*~*ManVeer FF: Destined To be Together~Ch3 Pg37*~*

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Guyz many of u know me already but those who dont know me
I m Mehwish (nickname: Wish)😉

I hve written something... I hve written first time in my life so if u dont find it good thn sorry in advance

I m thinking of writing a ManVeer FF but ofcourse it depends on ur response okii I will go on about the FF now... It is inspired by a show I watched its story is based on it I m gonna write the same story on ManVeer hope u'll like it
so here is the

"PROLOGUE"

Love is a beautiful feeling but it can be complicated sometimes... The feelings unknown to one... Someone unable to understand his/her own feelings... Sometimes our heart gets confused what it wants we cant understand that ourself... undecisiveness in love can make life difficult to live...

Manyata is a ordinary girl belonging to a fairly poor family. She has a dream of studying in the most pretigious college "Broward college". Only the children of elite families study their Manyata's only dream is to be in that college because of her idol Priya who was a former student of that college. But soon after getting accepted in the college due to her high grades in the enterance exams, she realizes that life is not so glittery inside as it seemed from outside soon she realizes the arrogant and superficial nature & communication gap between her & her fellow class mates due to social status difference. To make the matter even worse the college is dominated and ruled by THE BLIZZARDS consisting of 4 boyz: playboy Sam, Vicky, introvert Karan and the leader of the group the son of wealthiest family of India handsome, dream of every girl,arrogant, violent and bratty Udayveer. All of them belong to influential families of India and their parents have a major stake in the college so the college officials dont interfere in any matter related to their sons. The blizzards bully students & have a strong hold on college no one dares to stand against them who ever does gets a red notice issued against him/her which gives permission to all to bully & treat badly anyone on whom red notice is issued & thn his/her life becomes a living hell in college being targeted and bullied by every single person eventually driven out of the college...

Manyata tries to remain invisible as much as she can. She wishes to pass her years in college silently without getting into any trouble. But what one always desires for rarely happens same the case here she gets immersed in the lives of the legendary four of the college due to some circumstances.. She dares to take a stand against Uday what happens then...

This is story will mainly focus on life's of Uday and Manyata the hurdleships, the difficulties they have to go through but true love never fades away but it becomes stronger with time... Will there love b strong enough...
Will the ones destined to b together end up being together

"DESTINED TO BE TOGETHER"

So Tell me Guyz how was it... Shall I continue??
Do hit Like button if u Liked it😉😆
Plz do comment criticism is welcome as well... will b waiting for your comments cuz I love reading comments😆

NOTE: tamatar anday jhootas agr maarnay hain tho plz keep in mind that tamatar anday should b fresh and jhootas should be in pairs... ab agr pasand ni b aaya tho likhnay main time tho lgaya tha na main ne kch tho faida ho😈😉🤣🤣🤣

This one is for u Rozi Roze🤗 yeh main ne tere hee baar baar kehnay k baad likha hai tunay hee mje sab se pehle kaha I can write... agar tunay na kaha hota tho may b main kabi na likhti 😆
also Special Thnx to Vampy for motivating me & encouraging me that I can write🤗

PS: If u want me to pm u mention in ur comment plz

Okiii taking ur leave...Love ya all 🤗

Character sketch Posted below😉

Edited by CharmingAngel7 - 12 years ago

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

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Posted: 12 years ago

"CHARACTER SKETCH"

Manyata
Manyata is a ordinary girl belonging to a poor family. But her family despite of being poor always be together and happy. Manyata is a very strong, high spirited girl and is always cheerful and optimistic. Always fights against any difficult time she has a never give up attitude which attracts people towards her. Her dream is to get accepted in the elite college"Broward college" of India due to her idol Priya being a former student of it. But once she gets accepted she realizes all is not Rozy inside as she had dreamt of. She also works in sweet shop owned by a lady to share her father's burden in running the family

Uday veer
Uday veer is a prince belonging to the most wealthiest and prestigious family of India. He is handsome, dream of every girl, hot headed, hot blooded leader of Blizzards. He has spent most of his childhood alone or with his group mates as his mom has always been overseas for business matters. She has never cared about him. To her he is only the heir of the Jaigarh estate & the one who will in future run the Jaigarh group. She has a very cold behaviour towards him and wants to control his life for the sake of family name. His sister is married and is living abroad whom he loves very much and is attatched to her. He is often in contact with his sister through mobile. He feels lonely at home and has no one to talk to except his group mates. He is used to getting things going his way and has never faced rejection in his entire life so far & no one has ever dared to rebel against him. He is not so good at getting his feelings through.

Karan
Karan is Udays best friend. He belongs to a rich family as well. He likes to b alone keeps himself distant from everyone, he is very kind, leads a carefree life. He usually likes to be at quiet places. He is always there to help Manyata when she needs help. He cares about her deeply.

Sam(Sameer)
Sam is the playboy of Blizzards. his family runs a chain of hotels and restaurants in India. He has a real interest in it. He had a elder brother who left his family now he is the only one living with the parents. He and Vicky try to act as peacemakers when things get out of hand in the group but he too looses temper when things are not going the way they should be.

Vicky
He belongs to a wealthy business family of India also having ties with underworld. He has interest in women older then his age. It is due to his mother's immature behaviour (child like) and his sisters over affectionate behaviour towards him that he is attracted to mature and older women them him. He is the peacemaker in the group, he is kind and he never looses his cool. He keeps the blizzards bonded together without his influence may b blizzards will fall apart

Priya
She belongs to a very wealthy family of India and is childhood friend of Blizzards. especially close friend of Karan.She is the first one who he became really close friends with from childhood. She is Manyata's idol and the reason due to which she wants to enter the college. Priya is a very confident, bold and ambitious girl she wants to live a independent life.She shocked everyone by saying that she wants to give up her family heir and want to become a human right lawyer. She is very soft and kind towards Manyata. She wants her to be with Karan.

Nisha
Manyata's childhood friend. She has been with Manyata throughout her school days and she really cares about Manyata and is always there for her, gives her right advices whenever she needs her. She doesnt want anyone to hurt Manyata.

Maya
She is the owner of the sweet shop in which Manyata does a part time job to help out her father financially. She is a very kind lady. She has a habit of starting day dreaming & going into her past she likes to tell her experiences about her dates.

Simi
She is a new comer in college who becomes friend of Manyata.

Brij Raj
He is Manyata's father. He is poor. He does a job but salary is not good enough. He loves his whole family especially Manyata and is doing everything he can to fulfill her dream of studying in elite college "Broward college" and has always encouraged her to go for it despite being in a tight situation financially himself as he loves her very much.

Komal
She is Manyata's mother. She is very loving and caring mother. She loves her family very much

Rahul
Manyata's little brother whom she loves very much.

Unnati
She is Udays elder sister. She is very loving and caring and she truly loves her brother and is worried about him. She was the only one who took care of him when he was little as her mother didnt have time neither she cared about them. Uday is really attatched to her and misses her always calls her whenever he needs any kind of help. She usually flies back and visits him often to check if he is ok and always gives him the right advice.

Sonakshi Devi
Udays mother. currently running the Jiagarh group businesses. a very clever lady. Iron heart, does not believe in love and neither wants her children to fall in love. She likes dominating things wants to control her children life for the sake of business name
doesnt like to be defeated she is very proud, stubborn lady and likes everything going her way. and can do anything to get things working in her benefit

More characters will enter as story progresses will add them then😉😆

Do hit Like button if u Liked it😉😆
Plz do comment criticism is welcome as well... will b waiting for your comments cuz I love reading comments😆

Will add character's pictures later as well
Guyz need suggestion who should I choose for roles of Vicky,Sam, Simi, Nisha, Priya😆

PS: If u want me to pm u mention in ur comment plz

Okiii taking ur leave...Love ya all 🤗

Edited by CharmingAngel7 - 12 years ago

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

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Posted: 12 years ago

"INDEX"

Chapter # 1 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3195647/manveer-ff-destined-to-be-together-ch3-pg37?pn=14

Chapter # 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3195647/manveer-ff-destined-to-be-together-ch3-pg37?pn=24

Chapter # 3 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3195647/manveer-ff-destined-to-be-together-ch3-pg37

Edited by CharmingAngel7 - 12 years ago

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Riyu

@Devil.Gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

yayy mela tokken bhai bhi writer ban gaya awesome prologue tokken bhai⭐️manyta poor girl😆uday is rich arrogant ,playboy and bratty wow mela tokken bhai ne dil khush kar dia great start muje tu uday no 1 kamina chahiye🤣love story in collegedouble dhamaal😳

gr8 concept❤️

do continue soon👍🏼

for ur appreciation😳

Edited by smiley12 - 12 years ago

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Sonam

@-RK_Ki_Biwi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Fantastic Prologue n Character Sketch.😊

I know this FF gonna be one of the best FFs of DEK Forum n You r gonna be one of the great writers of this forum.

Best of luck Wish for your First Manveer FF.

pls try to update it ASAP.

Great job.👍🏼

Thanks Ria for the PM n Mehwish for the beautiful Prologue.

Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago

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roze Chaudhry

@Roze12

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res wish jaan acha sa comment krna ha lappy say abhi may cell say hn hehhhe han agar kisi ko anday tamatar marnay hoay tou mujay marna mere wish jaan ko nhn

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Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

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Posted: 12 years ago

Great Concept Wish

Looking froward to the Character sketch and 1st part

Cont Soon

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

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Posted: 12 years ago

its fantastic! i was reminded of the serial YMLH which used to air on sony some yrs ago...please PM me for the next part if u can...very interesting:)

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG wishy m so happy u r starting ff too i loved the prologue its awesome and the character sketch is briliant please please do c0ntinue my chamak chalo😉