khushi, but I kept my cool'and u were lucky, I had time to cool off when I almost cracked the mystery.

U had me'I almost applauded'she is right under my nose. And then u know what khushi, the day u were in my office, u actually looked into my eyes'a moment, but u did 'and that's when the mystery girl came in front of me'those eyes gave u away'..those eyes that mesmerized me the first time I saw into them'.whispered ASR.

I thought why does she hide behind the glasses and the next instance I was like no'good she does, else she will keep killing people with those killer. ASR looked deep into her eyes'.I was being generous thinking, I need to give her a chance to get to know me, to understand me, I want her to come to me willingly, to reveal her identity. But that was not to be'was it? Had I not come today, u guys wud have carried on'Funny I could actually see the relief in ur eyes when I said I won't be there at the party. One thing'just one thing I wanted to ask, why? why wudn't u come and tell me'.But u know what khsuhi like I said earlier'.tchhh U do not hold the spell any more on me'the mirage was exactly that'a mirage'the reality Is disgusting'.and I am not interested'ANYMORE'

Precap: Khushi loses her cool and ASR has some earful

hey friends do comment ...waiting...
Edited by mtina0207 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yippe.me first 2 comment.thanx a lot yaar.i was goin 2 sleep wen i got ur reply.u wer updatin n how can i sleep without readin.n so reloaded d page evry sec n here it goes.its d first time 4 me 2 b first one 2 comment. Thanx again 4 that.n abt update awesome as usual.but sad abt last part.y asr is no more interested in her.
Edited by aamshula87 - 13 years ago

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