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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks fiza to restarting this beautiful ff
awesome updt
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
welcum fiza...n tnx fr updating
Fabulous update
hope everything will be ok between mayur soon...luking forward

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Posted: 13 years ago
Edited my comment..😳
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PARDON ERRORS...THANKS ALOT FOR ALL BEAUTIFUL COMMENTS

Chapter: 27

Reaching Manchester he was siting in his hotel, trying to clam his nerves and handle him to make things good. For the first time in his life he was feeling nervous, lacking any kinda confidence in him..

Freshen up he though to have a tour around the city, more over to let himself get distracted with sumthing, the more he is siting with himself the more he was getting nervous thinking wht might be in store for him..

He was walking the road side..n it was slight drizzling, it was getting colder yet he was completely unknow to anything that was around him, he was all in his thoughts fining his way and making his mind prepared what he is gonna do when he will face her… strange it was he never though he have to prepare himself to talk to her…

Yet his step stop right on track, he was trying to looking through the curtains of rain drops, who has suddenly strt to pour down more… his eyes were stuck n his breath stoped..

Nupur.. his breath can only collect to whisperer her name, felt so alien yet so much his… she she ..she was standing a little far away from him, and he was just looking at her, beliving his destiny that he in his lifetime is able to see her gaain… his lipes curve slightly he looked up to lord with mosit eyes n than back at her.. the moment for him was huge, larger than any reality ..

When she wasn't around him, he never thought facing him can make everything inside him so clam, at peace…the satisfaction he was hunting from so many days he found right there, right here… he giggled abit.. he found her.. right there…

The next moment he felt sumthing hiting his legs, breaking his moment of achievement…

Watch it dude, where are u standing…

He looked at the boy who shouted from the car, and than realize..admireing her when he came in the middle of the road he even didn't knew, his love was standing right there how cum his feet will not automatically walk towards her..he raise his hand in sorry and than move abit back to give space…

But than as soon as his eeys fall on back on her , sumthing burned inside him again… he saw sumone chukling with her.. and she too smiling with him, the little boy of that man making her laugh on sumthing… and than the man open the door of his car and she sat there..

Sumthing burned inside him, wht the…wht if she has …shut up mayank u cant do it again.. n u know she cant do it..n even if she has ..even than it wont change wht u have came here for….wont change the way u feel for her..she too has her life… and she too can make her choise..

Yet what pained more that she was gone. The moment ended and he is still standing there alone, n maybe will always remain such, yet facing her n seeing her already given him so much peace and if he will confess all what he has in his heart he knew he will feel more better… than whatever she wants she can do with him..he was n is all hers….

With the beautiful feeling engulfing inside him he went back to his hotel, and impatiently waiting for 2morow, to make her know he is there..

……………..

He entered the building collect all the courage, he is expecting all, a slap on his face, gr8 humiliation, or maybe a confrontation…. What so ever yet he is prepared…

Reaching the office he told the receptionist about him and she inform Gunjan about his arrival

Gujan: good morning Mr Sharma… he is Mike and he will be the co oridating u all about the work here, I hope u feel good here..

Mayank: thank u…

He was a bit disappointed as he thought he might be working with her, and even if not why the hell he can see her anywhere all around….

Mike: hey Sharma..

Mayank: u can call me mayank…

Mike: sure… so let me introduce to the people of ur concern here and than we will meet our head of the team..

Mayank: sure… now thts wht he wanted … sumwhere in the staff he will find her..

He introduced him with everyone yet still he cant see Nupur.. he was half mindedly walking around looking all over to see her….wht the hell it is…

Mike: lets go to meet the team leader..

He knocked on the door, yet mayank wasn't enjoying much attention his eyes were roaming around here n there to find her..

The door opend and nupur can clearly see him looking for sumone, she wasn't surprised with the fact, as she knew it tht he is joining them yet sumhwere it doesn't make any difference to her now.. the person she love doesn't exist any more and way back she has believed it…

Mike: common in….

Mayank looked at mike and than to the person siting in the office, who was looking straight at him, his breath stop right there and a slight smile appears at the corner of his lips… he was feeling his heart sinking..he was looking at her, so near so close to him..he has been thinking to meet her from so long and when the day has cum, he just cant believe it nor he knew wht he must do, he was just looking at her with all the affection admiration and longing..he was just simply looking at her..

Nupur: Mr. Sharam u might want to cum in….

Her cold voice n Mr sharma broke is thoughts… her voice was extremely cold exactly the way her eyes were, they were completely empty without any expression they hold for him..

Mayank: thanks… this was only words he can come upto right now…

Nupur: ur welcum…So Mr Sharma u will be working with mike I hope he has made everything clear to u… and hope tht u can bring the best of out of my team…

He was stunt the way she was saying everything without any hint of they even know each other, it was painful so so painful.. atleast if not warmth he was expecting yet she can just can call him with his name…

Mayank: u can call me mayank…Nupur.

Nupur: I prefer to maintain strict professional relationships at my office MR Sharma.. n will be appreciating that u to maintain such.. preferring my name as MS bhushan, as everyone calls me here…

This was it… it was hell .. he was looking at him as she don't know him at all, she even didn't want me to call by her name..

Mayank: I am sorry I will maintain it…

Nupur: better.. so u can proceed to ur work now..any problem pls feel free to ask… I m right here.. best of luck Mr Sharma.. mike he is guest pls take care of him…

Mike: sure ma'am.

Mayank: thanku…

With that he came out of her office to his office.. n sat on the chair digging his head in his hand,..

He actually cnt define wht he was feeling right now, he actually cant ..he was feeling patterns made by dagger on his heart on his soul..he cant believe this he just cant believe this….

Why wht do u accepted she will throw u in ur arms and will say finally sweetheart ur back..

Ya ur right.. yet even I donot excepted such.. or I did yet when it has came infront to of me I just cant take it, I never can think she all around me and tht so indifferent ..i just cant imagine it I cant… its hell..i just cant take it…just cant..

U have to talk to her..

I know firstly I have to get involve in this project and than will find ways to talk here.. if it will not work I will talk her personally ….

That's more likely…. U need to be strong to face her… ur facing a person who is so well to maintain the shell

Ya I know that but this time its isn't just a shell, it appears sumthing else..seems like she is over me…seriously over me..

Do u believe in it…

Sigh no ..i don't… I know one thing cant change …just cant change… she loves me..and even if she is over me, I m not here to woaa her ..i m here to make her know that I m guilty n here infront of her …

Calling mike and getting known with his working details he was into his work and want to make it completely flaw less…he knew how she is with work..

A day pass and no progress at all, he was findings ways to talk to her, yet she wasn't giving any, she was half day away for a meeting and so this day was a complete waste ..dam….


Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wooo awsm update fiza but too short Nupur is angry and her all anger is jstfdd just
wanna knw how Mr. Sharma is gng to woo MS bhushab :)

thanxx fr pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome update API

loved it lodsss

Beautifully written

loved it to d coreee

Gosh!!!! heart wrenching update API...

bt yet i think that was expected...
bt i loved it sooo much...
u way u write everything was just mind blowing n Awesome...Sigh!
i loved it to BITS...
That was just sooo superb!!!!!!
God!!! Nupur was actually stiff...
i loved it lodsss...
n that person was Samrat wid his son...i know...
loved it to d coreee
love u lodsss Api...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
beautifully written fiza
nupur behaviour are really close to reality if that much pain suffer by a normal person he would bahave same
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Posted: 13 years ago
Osum update... Mayank k liye sahi hain use b pta chle how it feels...luved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome...

part...
hope mayank could get his love back

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