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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Vedo

šŸ‘ Nice update Shanavi, can't wait to see how you develop the story!

Do continue soon! šŸ˜‰




😲 What?! Hiding in the loo...really?? šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

Yes really dont judge lol work was boring and I was trying to kill time so I hid in the restroom...PLease continue soon and maybe this time I wont have to hide in the bathroom to read it on my phone lol šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Nice.. I liked the way Jagya is trying to redeem himself.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Part-6

Three of them leave the school together… Shiv asked them "Shall I leave you in haveli.??" They accepts it and these three went to haveli… While reaching haveli Jagya's phone rings… Jagya says "Its an unknown number .. Shiv and Anandi sees it…

Jagya attends it and speaks " Hello, who is this??? " It was Gauri's mom… Jagya yells at him "What is the need to talk to me now.?? Is there any thing left out to blame me…!!! I am not going to listen anything… Don't call me again…" He didn't give a chance to gauri's mom to talk and cuts the phone call…

Anandi asks "Jagya… is everything alright???" Jagya replies "Nothing important… You don't worry…!!" Shiv asks him " No problem… you can share with us…" Jagya says "No problem you guys don't worry…" Shiv says "Then your wish…" Anandi says "Bye Shiv will meet you tomorrow.!!!" Jagya also says bye and they both leaved…

Shiv while returning home thinks of Jagya and says "This guy was good… only thing to do is show him a right way to go… Will think for him… Which makes him a good person also makes Anandi happy and not to feel bad for him…"

In haveli at night…

Anandi was reading some files and Jagya enters her room… Anandi sees him and ask him to sit… Jagya sits near to her… Jagya asks her "What are you doing??? May I help you anymore??" Anandi replies "No need jagya all work over just want to verify it again…!!" Jagya says "Anandi are you happy today??" Anandi replies "Yes Jagya I am so happy today because of you and Shiv…"

Jagya asks "Because of Shiv?? Why??" Anandi replies "Yes Jagya because of Shiv also I am happy… Because after a lot of pain I feel comfortable with him, he always try to make me happy… also he never wants me as a person who needs other's sympathy… He is helping me in all my needs…" Jagya says "So what you like him???" Anandi sees him and says "Not only for that l like him…" She tries to say something but Gehena calls her… Anandi excuses him and leaves the place…

Jagya takes the files and he reads it… Suddenly a paper fells down… Jagya takes it and read it… It was Shiv's letter to Anandi… He reads each and every line and he thinks "Really Shiv, on that day I thought the family belongs to me, Anandi and the whole village people gave my place to you… But really you are the correct person for Anandi…"

In Shiv's circuit house,

Shiv was thinking about Jagya and Mahi enters the room… Mahi asks Shiv "What happen bhaiya why you are so upset and thinking something else..???" Shiv says about the present situation… Mahi says "An idea bhaiya.!!" Shiv with lots of excitement " What?? " Mahi says "Bhaiya you said that he has completed his M.B.B.S but not his M.S… Why cant you help him to continue his studies…" Shiv says "It was a good idea but how??? "

Mahi says "Simple.!! just encourage him with his current studies… then automatically he will realize about continuing his studies…" Shiv says "Great!! Will do it tomorrow itself… Thanks a lot Mahi…" Mahi replies "Sorry bhaiya I didn't did it for you… only for bhabhi's happiness…" Shiv says " Oh ok me too need the same…"

Next day morning…

Shiv wents to haveli… Jagya sees him and smiles at him… Shiv and Jagya had a hand shake... Anandi and DS comes down by talking something… DS notices Shiv and Jagya both talking and surprises to see this and ask Anandi about this… Anandi explains all the incident… DS was so happy of hearing and came down…

Shiv gets Ashirvad from DS and all sits together… Anandi and Shiv smiles at each other… Shiv says "DS rainy season starts so it is must to check the health condition of the village people so that we can prevent from diseases affects during rainy seasons…" Anandi interprets and say "Yes you are right why not we have a medical camp on our village..??"

Jagya says "Nice idea I can also help you right…" To encourage him Shiv says "That's so nice of you… Also I came to know that you have completed your M.B.B.S… so that you can also help us…" Jagya was happy to hear this and says "Its my pleasure…"Shiv says that "I will talk to the hospital staff about this and convey the news soon…" He leaves the place…

DS says "Very sweet of Shiv always thinking about others happiness…" Jagya says "Yes Dadisa you are right I never met a person like him…" Anandi was superexcited to hear it…

Anandi going to school her phone rings… It was Shiv…

Anandi attends it… Shiv says "Anandiji where are you right now.?? Can I meet you now..??" Anandi replies "I am going to school now… will meet you at evening… or Is there anything important??" Shiv says "Nothing… want to speak something about Jagya…" Anandi gets shocked "What happen???" Shiv says "Nothing serious… I will talk to you in evening…" he cuts the phone… But Anandi was still in confusion…

In evening Anandi and Shiv meet at School…

Shiv says the Idea given my Mahi and he says "I just want Jagya to be complete person… On school inspection day he was like a person who was under someone's shelter… So only I thought of doing this…" Anandi was impressed of Shiv and says "Really you are so good… But how can we make him to do his M.S??"

Shiv says "Anandiji I can make him to try but how can I compule him… So now lets start to make him think then he itself understand the situation… And also my converse to hospital staff have been over… They also satisfied to make a medical camp here…" Anandi was very happy and smiles at him… Shiv makes the call to Jagya at that time and says about the camp…

Jagya also happy about it and he think of himself "After coming to my native I am getting back all I have lost… My family, My Anandi and a new friend who is thinking about my goodness… But will this village people accepts me back..??"

Precap: Jagya in medical camp… Jagya wins village people's heart… Shiv and Anandi's hug…

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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
great update
has jagya really changed?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

great update

has jagya really changed?



Trying to make him good... Because all of them started hating him...
so a little try of making him good... I have a belief in that also...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Nice update Shanavi! šŸ‘ šŸ‘
It's so good to see Jagya redeeming himself in this way!
Also AnSh support towards him is gr8!
Do continue soon! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Part-7

In night Jagya went to see Anandi… Anandi call him to come inside the room… Jagya says " I don't know whether the village people will accept me or not..??" 😭Anandi politely says "Don't worry jagya surely they will accept you… " Jagya gets phone from Shiv... They both converse about the medical camp…

On medical camp…

Shiv was busy with phone calls and conversation with Doctors who have came for that medical camp… Suddenly village people comes to Shiv and says "We are not going to attend this camp if this guy(Jagya) is here…" 😔Anandi hears it and asks "Why?? What is the reason??"

The head of the village people says " We cant be here because if we get checkup from him we will not be secure… but we will be affected from anyother disease…" Everyone yelled Jagya… Jagya was totally depressed… Shiv says them " No this is not fair… The person who had made mistake must get chance to correct it… If we didn't give him a chance then we are more rude than him…" Anandi accepts it and says " Yes apart from all his personal he is a good Doctor…" šŸ‘

Atlast Shiv and Anandi convince the village people… 😃They all accepted to attend the medical camp… Anandi goes with the village people and call Shiv to come… Shiv refuses and say "No I need to make a call immediately so I will join you later…" he moves from there and stands near his jeep…

Shiv was while talking in phone sees a student of Anandi coming far from there… That girl smiles at Shiv and he smiles back and say "Hi!!"😊 Anandi watches it from the tent placed for camp and she smiles by seeing Shiv and the girl talking in handshakes… šŸ˜†Shiv ask that girl to see back that something has fell down from her bag…" in handshake… After saying it he turn back and concentrate on the phone…

Suddenly a loud sound… All eyes notices toward the road… The little girl who have played with Shiv met an accidentā€¦šŸ˜²

Everyone rushes to there… Shiv hold that girl in his arm and callout her… Anandi also calls her but that girl didn't wake up… Jagya enters there and sees the girl and its bleeding lot from her headā€¦šŸ¤¢

Jagya tells Shiv "We want to admit her in hospital immediately so that we can save her…" Shiv leaves the girl to Jagya and rushes and brings his jeep…

Jagya hold that girl and a nurse who came for the medical camp sit near jagya , Anandi and Shiv in front… Before reaching the hospital the nurse and Jagya make some first aid for that girl to stop bleeding…

In hospital…

Jagya and Shiv take the girl into the hospital room… Shiv shouts "Doctor!!! Doctor!!!" A nurse comes and says "Doctor went for an emergency case for another hospital…" Shiv was in the edge of anger… 😔again he shouts "Is there any other Doctor here… a girl is in danger…Its an emergency…" A doctor comes there and says "Let the girl to admit in ICU…" the girl is taken into the ICU and there some checkups are going…

Shiv asks Anandi šŸ‘"Don't worry… Nothing will go wrong… you don't get tensed…" Anandi didn't get his words but she says 😭"Before some minute she played with you… in fraction of second everything changed…" Shiv got worried to see Anandi like this… Meanwhile village people also arrives and ask about the present conditions… Shiv explains them… Doctor comes out from the ICU and says "It is more necessary to do an operation for that girl… because it is bleeding severely… slowly the girl is missing her consciousness…" Shiv and Anandi says "You carry on for the operation how much it cost we will pay it…"

Doctor says "But there is two problem in itā€¦šŸ˜•" Jagya asks "What are they???" Doctor states "I cant handle the operation alone so I need a Doctor to co-ordinate with me… And..!!!" Shiv shouts "Then what say it soon…" Doctor says "The girl need blood now… But in our hospital the require blood is not there…"😔

Shiv asks for the blood group and Doctor says it… Shiv thinks for a mean time and excuses them… Anandi ask "Where are you going..???" Shiv says "Will be back soon..!!" 😊

Jagya says "If you don't mine I am also a doctor shall I co-ordinate with you…" Anandi also says "Yes he is a Doctor…Dr.JagdishSingh… He worked at Mumbai…" The doctor also nodded and they both getting ready for Operation…

Operation process starts…

Anandi signs the formality papers as the girl's guardian… Operation starts…

A nurse rush into the operation theatre with the blood bag…

All the village people standing outside the Operation Theatre(OT)… Anandi praying that "She(that girl) should be alright soon…" Meanwhile he search for Shiv and she called him… his phone ringing but his not attending…

Anandi has double fear now… One for The girl and One for Shivā€¦šŸ˜•

After few hours… Operation gets over… Doctor and Jagya comes out…Doctor announces that "The girl is out of her critical stage now… At the right time if you didn't admit her… Surely we cant save her… Thanks Dr.Jagdish.!!!šŸ˜› You also one of the reason… the girls is alive today…" Village people and Anandi are happy to hear it… Anandi says "Thank god…" She turn towards the people and says "See I have said know a person need a chance to correct his mistake…" Village people accepts her words and apologize to Jagyaā€¦šŸ‘

Jagya move towards Anandi and says " Behind everything in my life you are the starting Anandi… Thank you so much.." Anandi was still in fear… 😭Jagya notices it and asks her "What happen?? Why are you still tensed.??" Anandi says that "Shiv didn't come yet… not even attending the phone…" Jagya replies "Go to ward no:26 and see you will get the answer.." Anandi was shocked and asks "Why what happen???" Jagya says "You go and see…"😲

Anandi walks with lot of confusion and fear… She sees the board written "WARD:26"šŸ˜•ā€¦ She opens the door and see Shiv lying on the pillow sliding on the bed… Anandi fully shocked… She rushes inside and ask 😭"What happen?? Before some time you are alright only… suddenly what happen.???" She questions a lot… A nurse enters the room and says "First leave him a gap to say the answerā€¦šŸ˜‰" Anandi ask the nurse "What happen to him…??" Nurse says " An operation held for a girl now right… That girl also need blood for her operation right.???" Anandi says "Yes but what is the need of him to admit here…?" Nurse says "the girl operation is held at right because of him only… He only donated his blood for that girlā€¦šŸ‘" Anandi in full of tears in her eyesšŸ˜­šŸ˜­ā€¦ She sat near him… Seeing this the nurse leaves the room…

Anandi asks him "Thank you so much… I feared a lot you didn't attend my call… you didn't say where you was going… " Shiv replies "Already you was so tensed of the girl's condition If I say that I am going to donate blood then you will get fear again so only I didn't say anything to you…" Anandi asks "Then atleast you can attend my phone call right??" Shiv replies "My brilliant Sarpanchji.!!!šŸ˜‰ I am donating blood how can I attend your call…" Anandi smiles😊 and asks him naughtly "You didn't like injection.!!! I means you have fear of injection šŸ˜‰then how???" Shiv fells his face down and smiles with little shyā€¦šŸ˜³šŸ˜³

Anandi smiles and lies on his shoulderā€¦šŸ˜³šŸ˜³ Shiv was excited and surprised of Anandi's sudden surpriseā€¦šŸ˜›šŸ˜›

Shiv tries to hold her but he cant strain his hand because he had donated the bloodā€¦šŸ˜” But he use his another hand and hold herā€¦šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

Sorry guys I typed whatever my finger types.. so please excuse my mistakes…


Precap: Anandi And Shiv sitting together in a rock spot…

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweet update Shanavi!! I really like your storyline! 😃
Keep it up! šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Vedo

Sweet update Shanavi!! I really like your storyline! 😃
Keep it up! šŸ‘ šŸ‘


Thanks alot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Part-8

After few times spend over with there beautiful hug… The same nurse knocks the door… Anandi and shiv comes to the presence both embracced at each other… Anandi surprises herself and get ups from the bed… Nurse enters the room and come near Shiv… Shiv asks her "Shall I go out...?" Nurse says "Sure sir!.. but don't strain your hand more for few hours…" Shiv and Anandi comes out of the room… Shiv comes out by rubbing his hand in the place where they pinned the injection for blood donation with cotton…

Jagya comes infront of him… They both smiles and Jagya thank Shiv for donating blood for right time… Shiv says " I also one of the reason for this accident…" Both got shocked and Anandi asks "How.??" Shiv says "If I didn't played with her… she will be concentrate on her path… because of me she met an accident… I feel very guilty for that…" Jagya says "No its not your mistake… Actually its that drivers mistake who came very rude in the road…" Shiv was not satisfied with his words…

Anandi asks Jagya "Shall we see that girl now.??" Jagya says "Sure.. But she was still in unconscious now…" Shiv says "Whatever may be I need to see her now…" Three of them enter the room the girl was admitted… Shiv go near the girl… He remembers the sweet time they both played in handshake… His tears wakes up the girl…

The girls opens her eyes… Anandi and Jagya comes near the bed… Shiv was very happy to see her awake… That girl raises her towards Shiv… Shiv holds her hand… and says " Don't worry… you will be alright soon…" Jagya and Anandi watches it with lot of happiness and care… That girls holds Shiv's hand tightly and smiles at Shiv… There is nothing equal in the world to compensate that girl's innocent smile… Shiv was totally lost in that girl's smile…

Anandi watches it and touch Shiv's shoulder… Shiv comes to conscious and see they both… Shiv says " Ok shall we move…" While coming out of the room That girl's parents comes… They both thank these three guys…

Shiv took them to haveli in jeep… Jagya's thought is full on Shiv's attitude… He think by himself " For the Mistake which have been done without his interfere… He is feeling for that… But me??? Really You are Perfect Shiv…"

Shiv leaves them and return home…

In night…

Anandi took her phone and thought of calling to Shiv… She calls Shiv…

In Shiv's circuit home…

Before Anandi's call… Shiv's mom warns Shiv " Stay home tomorrow so that they can spend time with each other… After coming here you didn't spend a full day time with us…"

Shiv was to node his head phone rings… It was Anandi's call…

Whole Shekhar family is infront of Shiv… Shiv feels little shy to talk infront of them but he attends the call… Anandi says " Hello.!! Shiv.. Where are you now??" Shiv replies "I am in home… Why asking?? Is everything alright…?" Anandi tells " everything alright… nothing to fear… are you free tomorrow… Shall I meet you tomorrow..??" Shiv sees his entire family looking at him like a weapon pointed on target… he thinks "Oh my god!! What is this situation… Anandi calling me to meet him… which is never happened.!!! Here mom asking me to stay home… To whom I will say "YES"…"

Shiv's mom says "Don't worry my dear… say "YES" to Anandi itself…" Shiv was shocked and asks "How could you know that mom.??" Shiv's mom says "Its is clearly viewing in your face itself…" Shiv was embraced and says "YES I will meet you tomorrow…" to Anandi…

Anandi cuts the phone… She thinks "For what reason I need to meet him tomorrow… without knowing that I have called him to meet me…" She confuses himself and fells asleep…

Here Shiv was excited "For what Anandi has called me...??"

Next day…

Shiv got ready with tons of excitement… He moves towards his jeep… Whole family says him "All The Best Shiv!!!" Shiv stops and turns and see them as naughty child… He move towards them and get ashirvaad from all and says "Bye… Mom will come soon as possible…" he leaves the home…

Anandi walk on the way and think about Shiv's incident happened in her life(1st time resque sequence, helping her in stoping jyothi's child marriage, being with her in all of her happy and sad moment… ) Shiv saws her and stops the jeep… Anandi sees him and smiles at him… But she is still in confusion why she called shiv to meet..!!

They both went to the same place where Anandi ask Shiv to marry her…

They both sit together… Shiv in lots of excitement and Anandi in lot of confusion…

Shiv starts… "How is the girl now… Have you met her..??" Anandi feels comfortable now and replies "Yes She is ok now… after two days she will be discharged from hospital…" Shiv says "Its nice to hear…"

Shiv says "Anandiji..!! If you don't mine may I know for what you called me..??" Anandi notices that he calling him "Anandiji" She didn't replies just stares on Shiv… Shiv asks her.." Anandiji.!! Are you alright.??"

Anandi says "Its not fair… I don't like…" Shiv was in little confusion… he asks "What I did wrong… what you don't like…" Anandi replies " I came here to see "Shiv" not Collector Sahab…"(same as he mentioned for calling him collector sahib)

Shiv was still in confusion…

Anandi says " Collector Sahab you cant understand.??" Shiv identifies and says "You are mentioning that I was calling you "Anandiji" right..?" She smiles and nodes his head… Shiv says "I will mention "Anandi" while talking to others… but don't know why while seeing you it is automatically giving me a respect to call you like that…"

Anandi asks " If you call me "Anandiji" then I will again call you "Collector Sahab" then you wish…" Shiv stops and say " Ok Anandi(with little doubtful voice)…" Both smiles at each other…

Shiv ask Anandi "Anandi !! do you know there is a person in the world who I have afraid a lot…" Anandi asks "Who is that person.??" Shiv says in mischievious tone "Its you only…" Anandi gives a questioned look… Shiv continues…" Yes I have feel fear whenever I talk with you… If any words of me or action of me will affect you… some times I have feared for your look…" Anandi says "Really I cant understand… you are so sweet sometimes… sometimes looking so hard… sometimes acting like a kid…"

Shiv stares at her and her words about him… They spend few hours there… While returning home… they both walked on the rock… Suddenly Anandi slips down Shiv holds her… Shiv says " Are you alright.??" Anandi says "Being with you what will happen for me..! I am alright.." Shiv was surprised…Very cute Eyelock and they both return home…

Precap: Intro of Gauri to Shiv… Anandi cames to know about Gauri's pregnancy…

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