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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Aww that was a cute update Shanavi...loved AnSh interaction!! 😳
Pls. continue soon. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Nice šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ Please continue as soon as possible!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Part-9

Shiv and Anandi leaving the place… While crossing some rock both slipped to fall… but their hands holded each other…(Shiv's right hand with Anandi's left hand)… They balanced each other… They walked and reached near the jeep… Shiv move to sit in the jeep then only he notices that he is holding Anandi's hands… he viewed their hands with their engagement rings too… They both stares at each other… Then breaks the eyelock and moved from that place… While returning home Shiv was thinking about Anandi's word "What will happen for me if you are with me… I am alright"… Anandi's voice filled his ears…

Three days rollover with their usual office works…

Anandi reaches Collector office and enters Shiv's room… Meanwhile Shiv's phone rings… Shiv smiles at Anandi and attends the phone… It was Doctor who attended that girl Suji's operation… Shiv asks "Is anything serious… how is that girl now..??" Doctor replies " She is alright now… But she need to take some scan now… for that you need to take her to Mumbai…" Shiv says "Mumbai sure… her parents know this..??" Doctor replies " Yes they know but I think they are not that much wealth to take her to Mumbai for her medical check up… So only I telling this to you…" he gets what Doctor is saying… and replies " Ok Doctor I will take her for the check up…" he cuts the phone…

Anandi asks "What happen is every thing alright..??" Shiv replies "Everything alright… now we need to take her to Mumbai for some medical check up and for some scan…" Anandi ask "When we need to go??" Shiv says "Shall we go tomorrow… Is it possible.??" Anandi replies "Sure…" Shiv asks her "Then for what you came here…?" She gives some file and they discuss about the canal project…

Next day…

Anandi standing in suji's home and Shiv arrives there… Suji's parents thanked Shiv and Anandi for the help… Anandi says "No need of thanks… we will take her Mumbai and will back by today night…" Shiv also accept Anandi's word and they both leave the place…

In Mumbai…

Anandi, Shiv and Suji enters the hospital… They enters Dr.Sharma 's room… Dr.Sharma welcomes them… Dr.Sharma says "Dr.Prathap said about the girl's condition… She need to have some scan because her head has been injured so only…" Shiv and Anandi nodded for scan… Anandi provides the medical report of Suji to Dr.Sharma… Nurse enter the room… Dr.Sharma ask her to took Suji to take scan… The girl fears and holds Anandi's hand… Nurse request Anandi to come with him… Anandi sees Shiv and excuses… Shiv smiles and say "You take care… I will wait…" Both leaves the room…

Shiv sits on the chair out of the room… Anandi went with the girl…

A lady comes with less conscious and walks like she is to fell down… Shiv notices this and move near her… Suddenly that lady is to fell Shiv rushes and hold her… Shiv asks "Are you ok..??" Shiv makes her to sit… He calls a nurse and let her to checkup room… A Doctor checks that lady and ask her " In this condition.. Why are you roaming… you need a rest…" Shiv enquires about her condition infront of that lady… Doctor says "She is pregnant… So what she is feeling like this…" Doctor prescribes some medicine to that lady and she leaves…

Shiv asks that lady " For what purpose you came here… May I help you in anyways…" That lady replies with lot of angry " I came here for abortion… But this Doctor prescribing me for being good…" Shiv was confused… A nurse inside that room listens their conversation… Shiv ask that lady "Who are you..?? Why are you to do this…?"

The lady intro herself… " I am Dr.Gauri… working in SNG hospital at Mumbai…" Shiv asks "Being a Doctor how could you do this… If you don't mind.. you can say to me…" Gauri says "I know you very well… you are the collector of jetsar right…!" Shiv nodes his head… and ask "What happen to do this…"

The nurse inside the room leaves the place…

Gauri says "My husband left me few days before… now I am pregnant… While leaving me My husband said that he didn't have any relation with me… then what is the need for this baby… I don't want anything of my husband's with me…" Shiv listens to his words and says " I can understand you are in angry now…But did you notice that you are still mentioning him as your husband…" Gauri notices it…

Shiv advices her "If you do this really it will make the distance larger between you and your husband…" Gauri says " You know very well about him… he is short tempered person… he never thinks what is right what is wrong… " Shiv asks her "Did I know him.??" She replies " yes! Do you remember on that day for misbehaving in public at jaipur… you let him to jail…" Shiv was shocked… he asks " Are you JagdishSingh's wife…??" Gauri says "Yes!! I am his only wife now…"

Shiv was still in shock…

Anandi came out with Suji and make her to sit in the chair kept in out of the Doctor's room… They both wait for the scan report…

Two nurses stand near them and had a converse… Nurse1 says "Do you know what?? A lady being Doctor came here for abortion…" Nurse2 asks "What.?? Who is that lady.." Nurse1 replies " It is Dr.Gauri working SNG hospital…" Anandi got shocked and ask that nurse "About which Dr.Gauri you are talking…?" Nurse1 replies "Dr.GauriJagdishSingh…" Anandi cames to know that Gauri was pregnant and she is to abort the child… She enquires about where she was admitted and goes there…

Anandi opens the door and she notices Shiv sitting infront of Gauri and Gauri sitting in the bed…

She slowly moves inside and sees Shiv… Shiv gave him a terrible smile… Gauri asks her "For what you came here… Who said to come here… " Anandi says "Now only I came to know about your condition by a nurse…" Gauri turns her face opposite side… Anandi tries to says some thing but Shiv stops her by holding her hand…

Precap: Anandi feeling sad... Shiv and Suji trying to make her smile…


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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Gr8 update Shanavi! šŸ‘
I like Gauri's intro...eager to see how this develops!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Part-10

Anandi tries to says some thing but Shiv stops her by holding her hand… But Anandi refuses it and goes near Gauri…Anandi says "After lot of problems.. your are entering a new life… you are going to be mother…" Anandi smiles…

Gauri stands up fastly from the bed and moves out the bed… She asks Anandi " New life.?? Yes exactly new life only… Without anyone… me alone… going to a new life…!!" She continues "Because of you I lost my bright life in childhood… Now Jagat left me alone and at this moment I cant be happy because I am going to be a mother...I am alone… I am in dark… Because of whom… only you… you are the only reason…" Anandi and Shiv gets Shocked…

Gauri yells at Anandi…(I don't want the same bakwaas again… So I am skipping it…)

Anandi shouts "Stop it…" Shiv holds her shoulder and stops her… Anandi sees Shiv… Shiv nodes his head not to say anymore… Anandi cries… Shiv says Anandi to go out… Anandi refuses but he force her to go…

Anandi moves out by seeing Gauri… Shiv move near Gauri… Gauri turn and sees Shiv…

Shiv says to Gauri " Gauriji.!! I am sorry to say this… But saying this only for your good… Don't do and also don't try to do this again… Who knows may be this Baby may make your breaks clear… and makes you closer… If your husband that is Jagya cames to know about his baby… surely he will feel for it… I know that you have already attempt a miscarriage… This is God's gift giving you another chance for your happiness… Try to realize your mistake…"

Gauri's eyes filled with tears… Shiv continues " I can feel your pain but more than you Anandi has felt lot of pain… I don't know why.? Still you are not realizing Anandi is not in your life… Each and everything happened in your life.. Is happened in presence of you… Then how can you blame others… "Shiv with little anger says to Gauri " If anyother person had yelled at Anandi I will never leave them… because of you I am talking this much calm…"

Shiv sees Gauri with a polite look… He continues…"The greatest happiness of girl in life is going to be a mother for a child… don't miss it because of your ego… Think and take a decision…Life is yours… decision also yours…" Shiv moves out of that room…

Gauri was stunned with Shiv's words she remembers each and every word of Shiv…

Gauri sit in the bed and thinks every incident that she had blamed Anandi and her family for every mistake… She feels like to shout and she cries hardly…

Shiv comes out and see Anandi was sitting in the chair… Shiv sits near her and holds her hand… Anandi cries and falls on his shoulder… after a couple of minutes Suji arrives there…Both sees her…

Suji comes near they both and hold their hands… Shiv smiles at her… They three went to Dr.Sharma's room…

Dr.Sharma says "Suji's head injure is recovering soon… no worries… but don't make her over emotion…" They got the doctor's advice and leave the hospital…

Its late afternoon… They went for a restaurant…

Anandi and Shiv sit together… Suji sit infront of them… Shiv ordered some dishes…

Anandi was still in mood out… Shiv ask suji in eyes to make her smile with some hand actions… Suji winks at him…

Suji asks seeing both of them "Are you going to marry…?" Anandi breaks her moodout and gave a confused look… Shiv asks "why are you asking like this..?" Suji asks them "Seeing you both its not looking like that.." meanwhile suji picks Shiv's cheek and says "Collector sahib you are looking so smart…" Anandi shocked of suji's words… she sees Shiv with anger look… Shiv lies his face down and sees Suji and says to continue…

Suji continues… "Anandi jiji if you are not interested in marrying him means tell to me… I will marry him…" Anandi cant control herself and says "Oh its fair… Are you going to marry him… ok marry him…" She sees Shiv with a naughty smile… Shiv says "Suji… You going to marry me… Why this decision…" Suji replies "Look at me I am happy with you… I am smiling always when you are with me… see Anandi jiji's face…" Shiv sees her… Anandi was little possessive with suji's word…

Make Anandi to break out from upset… Shiv replies "yes you are right… I want ever smiling girl as my wife… So Sure I will marry you… But there is more age difference right!!! " He winked… Suji says " I too feeling for that only… If I have born few years before itself means then I would have the chance to marry you…" Anandi was shocked… Shiv laughs at her…

Suji asks Shiv to come near her… Anandi confused and turn towards they both… Shiv move towards Suji and asks "What dear!! You want anything…?" Anandi's eyes keenly notices them…

Suji ask him "Are you drinking Complan daily..???" Anandi breaks her silence with little smile… Shiv ask "Why are you asking this?" Suji sits comfortably and says "Then what.!!! grown as palm tree…" Shiv was blushed… Suji continues "There is a limit… this much means If I marry you means it will look like… A zebra standing near a giraffe… So I cant hear these comments and all…" Anandi breaks her entire silence and laughed hardly…

Suji says "Oh my god… To get this valuable smile… What and all we have to do…" Anandi came to know that they both did this to make her laugh… Suji says "Ok you itself marry him… But onething take care of him…" Anandi nodded her head and says "Ok my Sasuma surely I will take care of him…" Shiv sees Anandi and says "Please Anandi be like this always…"

Anandi smiles and says "I promise you... As today I will be happy like this always…"

Precap: Anandi saying about Gauri's pregnancy to Jagya…

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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awww such a cute update Shanavi, you have put a big smile on my face! 😃
šŸ¤— Thank you and pls continue soon! šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

This is just tooo much of Shiv, how can someone b so sweet and kind...Gauri said such harsh things to Anandi and yet he was so sweet to her. He even is taking care of J and G's future to bring them together...Y r u so adorable and at the same time kind hearted SHIV. JUST LUV SHIV...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Kurup

This is just tooo much of Shiv, how can someone b so sweet and kind...Gauri said such harsh things to Anandi and yet he was so sweet to her. He even is taking care of J and G's future to bring them together...Y r u so adorable and at the same time kind hearted SHIV. JUST LUV SHIV...



I didnt mean to show Shiv so sweet and caring...We know his character well and me watching his character keenly in daily epics... Even he may allow Anandi to ask questions but he didnt... At the moment of time(in my OS) he wants Gauri to come out of the decision that she want to abort her child... So what i made it like this... But no one can be so silent if they blame on our loved once... But you can wait for my upcoming part... Surely you will see the expected Shiv there...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: shanavi

I like Shiv to be sweet but atleast not with J and G when they have humilated Anandi, otherwise its a treat to watch Sweet Shiv infact sweetest than honey. No offence to ur writing or to any characters, just my POV>

I didnt mean to show Shiv so sweet and caring...We know his character well and me watching his character keenly in daily epics... Even he may allow Anandi to ask questions but he didnt... At the moment of time(in my OS) he wants Gauri to come out of the decision that she want to abort her child... So what i made it like this... But no one can be so silent if they blame on our loved once... But you can wait for my upcoming part... Surely you will see the expected Shiv there...

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