OS-Anandi's new life(part-10, pg-6)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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We all know the future going to happen in life of Anandi will be symbolically comes in her dream same like I hope she will have a dream like this again now'

Same sea shore jagya standing infront of Anandi' Anandi is in bride costume'

Jagya apologize Anandi that "I am sorry Anandi I have did everything wrong now I have realize all my mistake please accept me'"(Anandi was shocked)

She walks towards Jagya to talk but something stops her' She turns and sees there is a pink duppatta which is noded between Shiv and Anandi' Shiv smiles at her'Anandi wonders and sees her neck with "Mangalsutra" and her forehead is filled with "Sindoor" Jagya again apologize her but Shiv comes near her and hold her hand with him and leaves the place' Anandi goes with Shiv by seeing Jagya'

"WHAT WILL BE ANANDI'S DECISION'.????"


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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏 Nice but tooo short yaar...you have to continue! Plsss! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting dream, but I would like to see Anandi going towards Shiv and them walking away. I want her to choose Shiv over Jagya because she realizes that Shiv is a great person...and not just because she's already engaged or because of her mother's last wish.

You should continue!! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-2 Continue of the dream...

Anandi use to confuse her by the dream... In haveli, Jagya came to her and ask " how are you? "

( she didnt talk to him from her sagai)

She replies with a sad look " Fine "... Jagya expected that she will ask the same to him but not...

Day fully she wondered about the dream... First time she saw the dream with Shiv that he came to hold her hand but now Jagya came back in his life... "What will happen next...??" She had doubt on herself...

Way to the collector office she was walking meanwhile Shiv comes there in his jeep...

Shiv: "Anandiji.. where are you going?? shall i drop you?? "
A: "no i can manage myself!!" (shiv notices she was not comfort with her and not to leave her..)

S: "Please dont mistake me of asking again come with me.. me too going to office only..."
A: " Ok" (She nodes her head and get into the jeep)

They both have some professional conversation...
But Shiv notices her she was not in the mood of converse...

S: Anandiji are you ok??? why u r so dull and unrest today??? any problem in home??
A: nothing just feeling not well...
(Shiv was so scared)

Immediately Shiv ask her " Shall i take you to hospital or shall we go back to haveli...??" (with more care..)
Anandi replies with a tensed manner "No no need leave it.." She excuses herself and leave the place... Shiv follows her and ask her as permission "Shall i leave in home..?"(Anandi nodes her head and leave with him)

In haveli, Shiv and Anandi enters the room Jagya sitting in the sofa shocked to see both together...
(flashback of jaipur fight scene)But he consoles himself and give a smile and ask " What happen now only you went came back soon.." Shiv gently replies "She was not well so only came back.."

Jagya gives a evil look to Shiv and calls DS..
DS arrives and thanks Shiv... Shiv replies "Its my duty to take care of Anandi..."

In night... Anandi sitting in her bed and thinking about the dream...

Jagya enter her room..(without knocking the door) and come near Anandi and ask her " Shall I ask you something..?" Anandi replies "ya tell..!" J asks " Are you fully satisfied with this marriage...??" Anandi shocked and gets up from the bed...

Anandi "What is the use for u to ask this question..?" to Jagya..
Jagya replies " No u r looking so restless till i seeing u so only.."

Anandi replies " I am not feeling well please leave me alone..."
Jagya silently leave the room..( with his evil look he sees anandi and says to himself how could you marry that collector... surely there must some heavy reason... I will get it out...)

Anandi lies in the bed and falls asleep...

Dream...

Same sea shore jagya standing infront of Anandi' Anandi is in bride costume'

Jagya apologize Anandi that "I am sorry Anandi I have did everything wrong now I have realize all my mistake please accept me'"(Anandi was shocked)

She walks towards Jagya to talk but something stops her' She turns and sees there is a pink duppatta which is noded between Shiv and Anandi' Shiv smiles at her'Anandi wonders and sees her neck with "Mangalsutra" and her forehead is filled with "Sindoor" Jagya again apologize her...

But this time Anandi speak out to Jagya...


I cant Jagya i cant give u another chance... If i accepts ur sorry means i am the biggest fool in the world... Because of u i lost my entire life...
without any mistake i have suffered from pain... I have forgive everything for you my dream,my love, my peace everything...
i dont have anything more to lost for you...

I tried to live a new life entirely change from my past but in each every moment of my life you were there...

What are gifts you gave to me think jagya... for my dream you gave lifelong pain by marrying Gauri... my love you gave me caption that I have killed your Child... My sacrifice you gave a lifetime great gift "Divorce"... Then how can I give you a chance...

What is the neccessary to explain you who cant understand the meaning of LOVE...

If you want to know learn it from Shiv... Who waited for me although i was not ready to have a fulfilled life with him...
I wont do that mistake by comparing you and Shiv... Never you cant be his comparer...

I please you Jagya "LEAVE MY LIFE... DONT FOLLOW IT"

She goes near Shiv and hold his hand Shiv also holds her hand tightly and smiles and Jagya... Anandi asks Shiv " Let you go I will follow you hereafter my each and every moment follows you..." But Shiv refuses and says " No be same level to each other and holds her shoulder and they both moves...

Jagya shouts... "Anandi you cant do this for me..."

Anandi wakes ups... then realise it was a dream...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gud one...Keep writing more...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice part!! 👏
Jagya totally got what he deserved!! 😛
And love that Shiv told Anandi he wants them to be equals! 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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part-3 Shiv's feeling towards Anandi

It was evening in haveli,anandi was searching for some letter of her school registration... Her cell rings it was Shiv's mom calling her to had dinner in their home tonight..😊 But Anandi refuses because after sagai she cant come to their home like that... But she compules her... in the other side Shiv standing near her mom and ask her to "Strictly ask her to come please " 😉Anandi replies "I will ask DS and say you" she cuts the call...

She talks to herself "Why no one understanding her situation.." She says the thing to DS and says "I was not interested in going please DS you itself tell them.."
But DS itself ask her to go... She was not at all satisfied and wonders among everyone...😡

Night in Shiv's circuit house...,

Everyone expecting of anandi's arrival...⭐️ Then Anandi's jeep comes there... Shiv was total excited to see her... Anandi comes there in "Cute orange color" dress... She enters the house Dadu welcomes her and receives her...👏 Anandi says "DS and Papusa have some work so they didnt come with me.." Shiv's mom comes and says "We invited our future Bahu only for the dinner.." (with a kid smile) Anandi was totally excited why they are behaving like this...

Night dinner ready...

All are in the upstairs getting ready for the dinner... Chotima comes with Anandi... Anandi was surprised there was a grand dinner arrangement...😲 Shiv and his dad welcomes all to have dinner... Anandi was little uncomfortable with her presence first time with the entire family... Shiv notices it and thinks by himself "before leaving from here today really you feel comfortable anandi..."

They started their dinner Anandi was still uncomfortable with them...Dadu notices this and asks Anandi " Why are you so silent today...dont think this as a guest dinner just think this is also your family... I will help you how to handle your relatives in this family... (he starts his speech)

😛1st My son your sasurji think him as your best friend...He is there to help u in any sequence... Anandi smiles at Shiv's Dad and think him as his papusa... (Shiv was starring on Anandi's smile..)😳😳

😛Dadu continues " 2nd ur sasuma think her as ur girl friend because only age difference but she is still young as you in her hearts..." Shiv's mom excuses Dadu and ask "What is your age papaji?? " Dadu replies with kid look "Its always 25"

Anandi suddenly says " ya its true your speech is like a experienced gentle man but behaviour is like a teen age guy.. On that day so what you gave the flowers to Dadisa right??"😉😉 Dadu corrects his voice by coughing and say " Its just as a friend dont mistake it..."(Every one laugh that today anandi had kidded Dadu itself... Shiv was totally impressed of seeing Anandi's smile)😆😆

😕Dadu ask Anandi "No cross questions I am helping you only ok..." (with his military talk) Anandi nodes her head and listens to Dadu...

He continues " next yours choti sasuma think her as your mother... Chotima's face changes... Anandi watch it and asks "Sorry Daduji why like that..?" Dadu replies " He is the one in our family who think for others happiness... this charactership always will be in every mom's character..." Shiv interrupts and says "Yes more than my mom my chotima only cares me alot and think of my happiness not only me for everyone in the home..."

Anandi sees chotima and says " shall i call you as "Maa" ??" Everyone sees anandi a excited look chotima keeps her hand on anandi's head and says "No problem dear you may call..."

Dadu asks " All your centiment😭 scene over shall I continue..?" Anandi says "Then whoever is there to tell..?" Shiv was shocked and says to Anandi that "I too in this family only..!!!" (like a kid) Anandi fells her face down and smiles..

Dadu says " How could you forget him... ya My family's special Gift..." Anandi starres at Shiv...(Shiv feels little Shy) Dadu continues "Dont worry Anandi you just think as a Student in your school..." Everyone shocks and laughs at shiv... Anandi asks " Why like that??" Dadu replies " yes he is like child only... But matured child..." Shiv smiles like a child and sees her mom... Shiv's mom " Papaji you are right he is a matured child..." 😃She see towards Anandi and says " After marriage you have to take care of this child..." Anandi shys and nodes her head...

Shiv's Dad says "It was nice climate today... and very happy with all are together..." Everyone accepts it... Chotima asks Shiv "Shiv we have accepted your marriage..! But still you didnt explain anything about the character you have impressed about anandi...???" Shiv replies "😳😳 I have already said right you have not seen the anandi who i have impressed it cant be understand if i say also..."

Dadu asks "then dont want to say... you sing about her we all listen it..." Shiv was shocked and asks Dadu " 😲what?? i need to sing?? no way now only dad says all are happy then this mysterious try is not good Dadu..."(with a shy smile)

Chotima asks again "No shiv today you want to do it... Not only for us for Anandi too... She also want to know that why she was your choice..."

Musics at the background ...( Tujh mein Rab dikhta hai from Rab ne bana di jodi..)

Shiv starts sings by walking in the stairs... "tu hi to jannat meri, tu hi mera junun tu hi to mannat meri, tu hi ruh ka sukun tu hi ankhiyo ki thandak, tu hi dil ki hai dastak aur kuchh na janu main, bas itna hi jaanu..."

By singing these lines all stands and walk behind him... Anandi was surprised of shiv...⭐️⭐️

" tujhame rab dikhta hai, yaara main kya karu
sajde sar jhukta hai, yaara main kya karu "

Shiv comes to the garden and smiles at the flowers...😊

" kaisi hai yeh duri, kaisi majburi
maine najaron se tujhe chhu liya "

Every one excited in shiv's attitude totally different from his normal behaviour...😳😳

Shiv comes near Anandi and sings...

" kabhi teri khushbu, kabhi teri baatein
bin maange yeh jahan pa liya
tu hi dil ki hai raunak, tu hi janmo ki daulat
aur kuchh na janu, bas itna hi janu..
tujhame rab dikhta hai, yaara main kya karu... "
he moves from her and goes to grassland and starts dancing...

😳oh my god seein shiv's dance rain comes...😳

Meanwhile Shiv held her hand to anandi to hold...
Anandi also holds his hand go with him they both dances in rain...😊😊

"vasdi vasdi vasdi, dil di dil vich vaasdi
nasdi nasdi nasdi, dil ro ve the naasdi
rab ne bana di jodi haay...
vasdi vasdi vasdi, dil di dil vich vaasdi
nasdi nasdi nasdi, dil ro ve the naasdi.."

Shiv sees anandi and sings...

" chham chham aaye, mujhe tarsaaye
tera saaya chhed ke chumata
o o tu jo muskaaye tu jo sharmaaye
jaise mera hai khuda jhumta " Anandi listens by starring at him in the rain...

Shiv holds his face and goes close to her 😳😳and sings..
" tu hi meri hai barkat, tu hi meri ibaadat
aur kuchh na janu, bas itna hi janu
tujhame rab dikhta hai, yaara main kya karu..."

All was embrassed by seeing Shiv behaving like this... song ends...

All calls "Shiv...come on all over dear.."

Then only Shiv realises it was just a dream then he sees Anandi standing near her chotima...

Chotima rushes to the room and get the towel and ask to sit and they blushes his wet hair...

Anandi smiles at all and says to Dadu.. "You said all is true Dadu really all the character you explained is true in front of me..."
Dadu says..." then no worries anandi this is the new world you going to live..."

Anandi was lost in Dadu's word and sees the time and says "Oh my god its too late need to go home back.." Shiv's mom asks shiv to leave her in home... Shiv nodes his head and they both leave...

In the jeep while driving... Shiv ask her "Are you happy today?? " Anandi replies "Yes i am happy today after a long ago i happy today just forget all my past and have been in the new world today..!(with lost of mind) Shiv smiles and think in his mind "Yes anandi thats what i need from you... surely you will deserve this happiest life..."

Precap: Shiv was angry with Anandi...

(Please leave your comments..)
Edited by shanavi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please continue soon I am so sad that all the authors of SS, FF, OS have stopped writting or updating I mean this is not fair. So please for the sake of you fans continue soon...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shanavi, what a cute part dear!! 👏 👏
Shiv singing that song to Anandi was too dreamy! 😳
Do continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-4

Shiv leaves Anandi in haveli... Shiv asks Anandi "Anything else to say??" 😛(with some expectation) Anandi replies " nothing " she says "Bye" and leaves there... Shiv was so sad 😭and he starts the jeep...

Anandi turns and says " forgot to say onething.." Shiv was superexcited 😃and Anandi replies with smile " Really you sing well... I like the song..." Shiv thanked her and think of himself "Surely you will realise the lines of the song which i sing..."

Shiv leaves and Anandi moves towards haveli...

DS and Bhairon was waiting for Anandi... Anandi enters DS asks her "Why late??" Bhairon also says "We all really feared of getting late... all right only there???" Anandi replies "Why DS you were so afraid when i was with "Collector Sahab" means...?? "😳😳 She surprises by herself that she feel that she was secured with Shiv...

Ds notices it and ask her to go to her room... Anandi leaves with surprise... Ds and Bhairon converse that "God had made this 4 month gap to know about each other to there self...👏👏Surely they both will understand each other and the marriage will make them more happier..."

Anandi entering her room Jagya stops her and ask "Where you went i searched for you...😕 too late night where you were..???" he starts of questioning and Anandi stops him and says "Its not at all your fear to have caring for me...😉I was went to Shiv's home for dinner.."

Jagya again questions her "After sagai you must not do like this right...?" Anandi gives him a anger look 😡and says "I have some work so please leave me..." she goes into her room and close the door... Jagya was still in confused state why Anandi said yes to marry him(Shiv)...

Anandi thinks and ask to her by seeing the mirror 🥱" Why i have said to DS like that... Why i cant answers jagya's question... not even i cant see him as a person..." She lies on the bed... cool freeze teases her... She remembers Shiv's song and his dance... She remember each and every line of song and excites to herself "Why i am this much important to him..."

Shiv's Circuit House...

Shiv enters his room...He is in a mind of something he has achieved today... He too remembers the moment he spend a few hours before and says.." 😳😳Wow Shiv what happened to you... never you have done like this...what the family will think about you and think what will Anandi will think about you..."

An image appears in Mirror It was Shiv's(mind) wearing White shirt and says " Oh my dear Shiv you are in love that too you cant realise... 😃Love only have this nature which will make a person to behave like this..." Shiv beats his head by realizing all and sleeps...⭐️⭐️

Next day morning...

Shiv's phone rings... Shiv was in washroom... so he asks her mom to attend the phone... Shiv's mom takes the phone and see it was Anandi... She wink herself and attends the phone... Anandi says "Collector sahab today we have a meeting about the canal development are you ready for that???" She waits for the reply but no reply in other side so again she tells "Collector sahab are you listening...??"

Shiv's mom replies " Not Collector sahab his mom is on the line..." Anandi smiles and wishes her and says " where is Collector sahab??" Shiv's mom says the situation and ask her to call later and cuts the phone... Shiv's mom says to everyone in the home about Anandi still calling him "Collector Sahab" so today we will make this reverse...

Shiv comes to dinning table for breakfast... All was silent and he notices it... Dadu ask "Collector Sahab😉 why are you getting ready so early..." shiv was little surprised that Dadu is calling him Collector Sahab and replies "Today an important meeting about the canal development...so only..."

Shiv's mom interfere and says "Yeah collector sahab😉 Sarpanchji also said the same and questioned that are you ready for the meeting..." Again he noticed that his mom also calling him CS(collector sahab)... Shiv ask "When did she called??" Shiv's dad replies " Collector Sahab😉 when you was in washroom that time only she called you.." Shiv was totally confused why these guys was playing like this and asks them "what happen today why all are calling me like this (CS)???"

Shiv's mom come closer to him and says " Just we are kidding but the person who is going to marry you is still calling you like this only know... when is going to change Shiv i mean CS..."👏 Shiv gets her words and says "Soon it will change mom you dont worry..." Meanwhile he sees the time and excuse all and he goes to jeep... He remembers his mom's word and thought of saying to Anandi but... how...???? lot of questions he leave the place...

In Collector Office...

Meeting was going... Shiv thought of make realising Anandi not to call him CS he got an idea... In the meeting Shiv explained about the development and whenever he need to say about Anandi he mentioned as "Sarpanchji"...😲😲 Anandi sees and confuses herself " Why he was saying today newly which is never happened before..."

Meeting finishes... Anandi goes to Shiv's room and ask him " Collector Sahab!!! Is everything alright??? Any problem?? Did i did anything wrong???... 😭Shiv sees her and says to her " The answer is there in your statement itself..." He sees down to some file and smiles... Anandi cant understand and ask him again...Bheem singh interfere and says about the inspection going to be held in Anandi's school by this week... Anandi was so happie and sees Shiv but Shiv was not at all in the mood of enjoyment and Shiv ask BS to send the copy of the order to the Sarpanchji...

Anandi was in the edge of insultion and shouts at Shiv " Why are behaving like this..???" Shiv replied with little anger(he tried to be anger) " Is there anything important than this if else can you leave the place now i have lot of work..." Anandi was depressed by hearing these words...

Shiv thought that he had hurted her... Anandi leaves the room with face down... She remembers yesterday incident and questions herself " how much different for yesterday and today..."

While she crossing his jeep out of Collector office She remember " last night we both was happie but what happen today... Nothing going to be last for life long..." Shiv comes back of her and says " But I will be there for life long " Anandi was excited and thinks " How he answered the question which she think not even she said it out..??"

Shiv come near her and says "Sarpanchji You have a great confusion why i am behaving like this right..???" Anandi nod her head and ask " what happen like this Collector Sahab you to get anger on me...??" Shiv smiles at her move close to her and says " This what the mistake.. You have came here to see the "Collector sahab" not "Shiv" so only i called you "Sarpanchji" not Anandi from that you can realize the different..."

Shiv explains happened in morning at his home... Anandi smiles and says " I was totally feared because of your sudden change in behaviour Collector sahab(She bites her tongue).." Shiv give him a naughty look... Anandi says " Will try to call your Name"...

The same way he tried to Sumitra he ask Anandi to call him "Shiv"... Anandi tries but she was not... Shiv eagerly waiting for her words... Anandi replies "No I cant..." Shiv says "Ok Sarpanchji... Its getting late go and get ready for the Inspection..." Anandi looks at him with mischevious look and says..."Ok Collector Sahab(naughtyly) I leave now..." She moves from there...

Shiv stands there and says " She must be a mad... making me mad of her..." Suddenly he watches that Anandi stops and turn over him and says "Bye Shiv!!!!" Shiv was superexcited that he had made it...

Anandi smiles and walk towards the school... Shiv enters into his room...


Precap: Inspection in Anandi's School... Great Surprise waiting for Shiv and Anandi...

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