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me me me me me
want update
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amazing update...

maan drunk on his wedding night...poor geet...

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Chapter 2


Maan poured drink in glass

Maan : See this glass was for milk ...wedding nite ka custom hai na ...to hav milk..but I hate...but if we hav to drink some thing why not which we like. rite if me like this bottle u also like coz u r my wife..right Geet (he laughed aloud)

Geet : Maan plz u already hav drunk plz let it go (she got up to take glass from his hand)

Maan : Geet stay there..I say stay there..I m coming to u darling

Drunk Maan takes glass and sits next to scared Geet on bed. Placed glass on her hand

Geet : Maan what u r doing

Maan : What ? Tumhare saamne hai...drink it ...

Geet : R u mad Maan how can I ..shaddi ki pehli raat ko aap mujhe yeh de rahe hai (she was about to place glass on side table but Maan grabbed it )

Maan : I think it is good to start today...roz pinni hai to aaj se he sahi (he taunts) okey half half...Let me drink first and u hav to drink remaining

He drinks half in one breath and leaves half.Forcibly made Geet to drink.But she throws glass away.In between huge walls of KM had absorbed noise of breaking glass


Maan : Geet yeh kya kiya tumne (yelled)

Geet : Maan aaj hamari shaddi ki pehli raat hai...jiske har ladki sapne dekhti hai ...per mere sath kya kar rahe hai aap (tears rolled down from her eyes)

Maan : Ha aaj hamari shaddi ki pehli raat hai..suhaag raat..haina Geet..lets celebrate it ..ussi tarah jaise tumne bhi sapna dekha hoga (he grabbed Geet from arm and pushed her back to bed )

He drinks remaining drink in bottle...Geet was shivering looking at Maan's red blooded eyes.

Geet : Why r u doing this Maan...(she said in hesitation )

Maan : What me doing ... making my self ready for SR...at least thodi energy honi chaahea...shaddi k rituals nibhate nibhate ..main tired ho gaya hu so this drink has boasted me up

He again grabbed Geet from arm and made her stand in front of him. Removed her Dupatta first.Shocked Geet was standing like statue what to do what to say she was not aware.But when Maan tried to remove her ear ring sudden pain brought her back.

Geet : Maan I m ur wife plz leave me (she pleaded)

Maan : Geet hamari shaddi hue hai now SR bhi hogi na ...challo its already more than 3 (he pulled her toward bed)

Maan forcibly removed her all jewelry .She tried to resist but no effect no body was there to hear her.

Maan : Waise aab tumhari dress main utaaru or u gonna undress me first..ha Geet bolo (he jerked her) okey undress me first...

But she was sobbing


Geet : kyo kar rahe hai aap aisa...(she jerked his hands )

Maan : Ek he question fir se..okey let me undress u first agar tumko sharam aa rahi hai (he shrugged shoulders)



Maan untied her dori hugging him tightly in his arms and unzipped her kurti

Geet : Maan leave me chodiye mujhe (screaming she said)

Maan : Not now Geet let first make love (before he can remove her unzipped Kurti ..he made her head lay on back and placed her head on pillow)


He started to kiss her passionately.Her bare belly ..neck...cheeks and then reached her lips.She was rubbing her legs on bed sheet but no effect on him. Holding her arms tightly he placed his perfect crafted M shaped lips on Geet's rosy soft lips and started to extract sweetness.They were in this lip to lip kiss position for much time against Geet's desire. When Maan felt he has extracted all juices he stopped himself

Maan : Geet how is this...its just start I promise u ll enjoy to fullest (her lips had started to show signs of swelling)

When she tried to get up Maan again pushed her.

Geet : I hav too much pain in my lips Maan

Maan : I m really very sorry dear ...aab aisa nahi karta plz actually sharab ka asar jayada ho gaya na isliye but I ll not do it again okey (he cupped her face and kissed her cheeks ...hugged her lovingly )

She also felt relived..thought it is really effect of over drinking.

Geet : its okey Maan per aab aap aisa mat karna

Maan : Okey but hum SR to manna sakte hai na ..kyo (he had smile on his lips .behaving like perfect gentleman )


Geet she gav him silent permission with putting eyes down.Maan slowly removed her already unzipped Kurti.Geet covered her bare upper body with crossing arms .After some time she was just in inners.All cloths were on floor.


She slipped comforter over her but Maan he snatched it.

Maan : Sharam aa rahi hai apne he pati se (teased)

Geet few minutes back she was under shock now she was red under effect of same Maan's loving behavior.Not even thought once...why was he behaving so.


Geet : Maan mujhe sach main ..(not able to say more..she was feeling shy )

Maan started to place soft kisses on all over her body...She was feeling strange sensation in her nerves. May be never felt like this in her whole life

Maan : Geet I ll giv u that much lov today u ll remember (said in his husky voice near to her ear which made her more mad)

Geet : I lov u Maan...I m in lov with u from time when I saw u first time in a function. Mujhe nahi pata tha meri kismat itni acchi hogi (she opened up )

Maan : Becoz u r extra ordinary Geet sabse alag ho ..Issi liye Maan Singh Khuraana tumhari kismat ban k aaya hai (saying this he kissed her eyes )


Geet kissed him back .Even her lips had swelling but she forget every bad behavior Maan did with her.He removed her whole cloths .She had no more hesitation.She was replying him back.

Geet : Maan lov me ..I m craving


Maan : Geet even me has same feelings ...lets get united for ever Geet.

Geet unbuttoned of his Sherwani .Maan thew it on floor.But just his upper body was bare .
Maan : Geet look at me dekho na meri taraf . (Geet whose eyes was down looking at Maan's well built body hugged Maan tightly without wasting an moment )


But what Maan did.Instead of hugging her back he jerked her off and pushed her on floor.

Geet : Maan kya hua aapko abhi ti aap theek thay fir kya hua aab (totally naked Geet was looking at Maan blankly not able to get why he did so )

Maan : Kya hua...kush nahi Geet...mujhe tumko hug karke wo mehsoos nahi hua jo ek partner ko mehsoos hona chaahea..tum Maan Singh Khuraana k layak nahi Geet..u may hav great body but not that charm which can put effect on me .(Maan got up from bed put his Sherwani again and leaves room)


Shocked Geet was not able to understand what happened.When she found herself naked she pulled comforter from bed and wrapped around her. Even she was not able to cry .Sudden torture by Maan...then lov now again rejection coz she isn't of his type.If he not liked her why he did this .Why he married her.


For a girl this is biggest insult if husband rejects her.And if girl is Geet.who is complete in each and every aspect

Geet : What happened with me.Why Maan did this (she screamed )

Some how controlled herself and got up from floor.again put on her same dress which lil time back Maan removed.

On other hand Maan he was standing alone in a lonely corner

Maan : Main aaj tak tanha raha hu...aur aab se Geet ko bhi is tanhai ka hissa banana hoga (st)


Maan why he wanted to make her part of his loneliness only ke knows.Geet she was crying sitting on floor and in same position she went in sleep.


When she got up it was about 8.Nobody was around not even Maan was back in room.Where was he.She got up but was not in that condition to go out in such get up so she takes a dress from her beg and changes after shower without any high spirits a newly wed girl should hav always.



When she came out of room she found neither Maan nor Daddi.Where were they she was shocked.For a newly wed bride what could b more shocking what happened with her






Searching here and there in this royal palace she found a servant dusting doors

Geet : Suniye...

Servant : Ji Mam

Geet : Wo Daddi Maa aur Maan kaha hai

Servant : Mam I think u was sleeping .Jab London se Daddi Maa ki bhabi ka phone aaya...Her brother is ill...Unka visa to pehle he lag gaya tha.Per apki shaddi ki wajah se wo 4-5 din baad jaane walli thi but it is emergency so she left in hurry Maan Sir unke sath airport gaye hai ...(he said and moved)

Geet : Whats happening pehle Maan ka yeh behavior aur aab Daddi Maa aise chali gayi...(thinking Geet moved toward living area)




Hop u ll like plz giv ur comments and likes we r waiting

Lov


Sonia 😃



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Edited by Jass.KN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan😡 why are you hurting Geet for no fault of her...
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WHY DID MAAN HURT HER AND SHAME HER SO MUCH
WHAT IS HIS PROBLEM
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Posted: 12 years ago
I want a strong geet who will give it back for each insult she got from maan...

no amount of personal grief give any one the right to behave this cheap n low with someone...

this maan is simply bas****
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love this update mohita
and u already know y
hehehehe
awesome update
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
i hope he realized he misbehaved

do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
me eagerly waiting for update😊

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