OS - When You Say Nothing At All - Page 6

Originally posted by: BlueMystique

So I finally got out of the evil clutches of my manager! Whoo hoo!

I am so sorry it took so long! Kan pakad ke maafi maang rahi hoon!

I love it!!!!!

It's a wonder how much you can make me feel, with such little dialogue. I have always been the sort of person who prefers lots and dialogue, if only for the fact that the back and forth communication often times expresses a lot. Which is probably why I have still not been able to read LOTR! LOL!

But this time, i can honestly say that i loved the descriptiveness of it. Because much of ArHi's communication lies in unsaid words and you portrayed that beautifully!

Muah! Continue soon babe!

Oh! And I love you dammit!

Goosebumps all over

Pankti, my God what a fantabulous OS

Pankti why aren't there more oneshots for me to read!

That was beautiful. You captured their relationship wonderfully in this one-shot, conveying the stage of love they have reached so well I could see it happening before my eyes: Arnav thinking about Khushi and then the sweet phone-call, then seeing her, blushing and then catching each other looking- that moment when they say nothing at all, but the intensity of the feelings shown in their eyes just said it all.

Then Khushi hesitantly going to see him and what followed after was so realistic, if we pretend the nuns from Star Plus don't exist LOL. The yet unexplored passion that simmers under the surface, the shyness and hesitancy now that they've both confessed was all conveyed beautifully. I think you got the essence of the relationship presented here really, really well.

I also loved the way you described Khushi in such detail that I could picture it very clearly in my head. I think you got the right balance between description and narration so you conjured a very vivid picture for the reader.

It was wonderful and you should write some more for greedy readers like me ;P

Anaya xxx

Beautiful. Just beautiful. I'll probabally ruin it if I say anything more. the song was perfect and so were the scenes. You really should start an FF or something because have immense talent and I would love to read it. BTW would you please PM about your futre works, if its not too much of a hassle and thanks for providing me the link to this OS.